Planning and Pitching Presentation Environment

PLANNING AND PITCHING-PLANNING AND PITCHING-
ENVIRONMENT OF PRESENTATIONENVIRONMENT OF PRESENTATION
This apple mac is the computer I used
to complete all of my coursework for
my presentation/ pitch, also I used
the apple mac to upload my pitch to
prezi which allowed me to have an
organized presentation to present to
my class.
This area in this picture is where
my presentation was conducted.
This smart board is the monitor
that I used to present my
PowerPoint on, this made it
easier for myself as it allowed
me to have points that I could
read of the board

I used this slide changer to make it easier to
present my presentation as easy as possible this is
by not having to walk up to the computer after
every slide that I have presented, I just used the
slide changer which made my presentation better
and more professional.
The camera and tripod was what I used to
video myself presenting my presentation
to my class, this was done by placing the
camera on to the tripod which this
prevented anyone having to hold the
camera for the duration of my
presentation. Furthermore after my
presentation I used the memory card that
holds all photographs and videos that
have been taken on the camera which
then I uploaded the video of my
presentation to my computer.

FRONT COVER IMPROVEMENTFRONT COVER IMPROVEMENT
One of my corrections for my front cover will be seen asOne of my corrections for my front cover will be seen as ‘‘On your front coverOn your front cover
all your cover lines on the left and right hand side must line up, this is anall your cover lines on the left and right hand side must line up, this is an
essential correction because if all the cover lines donessential correction because if all the cover lines don’’t like up it makes thet like up it makes the
front cover look unprofessional and makes the front cover not look as goodfront cover look unprofessional and makes the front cover not look as good
as it should do, so therefore I moved the cover lines so that it meets up withas it should do, so therefore I moved the cover lines so that it meets up with
the ruler lines/margins which this now looks much better as you can see inthe ruler lines/margins which this now looks much better as you can see in
the after picture. Also another improvement that I changed form my frontthe after picture. Also another improvement that I changed form my front
cover was that mycover was that my ‘‘$TACKZ$TACKZ’’ headline was too far down the front coverheadline was too far down the front cover
behind the main image. So to change this I had to raise the masthead a littlebehind the main image. So to change this I had to raise the masthead a little
margin higher so that it look a little bit more profession so that the mainmargin higher so that it look a little bit more profession so that the main
image wasnimage wasn’’t covering the title.t covering the title.
Before After

FRONT COVER IMPROVEMENTFRONT COVER IMPROVEMENT
CONTINUEDCONTINUED
• Another one of my corrections was with my production plan and my front cover, IAnother one of my corrections was with my production plan and my front cover, I
had a different launch date from which I put on my front cover- 01/02/2017, whenhad a different launch date from which I put on my front cover- 01/02/2017, when
really the product will be getting launched on the 07/01/2017. Furthermore, this isreally the product will be getting launched on the 07/01/2017. Furthermore, this is
an essential correction due to the fact that if I uploaded my magazine with thean essential correction due to the fact that if I uploaded my magazine with the
wrong launch date then this will make my business un-professional due to the factwrong launch date then this will make my business un-professional due to the fact
that the magazine would have come out on that specific date. This could alsothat the magazine would have come out on that specific date. This could also
decrease the amount of sales I get and many people may not be interested anymoredecrease the amount of sales I get and many people may not be interested anymore
which may mean that I may loose many customers if I didnwhich may mean that I may loose many customers if I didn’’t notice that the launcht notice that the launch
date was incorrect. So I had to change the launch date otherwise If I uploaded mydate was incorrect. So I had to change the launch date otherwise If I uploaded my
magazine and the launch date wasnmagazine and the launch date wasn’’t change then this could confuse people due tot change then this could confuse people due to
it not being correct but it will also make people think differently of my businessit not being correct but it will also make people think differently of my business
because their will be mistakes on the front cover which is the main segment of mybecause their will be mistakes on the front cover which is the main segment of my
business.business.

UNIT 13 PITCH IMPROVEMENTUNIT 13 PITCH IMPROVEMENT
• In my pitch, unfortunately I forgot to add in target audience fromIn my pitch, unfortunately I forgot to add in target audience from
the theorists: Katthe theorists: Kat’’z, Hartleyz, Hartley’’s, Maslows, Maslow’’s hierarchy of needs needs.s hierarchy of needs needs.
So it is essential that I completed this correction as I would beSo it is essential that I completed this correction as I would be
missing a big section of l03, So I had to describe all of the targetmissing a big section of l03, So I had to describe all of the target
audiences and implement them into my pitch so that I wouldnaudiences and implement them into my pitch so that I wouldn’’t bet be
missing anything in that specific section. I started off with doingmissing anything in that specific section. I started off with doing
uses and gratifications- and started describing it withuses and gratifications- and started describing it with’’ The readersThe readers
may be able tomay be able to ‘‘personally identifypersonally identify’’ with my magazine becausewith my magazine because
this will allow the audience/reader to be able to read artists life'sthis will allow the audience/reader to be able to read artists life's
stories in my magazine. And finished of with target audiencestories in my magazine. And finished of with target audience
HartleyHartley’’s with age, gender, class and ethnicity/nationality.s with age, gender, class and ethnicity/nationality.

TARGET AUDIENCE FOR BOTHTARGET AUDIENCE FOR BOTH
OF MY MAGAZINES.OF MY MAGAZINES.
• The target audience of my magazine will be aged from around 16-25 (The target audience of my magazine will be aged from around 16-25 (HartleyHartley)this)this
is due to teenagers and people in their early 20’s are big fans of rap genre, this isis due to teenagers and people in their early 20’s are big fans of rap genre, this is
significant because the more people that like rap genre then the more people willsignificant because the more people that like rap genre then the more people will
be purchase my magazine article due to the fact that they enjoy listening to rapbe purchase my magazine article due to the fact that they enjoy listening to rap
music. Therefore I am aiming my magazine article at people from 16-25. Accordingmusic. Therefore I am aiming my magazine article at people from 16-25. According
toto KatzKatz Uses and Gratifications the audience will be able to ‘personally identify’Uses and Gratifications the audience will be able to ‘personally identify’
themselves with the ‘star appeal’ (themselves with the ‘star appeal’ (Richard Dyer)Richard Dyer) as they will be someone theyas they will be someone they
might listen to for example their music. They will also be able to ‘personallymight listen to for example their music. They will also be able to ‘personally
identify’ with stories in the magazine from the artists where they talk about theiridentify’ with stories in the magazine from the artists where they talk about their
hobbies and interests. Furthermore the audience will be able to divert fromhobbies and interests. Furthermore the audience will be able to divert from
everyday situations such as work by reading the magazine that willeveryday situations such as work by reading the magazine that will entertainentertain
(Katz)(Katz) them. The magazine will inform and educatethem. The magazine will inform and educate (Katz(Katz) the reader of new music) the reader of new music
information and will keep the reader updated.information and will keep the reader updated.
• According toAccording to MaslowMaslow the target readership would bethe target readership would be survivorssurvivors because they willbecause they will
like the security and routine of knowing that the magazine will be produced weeklylike the security and routine of knowing that the magazine will be produced weekly
for their entertainment. Social climbers is when the audience are driven byfor their entertainment. Social climbers is when the audience are driven by
improving their status in society. This is important because it gives the audienceimproving their status in society. This is important because it gives the audience
confidence and a drive to do well in life. XXLs target audience will fit in to the socialconfidence and a drive to do well in life. XXLs target audience will fit in to the social

TARGET AUDIENCE-TARGET AUDIENCE-
PSYCHOGRAPHICSPSYCHOGRAPHICS
• Psychographics –Psychographics – This is the tudy and classification ofThis is the tudy and classification of
people according to their attitudes, aspirations, and otherpeople according to their attitudes, aspirations, and other
psychological criteria, especially in market research.psychological criteria, especially in market research.
Psychographics is all about stereotyping and what sort ofPsychographics is all about stereotyping and what sort of
people get put in to specific genre category consideringpeople get put in to specific genre category considering
their personality, appearance, how they dress and how theytheir personality, appearance, how they dress and how they
act. For example, my magazine will mainly target males asact. For example, my magazine will mainly target males as
the genre is hip-hop and rap and the front cover will featurethe genre is hip-hop and rap and the front cover will feature
a male artist. The male audience will be into rap music anda male artist. The male audience will be into rap music and
artists such as Kanye West.artists such as Kanye West.

HOUSE AND STYLE AND COLOURHOUSE AND STYLE AND COLOUR
SCHEME CORRECTIONSSCHEME CORRECTIONS
Another one of my
corrections that I had to
proceed with is making
my house style and color
scheme more colorful
which makes it looks
better and attractive to
the audience or whoever
will be reading this
specific page.

INTERVIEW DRAFTINTERVIEW DRAFT
CORRECTION.CORRECTION.
Also another correction that
I had to complete to get the
best result possible for my
pitch presentation was to
add in my interview draft,
which I this slide I
interviewed the rapper that
featured in my my magazine
front cover who was ‘mist’
talking about his jail life
when he made two songs
which one of them is out of
YouTube now. This is
essential as this will give the
audience abit of information
about the rapper that will be
featuring in my magazine

StrengthsStrengths
• I feel like there was several strengths in work, furthermore when presenting my pitch II feel like there was several strengths in work, furthermore when presenting my pitch I
felt like I had put a great amount of detail in to it more than enough than I needed. Ifelt like I had put a great amount of detail in to it more than enough than I needed. I
had to come up with a lot of ideas for example one of these being the equipmenthad to come up with a lot of ideas for example one of these being the equipment
needed to create my magazine, all financial segments for magazine for example howneeded to create my magazine, all financial segments for magazine for example how
much I would have to pay each staff for each specific job role, also another segment Imuch I would have to pay each staff for each specific job role, also another segment I
needed to think about was my budget summary which this furthermore, means howneeded to think about was my budget summary which this furthermore, means how
much money have I spent on creating everything minus how much profit I should bemuch money have I spent on creating everything minus how much profit I should be
making. Also another strength that I could state for my pitch is that I feel like themaking. Also another strength that I could state for my pitch is that I feel like the
magazine front cover that I created, also the double paged spread as well is also in amagazine front cover that I created, also the double paged spread as well is also in a
large amount of detail, for example I had to make sure that the barcode of thelarge amount of detail, for example I had to make sure that the barcode of the
magazine was very realistic and also the picture that I used I edited it to ensure that itmagazine was very realistic and also the picture that I used I edited it to ensure that it
looked aesthetically pleasing to the audience.looked aesthetically pleasing to the audience.

CALENDAR EVENTSCALENDAR EVENTS
• My magazine will be released on theMy magazine will be released on the
07/01/2017 which therefore is very close to a07/01/2017 which therefore is very close to a
special event calledspecial event called ‘‘ChristmasChristmas’’ soso
furthermore this means that the public willfurthermore this means that the public will
have money in their pockets to buy thehave money in their pockets to buy the
magazine; so it is essential that I advertisemagazine; so it is essential that I advertise
my magazine properly so that the audiencemy magazine properly so that the audience
know that it is coming up. This means thatknow that it is coming up. This means that
the public ill be able to pre-order thethe public ill be able to pre-order the
magazine before or at Christmas whilst theymagazine before or at Christmas whilst they
have money. Overall this seasonal holidayhave money. Overall this seasonal holiday
will have a huge impact on my magazinewill have a huge impact on my magazine
dropping, as I think this holiday will boostdropping, as I think this holiday will boost
the sales of my magazine a lot.the sales of my magazine a lot.

UNIT 13-PLANNING ANDUNIT 13-PLANNING AND
PITCHING- RISKPITCHING- RISK
ASSESSMENTASSESSMENT
• Software risk Assessment-Software risk Assessment- software risk Assessment can be seen assoftware risk Assessment can be seen as
resizing and image but using theresizing and image but using the ‘‘shift keyshift key’’ which will allow you to be able to makewhich will allow you to be able to make
the picture smaller and by pressing the shift key it will keep the picture lookingthe picture smaller and by pressing the shift key it will keep the picture looking
professional due to it still having its high quality, but furthermore if you do not doprofessional due to it still having its high quality, but furthermore if you do not do
this will lead to a pixelated picture and it will be warps which makes the photo lookthis will lead to a pixelated picture and it will be warps which makes the photo look
unprofessional. This technique is when resizing images whilst still keeping theunprofessional. This technique is when resizing images whilst still keeping the
quality of the photo high and preventing the photo from becoming stretched andquality of the photo high and preventing the photo from becoming stretched and
distorted.distorted.
• Eyedropper Tool-Eyedropper Tool- To maintain consistency and professionalism throughout myTo maintain consistency and professionalism throughout my
magazinemagazine ‘‘$tackz$tackz’’, on Photoshop their is a good and efficient tool called the, on Photoshop their is a good and efficient tool called the
‘‘eyedropper tooleyedropper tool’’ thatthat’’s helps to choose the colour of a specific object that will bes helps to choose the colour of a specific object that will be
on the front cover, then you will have the chance to save this colour and be able toon the front cover, then you will have the chance to save this colour and be able to
use it again which keeps the front cover professional, because you save the colouruse it again which keeps the front cover professional, because you save the colour
allowing you to use it again which will furthermore improve your front cover as youallowing you to use it again which will furthermore improve your front cover as you
will have the same colours which will make it professional. Also when making a newwill have the same colours which will make it professional. Also when making a new
object such as a textbox or a shape I can just click on the previous saved colour so Iobject such as a textbox or a shape I can just click on the previous saved colour so I
can use it again which is also quicker and more precise as the colour has beencan use it again which is also quicker and more precise as the colour has been
previously saved. This furthermore speeded up colour choosing for me as well aspreviously saved. This furthermore speeded up colour choosing for me as well as
keeping it as professional as possible.keeping it as professional as possible.

SPENDING POWERSPENDING POWER
• Spending powerspending power is the amount of money that a companySpending powerspending power is the amount of money that a company
has and how much of It that they are allowed to spend. My target audiencehas and how much of It that they are allowed to spend. My target audience
would be in the category of A,B,C1 as this is high up on the socio-would be in the category of A,B,C1 as this is high up on the socio-
economic needs table they will have a higher spending power comparedeconomic needs table they will have a higher spending power compared
to C2 and E groups, therefore I have priced my magazine at a price ofto C2 and E groups, therefore I have priced my magazine at a price of
£2.99 therefore, this means that the specific target audience will be able£2.99 therefore, this means that the specific target audience will be able
to afford to buy my magazine so overall this means that I will get sales into afford to buy my magazine so overall this means that I will get sales in
the long term and may sell a large amount of copies of my magazinethe long term and may sell a large amount of copies of my magazine

BUDGET SUMMARYBUDGET SUMMARY
Source of income the main source of income forSource of income the main source of income for
my magazine will be the advertisements due to themy magazine will be the advertisements due to the
fact that it is very expensive to advertise infact that it is very expensive to advertise in
magazine these days. I will use the advertisingmagazine these days. I will use the advertising
rates for a reflection so this will allow me to look atrates for a reflection so this will allow me to look at
what I can charge peoples businesses to feature inwhat I can charge peoples businesses to feature in
my magazine as advertisements. This will overallmy magazine as advertisements. This will overall
increase the readership of the magazine, becauseincrease the readership of the magazine, because
there will be a certain amount of income coming inthere will be a certain amount of income coming in
due to the people who are getting advertised indue to the people who are getting advertised in
the magazine.the magazine.
Advertising within the magazine- advertising
within the magazine can consist of a range of
adverts to attract different types of target
audiences, this is significant because within my
magazine have a large target audience so this
means that there will have to be a variety of
advertisements to attract different people. Within
the q magazines publishers, they have found out
that the majority of there target audiences are
male, so therefore this means they may as well
get advertisements that will attract men than
women because this will get the business who is
advertising more customers. For my magazine I
want to have an equal amount of men and women
reading my magazine due to my target audience
being bigger, this is significant because I feel
like if you have a bigger target audience and
specify the magazine for both genders then will
give the magazine a chance of expanding
through the males and women, this will give the
magazine a better chance of expanding due to
men and women reading it rather than just men.

Front cover improvementFront cover improvement
continuedcontinued
• Another one of my corrections was with my production plan and my front cover, IAnother one of my corrections was with my production plan and my front cover, I
had a different launch date from which I put on my front cover- 01/02/2017, whenhad a different launch date from which I put on my front cover- 01/02/2017, when
really the product will be getting launched on the 07/01/2017. Furthermore, this isreally the product will be getting launched on the 07/01/2017. Furthermore, this is
an essential correction due to the fact that if I uploaded my magazine with thean essential correction due to the fact that if I uploaded my magazine with the
wrong launch date then this will make my business un-professional due to the factwrong launch date then this will make my business un-professional due to the fact
that the magazine would have come out on that specific date. This could alsothat the magazine would have come out on that specific date. This could also
decrease the amount of sales I get and many people may not be interesteddecrease the amount of sales I get and many people may not be interested
anymore which may mean that I may loose many customers if I didnanymore which may mean that I may loose many customers if I didn’’t notice thatt notice that
the launch date was incorrect. So I had to change the launch date otherwise If Ithe launch date was incorrect. So I had to change the launch date otherwise If I
uploaded my magazine and the launch date wasnuploaded my magazine and the launch date wasn’’t change then this could confuset change then this could confuse
people due to it not being correct but it will also make people think differently ofpeople due to it not being correct but it will also make people think differently of
my business because their will be mistakes on the front cover which is the mainmy business because their will be mistakes on the front cover which is the main
segment of my business.segment of my business.

PRODUCTION PLANPRODUCTION PLAN
Monday: get a
office which you
will be able to set
up the business
and be able to get
work done.
Tuesday: Go and get
the equipment for the
set up for the business
Wednesday: in this stage
you will need to buy
computers, desks and
chairs for the employees
to work.
Thursday: create time
and dates for
employees to come and
do job interviews to
join the business
Friday: Create the job
interviews for roles such
as an editor and a writer.
Saturday: Create
the job interviews
for roles such as
an editor and a
writer.
Sunday: Set the office
up with all the desks
and computers, ready
for the first working
date.
Complete by:
Monday 1st
of
December
Complete by: Tuesday
2nd
of December
Complete by: Sunday 7th
of
December
Complete by: Sunday7th
of December
Complete by: Sunday7th
of December
Complete by:
Sunday 7th
of
December
Complete by: Monday
8th
of December
Week beginning: Monday 1st
December 2016
Monday: explain to
all your employees
in the business the
plan and
regulations
Tuesday: first an
artist to feature in
your magazine that
has been answering
the questions in the
interview.
Wednesday: get the
writer that you have
hired to find some
questions to ask the
artist in the interview.
Thursday: hire a
reporter to meet up
with the featured artist
and ask the questions
that need to be asked
Friday: write up the
answers to the
interview, ready to go
into the magazine.
Saturday: Arrange a
photoshoot with the
artist and then take
some photos for the
page of them in the
magazine.
Sunday: start of
designing the
magazine with the
layout first, then the
background ad
including colors
Complete by:
Monday 8th
of
December
Complete by: Sunday
15th
December
Complete by: Thursday
11th
of December
Complete by: Saturday
13th
of December
Complete by:
Sunday14th of
December
Complete by: Tuesday
16th
December
Complete by:
Tuesday16th December
Week beginning: Monday 8th
December 2016

Monday: Get some
employees to find
more information
on what is
happening in the
rap life today.
Tuesday: the
pictures that have
been taken of the
artists need to be
edited and inserted
to the magazine.
Wednesday: insert the
interview write-up
with the artist onto the
double page where the
section of the artist is
going to be.
Thursday: try to find
some companies that
would want o be
advertised in the
magazine.
Friday: start finding
some stories that
relate to and about
the specific rapper
you have chosen.
Saturday: Weekend off Sunday: Weekend off
Complete by:
Friday 20th
December
Complete by:
Saturday 21st h
December
Complete by:
Wednesday 18th
December
Complete by:
Thursday 19th
December
Complete by:
Wednesday 18th
December
Monday: Finish
designing the
magazine.
Tuesday: Find more
short stories about
artists you can also
put in the magazine.
Wednesday: Find
more short stories
about artists you can
also put in the
magazine.
Thursday: Find more
short stories about
artists you can also
put in the magazine.
Friday: Send the
magazine of for
production
Saturday: Weekend off Sunday: Weekend off
Complete by: Friday
27th
December
Complete by: Friday
27th st
December
Complete by:
Thursday 26th
December
Complete by:
Friday 27th st
December
Complete by:
Saturday the 28th
of
December
Complete by: Complete by:
Week beginning: Monday 15th December 2016.
Week beginning: Monday 22nd
December 2016.

Monday: Distribute
magazines to stores,
shops and online
websites that have
permission to sell
your magazine on
their website.
Tuesday: Set up social
media accounts and
posters around your
local area. Help
gaining an audience
before you actually
release the magazine.
Wednesday: Product
Launch
Complete by:
Monday 5th
January
Complete by:
Tuesday 6th
January
Wednesday 7th
January
Week beginning: Monday 29th
December
2016.

LAUNCH DATELAUNCH DATE
My magazine is released on Wednesday the 7My magazine is released on Wednesday the 7thth
January. TheJanuary. The
positive of this is that it is released in the new year which couldpositive of this is that it is released in the new year which could
convey that a new year so therefore new magazine. A negativeconvey that a new year so therefore new magazine. A negative
effect on the magazine being released on this date could be it iseffect on the magazine being released on this date could be it is
after Christmas therefore most people wonafter Christmas therefore most people won’t have a lot of money’t have a lot of money
especially to spend on magazines.especially to spend on magazines.

PRINTING COSTS OF THE MAGAZINEPRINTING COSTS OF THE MAGAZINE
The final order To purchase 15,000 magazine copies at a good
quality it would add up to around £4612.92 so roughly it will be
around £3.50 each which I will be selling my magazine at around
£4.00each so I wouldn’t be able to make as much as profit as I
would like to make so next time I will need to order more copies
so that the overall price will be reduced and therefore I will make
more money in total.

DISTRIBUTION TO RETAILER’SDISTRIBUTION TO RETAILER’S
• When every segment of magazine has finished this is when I willWhen every segment of magazine has finished this is when I will
need to sort out print based advertisments, I will have to take aneed to sort out print based advertisments, I will have to take a
look around some shops and look what shops sell the mostlook around some shops and look what shops sell the most
magazine, also If I do some research this will mean that I can findmagazine, also If I do some research this will mean that I can find
out all the shops in the local area that sell specific magazines soout all the shops in the local area that sell specific magazines so
for example I will need to find a shop that sells a large amount offor example I will need to find a shop that sells a large amount of
music magazines as this will give me greater chance of selling mymusic magazines as this will give me greater chance of selling my
magazine In this shop, also cover my genre so this will give me amagazine In this shop, also cover my genre so this will give me a
chance of selling a large amount of magazines in this shop, whichchance of selling a large amount of magazines in this shop, which
this shop could be WHSMITH, Sainsbury’s ect.this shop could be WHSMITH, Sainsbury’s ect.

PRESENTING MY PITCH TO MYPRESENTING MY PITCH TO MY
AUDIENCEAUDIENCE
These images are of me presenting my
pitch for my magazines in front of my class,
this is essential because this gives me
some sort of experience in presenting a
pitch in front of a audience which this could
furthermore benefit me in future life if
doing a job role such as a business
manager, then everyday an individual will
have to encounter presentations that they
will have to perform in front of a audience
in a business attire.

UNIT 13- PLANNING ANDUNIT 13- PLANNING AND
PITCHING- EVIDENCE OF PITCHPITCHING- EVIDENCE OF PITCH
When I was conducting my pitch, there was a camera recording my
presentation for evidence if I needed any. This furthermore means that I
can look back ion my presentation and see what my weaknesses were
and what I could of done to improve as whole.
The verbal feedback that I received of my peers after my presentation
will be seen as I presented well as a whole and I spoke loud and clear
which allowed people to hear and understand what I was talking about
during the presentation. Furthermore, something that I could of done to
improve it interact with the audience more, for example looking at the
audience whilst speaking, and maybe giving more body language as you
can see in the screenshot of my video you can see that I am looking at
the smart board.
After I presented my PowerPoint my teacher
sent me a witness statement to fill out for
evidence. In this witness statement I had to find
out points that I could improve my pitch as a
whole, an din the future I can use these to
improve on presenting in the future which will
make me look more experienced as I will be
able to improve from my first pitch by the
weaknesses that I found out.

WITNESS STATEMENTWITNESS STATEMENT
The yellow
HIGHLIGHT is
something that I
didn't’t do well in
my pitch but
furthermore I have
corrected these to
make my pitch
better
The green
highlights is a
section that I
completed well.
My witness statement conveys that I have
completed the majority of tasks, but the
yellow highlights over the writing can
illustrate that I have corrections that I need to
repeat. One of them being target audience-
spending power which is must one individual
slide that I need to complete to get rid of this
correction.

CONTINUEDCONTINUED
These witness statements will
help due to the fact that it has
comments on how I can make my
pitch presentation better, so
therefore I will follow these
statement and change all the
corrections that I need to do.

Even though I
didn’t get that
many corrections,
I still need to go
over my pitch
making sure
everything is up
to scratch with no
spelling mistakes,
or missing any
slides out.

FEEDBACK ON PITCHFEEDBACK ON PITCH
I used survey monkey to get
responses from my peers who
watched my presentation, this is
essential because my peers gave
me feedback that was related to my
presentation which will allow me to
take in this feedback and improve
in the long-term for my next
presentation in the future. My
question was ‘what do you think I
could of done to improve my pitch’
and the most common answer was
that I needed to put more depth on
each slide and don’t skip
information that may be essential.
After I presented my pitch to my class, I went on survey monkey and created 8
questions that I wanted to ask my peers about how I presented my pitch as a
whole and how good the features was inside the pitch, for example how well I
targeted the audience? Did I target the right audience during my pitch?

QUESTION 2QUESTION 2
For my second question that I asked
my peers about my pitch would be
seen as’ what would you rate my
magazine covers out of ten’ this is
essential because my magazine covers
are a bit part of my work, which I
spent a large duration on, and two of
my peers said 6/10, another two peers
said 7/10 and one of my peers said
8/10 and one other peer said 9/10.
These results are essential for me
because this conveys to me what
people think of my magazine covers
that I made my self and everyone of
my peers put be at 6/10 and above to
9/10 which I am very proud and
appreciated over.

Whilst creating my survey monkey
question I thought to insert a question
that would help me and get me good
results at the end of the year, and this
question would be seen as ‘do you think
I covered everything form the mark
scheme’ and six people answered this
question three of my peers answered
this question by saying I did cover
everything from the mark scheme, and
three people said that I covered most of
the mark scheme, which in my opinion I
feel like I got good feedback from my
peers because I told them to answer my
questions honestly so I could get best
and honestly feedback of my pitch
presentation as possible.

In my fourth survey monkey question I
asked my peers, if they was in my position
and had my front cover ‘ what would you of
changed’ and the majority of people- 50%
of people said that I only needed to change
the fonts to make the front cover as best as
possible, which is good for me as this isn’t a
hard and long process to just change the
fonts of my front cover. Furthermore the
rest of my peers who answered my survey
monkey questions said that I didn't’t need
to change anything as they liked the look of
how it is already, but one person said that I
needed to change the picture that I used on
my front cover. But the question that I
asked my peers is an opinionated question
so furthermore it doesn’t matter to much
because it is there opinion

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