Rough cut of title sequence

1. Evaluating the RoughCut

2. The success of
the title
sequence as a
whole…
Strengths
 The order of shots makes
sense.
 The location fit to our
sequence.
Weaknesses
 The order is not to the same as
we planned as we missed out a
lot of the shots.
 Our title sequence does not
give the audience enough clues
as to what the film could be
about.
 It is not very engaging for the
viewer.
 We were supposed to have a
split screen so you can see the
contrast between the two
characters social background
better.

3. Quality of
camera work…
Strengths
 We used a variety of shot
types.
Weaknesses
 Very shaky camera work due
to incorrect resources.
 The camera was also not
straight throughout most of
the sequence.
 As we did use the zoom on
the camera, sometimes the
shots would get slightly
blurred and out of focus.

4. Variety of
shots used…
Strengths
 We used a variety of shots
throughout.
 The use of match cuts also
made the sequence more
visually interesting.
 We used: over the shoulder;
mid-shot; wide-shot and
close-ups.
Weaknesses
 We did not use all of that
shots that we included on the
story board.
 The shots didn't fit
seamlessly enough.

5. Use of
lighting…
Strengths
 The lighting is good and
consistent throughout as we
mainly used natural lighting.
Weaknesses
 We could of use different
types of lighting to make our
sequence more visually
interesting.

6. Performance
of the
characters…
Strengths
 The characters stayed
professional throughout.
Weaknesses
 However, the actresses could
have acted more like the
character they are playing.

7. Use of the
mise-en-scene
Strengths
 The location we filmed in fit
our sequence.
 The costume used matches
with the personality and look
of the character.
 Our costumes were based on
the correct stereotypes.
Weaknesses
 We could’ve used more props
to give a clue to what our film
is going to be about.