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PROPS
FADE FROM BLACK.
IN A DARK ALLEWAY.
THREE INDIVIDUALS ARE IN AN ALLEYWAYTOGETHER.ONE
INDIVIDUAL IS CALLED ZOE AND SHE IS PINNED DOWN TO
THE FLOOR BY A PERSONCALLED HANNAH.WHEREAS THE
THIRD PERSONCALLED DANIELLE WATCHES ZOE.
DANIELLE:IT’S NOT TOO LATE,YOU KNOW. (DANIELLE
PROCEEED TO STARE DOWN AT ZOE AS SHE LEAN AGAINST
THE WALL OF THE ALLEYWAY.)
ZOE: NOT TOO LATE FOR WHAT?(ZOE TRIES TO RAISE HER
HEAD SLIGHTLYBUT DANIELLE STAMP ONHER HEAD TO
BRING IT DOWN TO THE GROUND. )
DANIELLE:TO CONFESS YOUR CRIMES.IF YOU DECIDE TO
DO IT NOW, I’LL MIGHT LET YOU OFF THE HOOK.
ZOE: (TAKE A DEEP BREATH AND EXHALE IN SLIGHT PAIN)
FINE I DID IT. IT WAS ME THAT RATTLED MICHAEL OUT TO
THE COPS.(UPOM HEARING THIS,THE TWO MAFIA
MEMBERS EXCHANGEDEYE CONTACT WITH EACH OTHER
AS DANIELLE GIVES THE SIGNAL HANNAH. HANNAH
PROCEEDS TO GET A BAT WITH NAILS STAMPED INTO IT OUT
OF HER JACKET.ZOE CATCHES A GLIMPSEOF THIS.)
ZOE: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! YOU’RE TAKING BACK YOUR
WORD.(HANNAH READYTHE BAT INTO POSITIONAS SHE
WAIT FOR THE SIGNAL FROM DANIELLE.)
CAMERA CUT TO DANIELLE.
DANIELLE:(GET A CIGARETTEOUT OF HER POCKET AND
PUT CIGERATTE IN HER MOUTH) I NEVER SIGNED A
CONTRACT WITH YOU. (DANIELLE LIGHT UP HER
CIGERATTE AS SHE TAKES A PUFF. THIS IS THE SIGNAL
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THAT HANNAH IS WAITING FOR. BANGING SOUND IS HEARD
AS HANNAH SMASH ZOE’S HEAD.)
CAMERA CUT TO HANNAH.
HANNAH: I’LL GET THE BAGS AND YOU GET THE CAR READY.
HERE’S THE KEYS. (TOSS THE KEYS TO DANIELLE)
(DANIELLE CATCHES KEY, BUT A PHONE GOES OFF IN THE
DISTANCE,BOTH OF THEM TRACE THEIR EYES TOWARDS
THE NOISE COMING BEHIND THE TRASHCAN.BOTH
MEMBERS WALK TOWARDS THE TRASHCAN.)
(DANIELLE GET THERE FIRST AND GRABBED ONTOMARI’S
HAIR AND YANKED HER OUT BY HER HAIR AND PULLED HER
OUT FROM HER HIDING SPOT BEHIND THE TRASHCAN.MARI
SCREAMS IN PAIN WHILE SHE SHOUT INTO HER PHONE
THAT SHE IS HOLDING IN HER RIGHT HAND WHILE
STRUGGLING AGAINST HANNAH.)
MARIA:WILL, HELP ME! THEY’RE GOING TO KILL ME!
(DANIELLE PUT HER GLOVED HAND OVER HER MOUTH
WHILE HANNAH SNATCH MARI’S PHONE FROM HER HAND
AND HANGED UP. HANNAH TOSSES THE PHONE AWAY.)
*
CAMERA CUT TO WILL ENTERING HIS APARTMENT.(WILL
PLACE HIS GYMBAG IN THE PASSENGEWAY.WILL WALKED
INTO THE KITCHENAS HE GET HIS PHONE OUT FROM HIS
POCKET.WILL NOTICE HE HAVE A VOICEMAILAND DIALLED
THE NUMBER AND PUT THE PHONE ON SPEAKER AS HE
PLACED THE PHONE ON THE WORKTOP.)
(WILL PROCEED TO GET A GLASS AND FILL THE GLASS WITH
WATER AS HE PLACED IT UNDER THE TAP THAT BELONGED
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TO THE SINK. HIS HUMMING AND THE RUNNING WATER
CREATES A MOMENT OF CALM.BEFORE THE QUIETNESS IS
INTERRUPTED BY THE VOICEMAIL.)
VOICE MAIL:WILL, HELP ME! (WILL LOOK STARTLEDAND IN
A STATE OF SHOCK AS HE LISTENED TO THE VOICE MAIL. IN
A STATE OF PANIC,WILL DROP HIS GLASS INTO THE SINK
AND RUSHED TO HIS PHONE.)
(WILL PICKED UP HONE) WILL:MARI,WHAT’S WRONG!?!?
(WILL WAIT FOR AN ANSWER TILL HE REALISED THAT IT’S A
VOICEMAIL WHILE THEVOICEMAILCOME TO AN END.
(IN A STATE OF SHOCK,WILL STAND THERE IN SILENCE
WHILE HE LOOKS AT HIS PHONE. WILL PROCCEED TO RING
MARI AGAIN BUT IT GOES STRAIGHT TO VOICEMAIL.IN
RETURN WILL STARE AT HIS PHONE IN A NUMB STATE.
(THE PHONE BUZZ AND ON AN IMPULSE WILL ANSWER THE
CALL HOPING THAT IT’S MARI DESPITETHE CALLER ID
SAYING UNKOWN)
WILL:MARI?
UNKNOWN ID: NO THIS ISN’T MARI BUT I KNOW WHAT HAS
HAPPENED TO HER.
WILL:(WILL TAKE A DEEP BREAHE.)WHAT HAPPEN?
UNKOWN ID: MEMBERS OF A MAFIA THAT MY UNIT HAVE
BEEN KEEPING AN EYE ON FOR MONTHS HAVE KIDNAPPED
HER.
WILL:WHAT? WHO ARE YOU?
UNKNOWN ID: YOU CAN CALL ME IVAN AND I WORK WITH
THE POLICE.ARE YOU INTERESTED IN GETTING YOUR
GIRLFRIEND BACK IN ONE PIECE?
WILL:......YES I AM.
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UNKNOWN ID: BE READYTO MEET ME TOMNORROW THEN.
I’LL MESSAGE YOU THE DETAILS OF THE LOCATION.
(BEFORE WILL CAN SAY ANYTHING, IVAN HANG UP BUT A
MOMENT LATER WILL,LOOK AT HIS PHONE AGAINSINCE
HE HEARD A BUZZ SOUND FOR A MESSAGE.AS WILL LOOK
AT HIS PHONE HE SEES A MESSAGE THAT HAVE AN
ADDRESS IN IT.
*
CAMERA CUT TO IVAN SITTING AT HIS DESK AS HE NOTICED
WILL STANDING OUTSIDE THEIR OFFICE.(SARA WHOSE
SITTING ON IVAN’S DESK MOTIONED WILL TO COME IN WITH
HIS ROLLED UP NEWSPAPER.
(WILL ENTER BUT IS ON GUARD AS HE REFUSED IVAN’S
SIGNAL TO SIT DOWN ON THE CHAIR IN FRONT OF HIS DESK
WHILE IVAN SMILE IN AMUSEMENT WHILE SARA
CHUCKLES.)
DESMOND:WE’RE NOT YOUR ENEMIES,EX-OFFICER
GRAYSON.
WILL:TRUE BUT CONSIDERING YOU GUYS MUST HAVE
LOOKED AT MY FILES THAT STATED I USED TO BE A POLICE
OFFICER.IT PROVE TO ME THAT YOU GUYS CAN’T BE
TRUSTWORTHY.
IVAN: WELL I HOPE YOU GET WHY WE CALLED YOU IN NOW.
ANYWAYS LET CUT DOWNTO THE CHASE. (IVAN GESTURE
ONE LAST TIME AT THE CHAIR AND RECULTANTLYWILL
DECIDE TO SIT DOWN.)
WILL:WHERE’S MARI?
IVAN: SHE’S UNDER THE CUSTODYOF A MAFIA RUN BY A
TOP CRIMINAL CALLED JANE WILSON.
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(WILL’S EYES WIDENIN SHOCK.)
WILL:JANE WILSON?
IVAN: OH SHE WAS AROUND BACK IN YOUR TIMES AS A
POLICE OFFICER TOO?
WILL:THE MOST WANTED CRIMINAL IN MY TIMES AND
YOU’RE TELLING ME 6 YEARS LATER THAT SHE STILL
HASN’T GOT CAUGHT?(WILL GROW FRUSTATEDAND STAND
UP FROM HIS CHAIR,HE LEAN FORWARD WITH HIS HANDS
ON IVAN’S DESK WITH HIS FACE INCHES AWAYFROM IVAN’S
FACE.)
WILL:AND SHE HAS MARI IN HER CLUTCHES?
IVAN: NOW CALM DO-
(SARA CUT OFF IVAN AND LET OUT A WHISTLE)SARA:CALM
DOWN, LOVER BOY.
(WILL GRAB ON TO SARA’S NECKLACEAND PULLED HIS
FACE TOWARDS WILL.THEIR FACES ARE INCHES APART
FROM EACH OTHER AS THE TWO EXCHANGED EYE CONTACT
WITH EACH OTHER.)
WILL:CALL ME THAT AGAINAND I-
SARA: DO WHAT?(SARA SMIRK AT WILL AS WILL’S GRIP
TIGHTENED ONHER NECKLACE BEFORE IVAN
INTERRUPTED HIM.)
IVAN: IF YOU WANT TO SAVE YOUR GIRLFRIEND WILL,LET
GO OF DETECTIVE SARA RIGHT NOW OR I’LL ARREST YOU
FOR ATTEMPTEDASSAULT.
(WILL LET GO OF SARA’S NECKLACE AND PROCEED TO SIT
DOWN AGAINWHEREAS SARA JUST WATCHES HIM WITH A
SMIRK ON HER FACE WHILE IVAN LET OUT A COUGH TO
SIGNAL SARA TO BEHAVE HERSELF.)
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WILL:WELL WHAT’S YOUR PLAN THEN?
IVAN: WE WANT YOU TO WORK UNDER US AS OUR DOUBLE
AGENT THAT WILL INFLIRATE JANE’S MAFIA.ONCE YOUR
TRAINING IS COMPLETE WE CANBRING HER DOWN ONCE
AND FOR ALL.
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CAMERA CUT TO WILL.
(WILL ENTER THE ABANDONDIMLY LIT WAREHOUSE.HE
CAN SEE THE BRIEF OUTLINES OF TWO SILHOUTTES.THEN
A LIGHT ILLUMANITED THE WAREHOUSE THAT CAUSED
WILL TO SHUT HIS EYES FOR A MOMENT.WILL’S EYES
SQUINT FOR A MOMENT BEFORE HE OPEN HIS EYES TO SEE
JANE STANDING BEHIND A CHAIR. MARI IS TIED TO THE
CHAIR WITH A BLINDFOLD ON HER EYES.)
(WILL’S EYES WIDENIN SHOCK AS HE QUESTIONED JANE.)
WILL:WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?(WILL SHOUT AT MARI
BEFORE HE TAKES A STEP TOWARDS THEM.)
JANE: I WOULDN’T DO THAT IF I WERE YOU.
(WILL COME TO A STAND STILL AS HE SEE THE GUN IN
JANE’S HAND WHILE MARI RECOGNISED WILL’S VOICE.)
MARI; WILL?
(WILL TRY TO SAY SOMETHING BUT JANE PLACED THE GUN
ON MARI’S HEAD AND MARI BEGINTO WEEP OUT OF FRIGHT.
NOT HAVING A CHOICE WILL IS FORCED TO REMAIN
SILENT.)
JANE: OKAY NOW SHOOT HER BEFORE I’LL RUN OUT OF
PATIENCE AND KILL YOU BOTH.(JANE THROWS THE GUN AT
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WILL AND HE CATCHES,MARI START PANICKING AS SHE
TRASHES OUT OF HER CHAIR.)
(WILL NOTICE THE HANNAH AND DANIELLE STANDING
BEHIND HIM THAT HAVE APPEAREDOUT OF NOWHERE.)
MARI: PLEASE DON’T HURT ME! (MARI BEGIN TO SOB AS
WILL SHAKILYBRING UP THE GUN TO SHOOT HER.)
WILL:SORRY. (WILL SHOOT MARI IN THE KNEE.)
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CAMERA CUT TO WILL.
(WILL WALK INTO HIS HOUSE AND DUMP HIS BAG IN THE
CORRDIOR.)
WILL:CASSANDRA????
(WILL WALK INTO THE FRONT ROOM TO SEE CASSANDRA
LAYING ON THE FLOOR AND HE IS SHOCKED TO SEE MARI
STANDING IN FRONT OF HIM. MARI HOLDS A GUN POINTING
AT HIM.)
WILL:MARI? YOU’RE ALIVE?
MARI: YES I AM.
WILL:WAIT CALM DOWNAND WHAT DID YOU DO???? (WILL IS
TAKENABACK AS HE LOOKED AT THE KNOCKED OUT FORM
OF CASSANDRA.HOWEVER HE CANNOT SEE HER FACE
SINCE HER FACE IS FACED AWAYFROM HIM.)
MARI: SHE’S DEAD.
WILL:ARE YOU SERIOUS???
MARI: SIT DOWN,WILL.(SHE AIMED THE GUN AT HIM AND
MOTIONED HIM TO SIT DOWN ON THE SOFTA.)
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(WILL BEGIN TEARING UP BUT OBLIGED AS HE SIT DOWN ON
THE SOFTA.)
WILL:HOW ARE YOU ALIVE???YOU’RE SUPPOS-
(MARI CUT WILL OFF)
MARI: YOU GUESS WRONG.WHILE YOU WERE GOING OFF
WITH THIS SLUT, I WAS GOING THROUGH HELL.AND YOU
DIDN’T EVEN TRY TO RESCUE ME. SOME PRINCE CHARMING
YOU ARE.
(WILL BREAK DOWN INTO TEARS AS HE ATTEMPT TO SPEAK)
WILL:THAT’S BECAUSE I DIDN’T KNOW YOU WERE ALIVE.
MARI: THIS IS MY REVENGE FOR YOU LEAVING ME BEHIND
AND GOING OFF WITH THIS WHORE.