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IR Essay: Feedback on Stages 1, 2, & 3
Stage 1
What I looked for:
• Indication of engagement with intro reading – important factors mentioned
which you should find out more about (colonialism, geography, economics,
population etc.)
• Attempt to use advanced Google search modifiers
• Balance of broad (catch ‘big fish’) and specific search terms (more efficient)
Where people went right:
• Application of advanced Google search modifiers
• Restriction of scope to period under consideration – 18th century,
1750…1850
Stage 1
Where I think people went wrong What to do about it
Not thinking about the set question
Including irrelevant searches
 Take time to unpack the question
 Keep focus on origins of Ind. Rev.
Not reading instructions and criteria
Not giving 10 searches
Ensure you understand the task requirements
and criteria for success before you begin
Check you have achieved these after you
finish
Stage 2
What I looked for:
• Range of reasons to accept/reject resources across the set
• All resources given consideration
• Balance of introductory and in-depth/scholarly material
• Clear explanation for choice and decision to keep/reject
• Sophisticated, error-free writing
Where people went right:
• Considerations of titles, dates, publishers, authority of author/presenter
• Balance of different sorts of resources
• Clear decisions
Stage 1
Where I think people went wrong What to do about it
Not editing work Take time to edit your work before submission
Have someone proof it for you
Not reading through the list before making their
decisions
 Take time to get the whole picture
Misunderstanding the nature of works Ensure you treat and describe resources
accurately
Applying selection criteria more appropriate to
st. 3
Consider the different elements you’re to
assess in st. 2 and st. 3
Spurious reasoning for rejecting resources Think through reasons carefully and/or ask
someone else if it makes sense
Stage 3
What I looked for:
• Evidence of scanning resources
• Consideration of multiple +/- factors for a resources
• Sophisticated, error-free writing
• Balance of introductory and advanced resources
Where people went right:
• Showed awareness of need for scholarly material even if it is challenging to
read
• Showed awareness of own preferences for learning material format
• Made it clear if keeping/rejecting a resource
Stage 3
Where I think people went wrong What to do about it
Not scanning resources  Take time to read intro, TSs, conclusion
 Check for contents, index, tables, figures
Not reading instructions and criteria Ensure you understand the task requirements
and criteria for success before you begin
Check you have achieved these after you
finish
Not editing work Take time to edit your work before submission
Have someone proof it for you
Repeating reasons for stage 2 choice
Considering a narrow set of selection criteria
 Consider the different elements you’re to
assess in st. 2 and st. 3
Not considering resources in light of the specific
question
 As you scan, look out for material on causes,
factors, origins of Ind. Rev.

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Feedback on stages 1 3 of ir essay

  • 1. IR Essay: Feedback on Stages 1, 2, & 3
  • 2. Stage 1 What I looked for: • Indication of engagement with intro reading – important factors mentioned which you should find out more about (colonialism, geography, economics, population etc.) • Attempt to use advanced Google search modifiers • Balance of broad (catch ‘big fish’) and specific search terms (more efficient) Where people went right: • Application of advanced Google search modifiers • Restriction of scope to period under consideration – 18th century, 1750…1850
  • 3. Stage 1 Where I think people went wrong What to do about it Not thinking about the set question Including irrelevant searches  Take time to unpack the question  Keep focus on origins of Ind. Rev. Not reading instructions and criteria Not giving 10 searches Ensure you understand the task requirements and criteria for success before you begin Check you have achieved these after you finish
  • 4. Stage 2 What I looked for: • Range of reasons to accept/reject resources across the set • All resources given consideration • Balance of introductory and in-depth/scholarly material • Clear explanation for choice and decision to keep/reject • Sophisticated, error-free writing Where people went right: • Considerations of titles, dates, publishers, authority of author/presenter • Balance of different sorts of resources • Clear decisions
  • 5. Stage 1 Where I think people went wrong What to do about it Not editing work Take time to edit your work before submission Have someone proof it for you Not reading through the list before making their decisions  Take time to get the whole picture Misunderstanding the nature of works Ensure you treat and describe resources accurately Applying selection criteria more appropriate to st. 3 Consider the different elements you’re to assess in st. 2 and st. 3 Spurious reasoning for rejecting resources Think through reasons carefully and/or ask someone else if it makes sense
  • 6. Stage 3 What I looked for: • Evidence of scanning resources • Consideration of multiple +/- factors for a resources • Sophisticated, error-free writing • Balance of introductory and advanced resources Where people went right: • Showed awareness of need for scholarly material even if it is challenging to read • Showed awareness of own preferences for learning material format • Made it clear if keeping/rejecting a resource
  • 7. Stage 3 Where I think people went wrong What to do about it Not scanning resources  Take time to read intro, TSs, conclusion  Check for contents, index, tables, figures Not reading instructions and criteria Ensure you understand the task requirements and criteria for success before you begin Check you have achieved these after you finish Not editing work Take time to edit your work before submission Have someone proof it for you Repeating reasons for stage 2 choice Considering a narrow set of selection criteria  Consider the different elements you’re to assess in st. 2 and st. 3 Not considering resources in light of the specific question  As you scan, look out for material on causes, factors, origins of Ind. Rev.