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         Double Page Spread 1 & 2
Double Page Spread 1
1St   Draft
Layout
                        Article Title
                                                                                                                          I wanted to keep to the
                        I want to try and incorporate a Hollywood theme, because the double page spread is not only
Kicker                                                                                                                    traditional layout, which I
                        advertising their music, but also their fame/lives. Therefore, I want to use the font Campbell,
                                                                                                                          have seen from the double
Some magazines          because it is the font that most Hollywood perfume adverts use, also making the title
                                                                                                                          page spreads I have
have the kicker         feminine.
                                                                                                                          analysed. Therefore, I have
across the page,                                                                                                          put the picture on one side,
but I wanted it to                                                                                                        whilst leaving the text
be right under the                                                                                                        sections on the other. I
article title,                                                                                                            didn’t want to have too
because firstly, it                                                                                                       much text on the left side;
makes my double                                                                                                           therefore I have added the
                                                                                                                          by-line to the picture. The
page spread neat
                                                                                                                          side bar is at the bottom of
and easy to read
                                                                                                                          the body text, because
which would be                                                                                                            once the reader has
appealing to                                                                                                              finished reading the article
teenage girls,                                                                                                            and looking at the pictures,
because it would                                                                                                          they are then able to get a
not be                                                                                                                    deeper insight into
overpowering. Also                                                                                                        upcoming events that are
it gives the reader a                                                                                                     happening with Hannah
general insight into                                                                                                      and Louisa. The colour
what the article is                                                                                                       scheme would be much
                                                                                                                          lighter than the front cover,
about, which would
                                                                                                                          therefore I wanted to use
make them much
                                                                                                                          white as the background,
more interested in             By-line                                                                                    and pastel pink and add
reading the article.                                                                                                      aspects of silver and gold
                               The by-line would be it in italic, as italic creates an elegant look, which is what the
                                                                                                                          for the article title and by-
                               picture is conveying. But also, the italic enables the by-line to standout, which is
                                                                                                                          line, as it keeps to my
                               important, because if it wasn’t it would over shadowed by the picture, which is what the
                                                                                                                          teenage girl target
                               reader would first look at, rather than the by-line.
                                                                                                                          audience.
2nd Draft




• I really want the picture to cover the whole of the page, but leaving
  two little white boarders on the sides. But I can’t see the text, due
  to the background, therefore I have added a white box to make the
  body text readable
3rd Draft




•   I had to leave the idea of having both pictures cover the page, and so I have cropped the pictures
    and put them to one side, which is the conventional layout of a double page spread
•   Therefore, I have added the text on the white space, so it can be readable
4th Draft




•   I have gone back to using two separate images, and I have just changed the opacity of the boxes of text so the
    pages do not seem too crowded. The reason I have done this is because Draft 3’s layout is very simple, that this
    might not be eye-catching for my target audience, as they are usually drawn to unique and colourful designs
•   I have used the effect “difference” on the headlines, because I could not find a colour that matched the different
    colours in the background, but this effect creates vibrant colours, which are suited to my target audience
Feedback on Draft 4
• Everything is much more colourful, and eye-
  catching
• However, I do think that I haven’t followed the
  conventional style of a double page
  spread, and it does not look as professional as
  it could be.
Double Page Spread 2
1st Draft
Layout
I have used to separate images of the two separate images of the musicians that I am featuring,
because I wanted to capture their individual personalities to be able to show my readers what they are
truly like, as this is what they want to know.
I then added their separate pull quotes to each of the pictures, but just fro aesthetic purposes, I have
put a pull quote at the bottom, whilst the other pull quote is at the top




Pull Quotes
The pull quote I have chosen will be taken from the 1st double page spread’s article. And I will use a quote
from the article that stands out, and represents what the musician is like as a person or what the musician
wants the readers to know, so that there is a personal connection with the readers. Therefore, capturing my
target audiences attentions
Draft 2




•   Even though my target audience chose a differet picture, I wanted to try and see
    what it would be like if I used two separate images. And instead of using a long-
    shot like my first draft I have instead used a close-up and a medium close up,
    because I havent used those angles in my pictures yet.
Draft 3




•   I have chosen instead to use a single image with a two shot, instead of having two separate
    images. I have kept the close-ups because I wanted to capture my musicians having fun, and
    looking at the camera, so that the readers would feel they are more connected to the
    musicians. This will occur more when they read the pull quotes, which is made to look like
    the musicians are directly speaking to the readers.

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Drafts for dps 1 & 2 final

  • 1. 1st Draft, 2nd Draft and 3 rd Draft Double Page Spread 1 & 2
  • 3. 1St Draft
  • 4. Layout Article Title I wanted to keep to the I want to try and incorporate a Hollywood theme, because the double page spread is not only Kicker traditional layout, which I advertising their music, but also their fame/lives. Therefore, I want to use the font Campbell, have seen from the double Some magazines because it is the font that most Hollywood perfume adverts use, also making the title page spreads I have have the kicker feminine. analysed. Therefore, I have across the page, put the picture on one side, but I wanted it to whilst leaving the text be right under the sections on the other. I article title, didn’t want to have too because firstly, it much text on the left side; makes my double therefore I have added the by-line to the picture. The page spread neat side bar is at the bottom of and easy to read the body text, because which would be once the reader has appealing to finished reading the article teenage girls, and looking at the pictures, because it would they are then able to get a not be deeper insight into overpowering. Also upcoming events that are it gives the reader a happening with Hannah general insight into and Louisa. The colour what the article is scheme would be much lighter than the front cover, about, which would therefore I wanted to use make them much white as the background, more interested in By-line and pastel pink and add reading the article. aspects of silver and gold The by-line would be it in italic, as italic creates an elegant look, which is what the for the article title and by- picture is conveying. But also, the italic enables the by-line to standout, which is line, as it keeps to my important, because if it wasn’t it would over shadowed by the picture, which is what the teenage girl target reader would first look at, rather than the by-line. audience.
  • 5. 2nd Draft • I really want the picture to cover the whole of the page, but leaving two little white boarders on the sides. But I can’t see the text, due to the background, therefore I have added a white box to make the body text readable
  • 6. 3rd Draft • I had to leave the idea of having both pictures cover the page, and so I have cropped the pictures and put them to one side, which is the conventional layout of a double page spread • Therefore, I have added the text on the white space, so it can be readable
  • 7. 4th Draft • I have gone back to using two separate images, and I have just changed the opacity of the boxes of text so the pages do not seem too crowded. The reason I have done this is because Draft 3’s layout is very simple, that this might not be eye-catching for my target audience, as they are usually drawn to unique and colourful designs • I have used the effect “difference” on the headlines, because I could not find a colour that matched the different colours in the background, but this effect creates vibrant colours, which are suited to my target audience
  • 8. Feedback on Draft 4 • Everything is much more colourful, and eye- catching • However, I do think that I haven’t followed the conventional style of a double page spread, and it does not look as professional as it could be.
  • 11. Layout I have used to separate images of the two separate images of the musicians that I am featuring, because I wanted to capture their individual personalities to be able to show my readers what they are truly like, as this is what they want to know. I then added their separate pull quotes to each of the pictures, but just fro aesthetic purposes, I have put a pull quote at the bottom, whilst the other pull quote is at the top Pull Quotes The pull quote I have chosen will be taken from the 1st double page spread’s article. And I will use a quote from the article that stands out, and represents what the musician is like as a person or what the musician wants the readers to know, so that there is a personal connection with the readers. Therefore, capturing my target audiences attentions
  • 12. Draft 2 • Even though my target audience chose a differet picture, I wanted to try and see what it would be like if I used two separate images. And instead of using a long- shot like my first draft I have instead used a close-up and a medium close up, because I havent used those angles in my pictures yet.
  • 13. Draft 3 • I have chosen instead to use a single image with a two shot, instead of having two separate images. I have kept the close-ups because I wanted to capture my musicians having fun, and looking at the camera, so that the readers would feel they are more connected to the musicians. This will occur more when they read the pull quotes, which is made to look like the musicians are directly speaking to the readers.