Dangling Modifiers
What is a Modifier? A word or phrase that adds on and gives extra details to other words, sentences, or clauses.  Modifiers should be physically close to the word or phrase that it is modifying.
Definition A dangling modifier is when the added detail is stated unclearly and confuses the reader.  These are unclear because they are  not  close to the word or phrase they are modifying.
Purpose It gives clarification when the sentence conveys a meaning to the reader that the writer did not intend.
Examples Dangling Modifier Having been smashed into pieces , he picked up the glass. Correctly Modified When the glass was smashed into pieces , he picked it up. The way the first sentence is phrased, it sounds confusing because the modifier isn’t near the phrase it’s supposed to modify. In the second sentence, the phrase being modified was moved right next to the modifier making the sentence correct.
More Examples After reading the study,  the article remains unconvincing After reading the study,  I find the article unconvincing The first sentence is phrased as if the article read the study and was unconvinced which is confusing to the reader because the correct phrase isn’t present. The corrected sentence is phrased with the modifier next to the subject it pertains to casing the sentence to make sense. Dangling Modifier Correctly Modified
Different ways to fix a Dangling Modifier This Dangling Modifier: Having been thrown in the air, the dog caught the ball. Can be corrected in the following ways: When the ball was thrown in the air, the dog caught it. The dog caught the ball after it was thrown in the air. The ball was thrown and the dog caught it.
Works Cited http://aliscot.com/bigdog/dangling.htm http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_dangmod.html http:// www.fictionfactor.com/articles/dangling.html

Dangling Modifiers

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    What is aModifier? A word or phrase that adds on and gives extra details to other words, sentences, or clauses. Modifiers should be physically close to the word or phrase that it is modifying.
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    Definition A danglingmodifier is when the added detail is stated unclearly and confuses the reader. These are unclear because they are not close to the word or phrase they are modifying.
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    Purpose It givesclarification when the sentence conveys a meaning to the reader that the writer did not intend.
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    Examples Dangling ModifierHaving been smashed into pieces , he picked up the glass. Correctly Modified When the glass was smashed into pieces , he picked it up. The way the first sentence is phrased, it sounds confusing because the modifier isn’t near the phrase it’s supposed to modify. In the second sentence, the phrase being modified was moved right next to the modifier making the sentence correct.
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    More Examples Afterreading the study, the article remains unconvincing After reading the study, I find the article unconvincing The first sentence is phrased as if the article read the study and was unconvinced which is confusing to the reader because the correct phrase isn’t present. The corrected sentence is phrased with the modifier next to the subject it pertains to casing the sentence to make sense. Dangling Modifier Correctly Modified
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    Different ways tofix a Dangling Modifier This Dangling Modifier: Having been thrown in the air, the dog caught the ball. Can be corrected in the following ways: When the ball was thrown in the air, the dog caught it. The dog caught the ball after it was thrown in the air. The ball was thrown and the dog caught it.
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    Works Cited http://aliscot.com/bigdog/dangling.htmhttp://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_dangmod.html http:// www.fictionfactor.com/articles/dangling.html