This is the feedback we received for the rough cut of our music video, and also the changes we made to improve it.

1. CLASS & TEACHER FEEDBACK ON
THE ROUGH CUT
IMPROVEMENTS MADE

2. IMPROVEMEN
T 1.
• The audience felt we spent too
much time on this shot in the
beginning of the video

3. To tackle this problem we cut
more to a mid-shot of the
singer and also placed an
effect over the beginning that
flashed in time with the music
and zoomed into the shot
more. This improved this
section.

4. IMPROVEMENT 2.
• The audience felt we needed more shot variety as these
were the main shots of the lead singer used throughout,
which made the video too repetitive.

5. To tackle this issue we included more of the layered shots that the audience appeared to like. As well as this,
we included more shots of instruments throughout the video. We also used more of a variety in the styles of
shot that we used.

6. IMPROVEMEN
T 3
The audience felt that the video
was too long and needed
shortening so that is maintained
their interest more.

7. To solve this problem, we cut out roughly the last 40 seconds
of the song.
These are the lyrics that were cut off the end.