This document summarizes revisions made across 4 drafts of a magazine cover design. The key changes included making the masthead bolder and adding shadows to make it stand out more, adding glows and transparency to cover lines and headlines to increase readability, balancing design elements, and removing distracting patterns and words to better suit the target audience. The final draft was praised for having a masthead, headline, and cover lines that stood out while maintaining an exciting and celebrity-focused overall design.

1. Front Cover Development

2. 1st DraftMasthead not bold enough, it needs to be made bigger and jump forward from the page more.

3. Cover lines don’t stand out enough, easily missed at first glance.

4. The WIN circle is the most noticeable thing on the page needs to be more transparent.

5. Picture too dark for the plain black headline.