2. Being Veganism this is a very different way of living for these kinds of people who decided to do it for a month and try to see how they feel
afterwards. Of how beneficial it can be to be a vegan. As this is a widely different way of living by eating vegetarian instead of meat no and again,
than more than you think around vegans. As I thought that this first sentence was a bit to complex to understand to most of audience of who I
would be directing it at. So I tried to reword the sentence by making it more easier to read. As this was the start of the sentence this goes into the
introduction this talks more about what it is talking about. Exploitation of animals for food, clothing, testing and entertainment. Veganuary is a
global campaign that launched in January 2014 to help encourage people to try vegan for January. With a success of 3,200 people ready to
commit in January 2014, these campaigns try to make people help to become vegans to become much healthier for themselves as this helps to
raise awareness of this lifestyle.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/magazine-25644903
3. There was some grammer that is highlighted in yellow. As everything around this
paragraph was all clear and correct of what it was trying to get across. That was all
true beneifical. As this what they have said about vitamin B12 ‘If you are low in B12,
you may have an issue with absorbing it and regardless of how much you have in
your diet, medical intervention may be required. This is relevant to everyone,
regardless of their current diet.’
https://veganuary.com/why/nutrition/vitamin-b12/
4. As it says here about, health for human beings that it is better us humans to not always have a meat, diary diet of what other animals
have provided for us. So it shows us that not all what we eat shows what our body needs. Not only do vegans tend to be more well
informed of what their body needs and what their food contains but avoiding meat and animal products can help to virtually
eliminate the most severe diseases such as cardiovascular disease, obesity, type 2 diabetes, diverticulosis and e.coli infections. A
vegan diet can be more beneficial to women as PMS symptoms become less intense or disappear altogether. This is due to the
elimination of dairy from their diet. As I have read this through, it all seemed clear with what they are explaining about vegans. The
facts which I have highlighted in green this shows that these facts are all true and from basis from websites which I have looked up.
This what will happen if you have more of a ,eat based diet as you will need to control it. However. With the vegan diet it helps with
everything for your body.
The fact says about getting these diseases if you’re a on a meat based diet, you can multiple issues like, ‘Filling your plate with meat,
dairy products, and eggs could be a recipe for heart disease, obesity, cancer, diabetes, and even impotence. Leading health experts
agree that going vegan is the single best thing we can do for ourselves and our families.Healthy vegan diets support a lifetime of
good health and provide protection against numerous diseases, including some of our country’s biggest killers: heart disease, cancer,
and strokes.’
About PMS for women it helps them by eating this vegan diet, ‘This was a crossover study, so after two months eating vegan, the women
were supposed to go back to their regular diets to see if the pain would return. But the women felt so much better that when the
researchers asked them to go back to their regular diet to test before and after, several women refused.’
https://nutritionfacts.org/2014/04/17/treating-menstrual-pain-with-diet/
https://www.peta.org/issues/animals-used-for-food/eating-health/
5. When I read through this last paragraph about vegans as this specific part of this was about the environment. As you can
see where I have used the green colour for the correct facts which I have researched. As this is;
Veganism helps the environment and helps to stop excess greenhouse gases. Over 70 billion land animals such as cows,
pigs and chickens are specifically bred, farmed and killed for food every year. This does not include sea creatures and
other animals bred for fur and skin trades. The meat industry has a big impact on the environment and how use our
natural resources. 70% of the fresh water produced is used for the meat industry and takes 2500 gallons of water for 1
pound of beef . As I have used the colour red is because it is not correct at all because they had never found this specific
information in red, 70% of the fresh water produced is used for the meat industry and takes 2500 gallons of water for 1
pound of beef. This is equivalent to 100 pounds of wheat. This hasn’t shown been anywhere on any websites before so
cant say it is true, so have to say it is false. So you can’t rely on this fact. However, with the final sentence, says this, Only
50% of grain harvest could feed all the starving people in the world if only people would stop eating meat. This half of the
meat so you wouldn’t have of this to feed the global.
