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Bellwork
                  "Reader response drives revision."
                                   - Kelly Gallagher

      One stage of writing is sharing & responding.
      WRITE 3-5 sentences about how a writer might
      use this to help their writing.
Today’s agenda
·Bellwork - Reader Response QUICK WRITE
·Think - Pair - Share Reader Response
·The Writing Process
·REV Vocabulary Survey Says
·Today's Menu
·Wrap Up




                        c
Think...Pair...Share
                       "Reader response drives revision."
                                        - Kelly Gallagher

          Think - You wrote answer down.
          Pair - Pair up with your shoulder
          partner
          Share - Share your answer...
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
The Writing Process
                      Writers
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
Which of the following behaviors would you
describe as maniacal?
·running around and yelling in   class
·swimming in very deep water
·laughing at a funny TV show
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
Which activity would you do painstakingly?
·writing a research report about rainforests
·telling a classmate the latest       gossip
·selecting a gift for a friend's birthday
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
Which person would you expect to have a
lilting voice?
·a sports announcer at a wrestling match
·a mother putting her child to   sleep
·a professional singer giving a  concert
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

In which setting is it important
to show refinement?
·at a concert
·at a school assembly
·at a restaurant
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

 Which situation would you describe as
 pedestrian?
 ·walking home from school
 ·standing in the lunch line in the cafeteria
 ·being chased by wolves in the forest
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

What would infuriate you?
·getting chosen last for a team
·finding out that you are a finalist in an art
contest
·not receiving an invitation to your best
friend's party
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
Which of these behaviors would you describe as
condescending?
·a friend who won't talk to you after an argument
·a friend who ignores you when his other friends are around
·a friend who refuses to notice you because you're wearing
pink socks
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
Which of the following would make you feel contrite?
·borrowing someone's favorite CD and then losing it
·cheering someone on in a basketball game
·telling someone that you dislike his or her new clothes
Questions?
On this date
After the resignation of the police chief, a small town in
New Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer:
______.
a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkins
b) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitano
            `

c) College intern Tommy Milchner
d) Some dog named Nikka
On this date
After the resignation of the police chief, a small town in New
Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer:
______.
a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkins
b) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitano
            `

c) College intern Tommy Milchner
d) Some dog named Nikka
Today’s menu
·Chicken Bites
·Whole Wheat Roll
·PB&J Uncrustable
·Specialty Salad
·Steamed Cauliflower
·Green Beans
·Seasonal Fresh Fruit
·Milk
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
How do responses help?
                         Does it?
REV Vocabulary - Survey Says
In which setting is it important to show refinement?
·at a concert
·at a school assembly
·at a restaurant
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10 04-2012 the writing process rev vocab continued

  • 1. Bellwork "Reader response drives revision." - Kelly Gallagher One stage of writing is sharing & responding. WRITE 3-5 sentences about how a writer might use this to help their writing.
  • 2. Today’s agenda ·Bellwork - Reader Response QUICK WRITE ·Think - Pair - Share Reader Response ·The Writing Process ·REV Vocabulary Survey Says ·Today's Menu ·Wrap Up c
  • 3. Think...Pair...Share "Reader response drives revision." - Kelly Gallagher Think - You wrote answer down. Pair - Pair up with your shoulder partner Share - Share your answer...
  • 4. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 6. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which of the following behaviors would you describe as maniacal? ·running around and yelling in class ·swimming in very deep water ·laughing at a funny TV show
  • 7. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which activity would you do painstakingly? ·writing a research report about rainforests ·telling a classmate the latest gossip ·selecting a gift for a friend's birthday
  • 8. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which person would you expect to have a lilting voice? ·a sports announcer at a wrestling match ·a mother putting her child to sleep ·a professional singer giving a concert
  • 9. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says In which setting is it important to show refinement? ·at a concert ·at a school assembly ·at a restaurant
  • 10. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which situation would you describe as pedestrian? ·walking home from school ·standing in the lunch line in the cafeteria ·being chased by wolves in the forest
  • 11. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says What would infuriate you? ·getting chosen last for a team ·finding out that you are a finalist in an art contest ·not receiving an invitation to your best friend's party
  • 12. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which of these behaviors would you describe as condescending? ·a friend who won't talk to you after an argument ·a friend who ignores you when his other friends are around ·a friend who refuses to notice you because you're wearing pink socks
  • 13. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says Which of the following would make you feel contrite? ·borrowing someone's favorite CD and then losing it ·cheering someone on in a basketball game ·telling someone that you dislike his or her new clothes
  • 15. On this date After the resignation of the police chief, a small town in New Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer: ______. a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkins b) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitano ` c) College intern Tommy Milchner d) Some dog named Nikka
  • 16. On this date After the resignation of the police chief, a small town in New Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer: ______. a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkins b) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitano ` c) College intern Tommy Milchner d) Some dog named Nikka
  • 17.
  • 18. Today’s menu ·Chicken Bites ·Whole Wheat Roll ·PB&J Uncrustable ·Specialty Salad ·Steamed Cauliflower ·Green Beans ·Seasonal Fresh Fruit ·Milk
  • 19. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 20. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 21. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 22. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 23. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 24. How do responses help? Does it?
  • 25. REV Vocabulary - Survey Says In which setting is it important to show refinement? ·at a concert ·at a school assembly ·at a restaurant