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Question Candidate 1-
Harriet
Candidate 2-
Hannah
Candidate 3-
Chloe
Candidate 4-
Daisy
Q1: doyou like the use
of black and white
filter when the female
protagonistisdancing?
The black and
white filter looks
effective as it
shows how the
actressis isolated.
Yes I think that this
filter makes sure
that the audience
understands the
contrasting lives of
the characters.
YeahIthinkthatitis
effective.
It helps the
audience to
understand the
two different
locations.
Q2: do you think the
storyline is clear?
Yes, although I
think that there
shouldbe apartin
the music video
where the male
character meets
someone at the
end to make the
audience feel
happier.
The storyline is
confusing because
when the
characters walk
past each other it’s
hard for the
audience to
understand why
this happened.
Yeah because there
is a huge
combination of
camera angles that
highlight the mood
and atmosphere.
Yeah the use of
specific shots has
enabled me to
understand what
is happening.
Q3: would you add
anymore events to
improve the storyline?
The meeting of a
new character to
keepthe audience
involved.
No, I think it is
simplisticandclear.
I would make sure
that there is an
introduction of
happiness towards
the end for the
male actor.
No as I like the
way it has a small
number of events
that are shown in
depth, instead of
having lots of
events and
allowing the
audience to not
understand.
Q4: is there anything
you would do to
improve the videoasit
is now?
I think that the
video is great but
the use of a fade
at the end would
be great.
I would include a
ghosting effect
when the female
dancer is singing to
add a different feel
to the video for the
audience.
I would include a
small groupof short
clipsto look back in
the past and
remind the
audience what has
happened.
I would reduce
the focus on the
male protagonist
bumping into
another man and
only use this as a
small part of the
narrative.

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Half way through feedback

  • 1. Question Candidate 1- Harriet Candidate 2- Hannah Candidate 3- Chloe Candidate 4- Daisy Q1: doyou like the use of black and white filter when the female protagonistisdancing? The black and white filter looks effective as it shows how the actressis isolated. Yes I think that this filter makes sure that the audience understands the contrasting lives of the characters. YeahIthinkthatitis effective. It helps the audience to understand the two different locations. Q2: do you think the storyline is clear? Yes, although I think that there shouldbe apartin the music video where the male character meets someone at the end to make the audience feel happier. The storyline is confusing because when the characters walk past each other it’s hard for the audience to understand why this happened. Yeah because there is a huge combination of camera angles that highlight the mood and atmosphere. Yeah the use of specific shots has enabled me to understand what is happening. Q3: would you add anymore events to improve the storyline? The meeting of a new character to keepthe audience involved. No, I think it is simplisticandclear. I would make sure that there is an introduction of happiness towards the end for the male actor. No as I like the way it has a small number of events that are shown in depth, instead of having lots of events and allowing the audience to not understand. Q4: is there anything you would do to improve the videoasit is now? I think that the video is great but the use of a fade at the end would be great. I would include a ghosting effect when the female dancer is singing to add a different feel to the video for the audience. I would include a small groupof short clipsto look back in the past and remind the audience what has happened. I would reduce the focus on the male protagonist bumping into another man and only use this as a small part of the narrative.