2. Youtube
The review states that the title which I superimposed on an opening
scene was difficult to read. Also that the font used wasn’t adequate
I have changed the font that I used and created a sequences
which fits in with the genre, and also I have made the background
black whenever there is any titles in order for it to be easier to read
3. Youtube
There is critisicm with regards to the sound and the fact that it is
somewhat loud
I have remedied this by using lower volumes of sound during the
mentioned scenes and structured sound in order for it to create
tension
4. Sound recordings
I have shown the footage that I have edited and have received
numerous reviews via Whatsapp voice notes, I have noted below
the main points made:
Positive(I should keep): the editing was adequate and fast paced
which adds to the excitement
The use of locations was very effective in relation to the storyline
The props used at the stick up scene was very realistic and it looks
professional
5. Negatives( I will change)
the storyline wasn’t relayed well at the beginning
The music that was used was too repetitive and monotonous
the release date at the end was boring and bland
6. Conclusion
I have decided on many changes especially with the sound and
the ancillary text, ive already shot enough footage to allow me to
make changes without anymore filming
