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PERFORMANCE PROJECT
   DAWN ROSEVEAR
        3-505
SNORE!
THERE’S NO SPARK

 Several students in my class were not motivated to write. I wanted
them to be engaged; I wanted them to love writing! Since motivation
is difficult to measure I decided to look at engagement and stamina.

 Goal: 100% of targeted groups will increase their
independent writing stamina to 40 minutes by June.
FEELINGS DOCTOR

 To start my research, I gave my students a Writing Interest
Survey. The survey asked students to rate their feelings about writing
and the writing process.
THE SURVEY SAYS

 Students wanted to see more, high quality, mentor texts.
 Some students were embarrassed of other students reading their
writing.
 Students wanted additional supplies to
use during Writing Workshop.
 Most students wanted to use computers.
 Students struggled most with, generating
ideas, spelling, punctuation, revising and editing.
TIME KEEPS ON TICKIN’
I chose 9 students to focus on during my research. These students
had little to no writing stamina so I conducted a Writing
Engagement Assessment to see what they were doing during
writing.

I monitored their behavoir at 5, 10, 20, and 30 minutes and here is
what I found…
ENGAGEMENT: 5 MINUTES

      Writing Behaviors


                          3 Engaged
                          3 Teacher Assistance
                          2 Day Dreaming
                          Other
ENGAGEMENT:10 MINUTES

      Writing Behaviors



                           6 Engaged
                          1 Talking
                          2 Day Dreaming
ENGAGEMENT: 20 MINUTES

       Writing Behaviors


                           5 Engaged
                           2 Day Dreaming
                           1 Teacher Assistance
                           1 Other
ENGAGEMENT: 30 MINUTES

       Writing Behaviors


                           3 Engaged
                           4 Day Dreaming
                           1 Talking
                           1 Teacher Assistance
YEAH, SO?

 The Engagement Assessment allowed me to look at my students more critically.
Instead of seeing them as, “off task,” I was able to understand why they were off
task. I discovered that:
 Some students were unsure how to carry the mini lesson back to their seats.
 Some students desired teacher approval at multiple times to motivate
themselves.
 A couple students do not ask for helpo when it is needed and will
sit, unproductive, unless they are approached.
NOW WHAT!?
 Based on the data that I collected from the Interest Survey and the Engagement
Assessment, I knew I had to increase motivation and writing supports. I made the
following changes to Writing Workshop during our realistic fiction unit.
       • I posted my daily teaching point in the classroom.
       • I gave each writing table a folder with resources.
       • Students created their own assignments.
       • More mentor texts were available.
       • Spelling concerns were addressed by telling students to give a word, “their best
         shot,” circle it, then move on.
       • Special writing implements were provided. (Fancy Pens!)
       • Students mad About the Author Blurbs for the back of their Realistic Fiction
         books.
10
 8
 6
 4   Engaged
 2   Day Dreaming
 0   Talking
     Teacher Assistance
     Other
IF I KNEW THEN WHAT I
      KNOW NOW…

If I continue this work next year I would:
• Use the Narrative Continuum
I LOVE MY CLASS!

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Writing Engagement

  • 1. PERFORMANCE PROJECT DAWN ROSEVEAR 3-505
  • 3. THERE’S NO SPARK  Several students in my class were not motivated to write. I wanted them to be engaged; I wanted them to love writing! Since motivation is difficult to measure I decided to look at engagement and stamina.  Goal: 100% of targeted groups will increase their independent writing stamina to 40 minutes by June.
  • 4. FEELINGS DOCTOR  To start my research, I gave my students a Writing Interest Survey. The survey asked students to rate their feelings about writing and the writing process.
  • 5. THE SURVEY SAYS  Students wanted to see more, high quality, mentor texts.  Some students were embarrassed of other students reading their writing.  Students wanted additional supplies to use during Writing Workshop.  Most students wanted to use computers.  Students struggled most with, generating ideas, spelling, punctuation, revising and editing.
  • 6. TIME KEEPS ON TICKIN’ I chose 9 students to focus on during my research. These students had little to no writing stamina so I conducted a Writing Engagement Assessment to see what they were doing during writing. I monitored their behavoir at 5, 10, 20, and 30 minutes and here is what I found…
  • 7. ENGAGEMENT: 5 MINUTES Writing Behaviors 3 Engaged 3 Teacher Assistance 2 Day Dreaming Other
  • 8. ENGAGEMENT:10 MINUTES Writing Behaviors 6 Engaged 1 Talking 2 Day Dreaming
  • 9. ENGAGEMENT: 20 MINUTES Writing Behaviors 5 Engaged 2 Day Dreaming 1 Teacher Assistance 1 Other
  • 10. ENGAGEMENT: 30 MINUTES Writing Behaviors 3 Engaged 4 Day Dreaming 1 Talking 1 Teacher Assistance
  • 11. YEAH, SO?  The Engagement Assessment allowed me to look at my students more critically. Instead of seeing them as, “off task,” I was able to understand why they were off task. I discovered that:  Some students were unsure how to carry the mini lesson back to their seats.  Some students desired teacher approval at multiple times to motivate themselves.  A couple students do not ask for helpo when it is needed and will sit, unproductive, unless they are approached.
  • 12. NOW WHAT!?  Based on the data that I collected from the Interest Survey and the Engagement Assessment, I knew I had to increase motivation and writing supports. I made the following changes to Writing Workshop during our realistic fiction unit. • I posted my daily teaching point in the classroom. • I gave each writing table a folder with resources. • Students created their own assignments. • More mentor texts were available. • Spelling concerns were addressed by telling students to give a word, “their best shot,” circle it, then move on. • Special writing implements were provided. (Fancy Pens!) • Students mad About the Author Blurbs for the back of their Realistic Fiction books.
  • 13. 10 8 6 4 Engaged 2 Day Dreaming 0 Talking Teacher Assistance Other
  • 14. IF I KNEW THEN WHAT I KNOW NOW… If I continue this work next year I would: • Use the Narrative Continuum
  • 15. I LOVE MY CLASS!