Contents Page With Feedback Vs Without

1. In the previousslide you may not see many changes between the two
content pages however there are many. The contentspage on the
right is my final version where as the one on the left is my” final”
version without taking in mind my feedback from my peers. The main
comment I received was that the masthead and artists name was hard
to see as the font was to transparent. I added the drop shadow effect
so it stood out more. Thishelped a lot. In the bottom right I took out
the “irrelevant”text and addedin the name of my magazine which
was used to take up space and add color. As my images were not my
own I had to change the images to my own. As well as this I added in a
red outlineto the image that blend with my theme. Lastly the cover
lines/subheadingI added in a shadow effect that darkens the page in a
mysteriousway which portraysa rap look.