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“Veganism not only helps to reduce the suffering of animals and help the planet but also improves
personal health.”
https://www.
healthline.co
m/nutrition/v
egan-diet-
benefits#secti
on4
http://reduci
ng-
suffering.org/
vegetarianis
m-and-wild-
animals/
4. “Veganuary is a global campaign that launched in January 2014 to help encourage people to try vegan for January. With a
success of 3,200 people ready to commit in January 2014, the campaign has gone from strength to strength to help raise
awareness of this lifestyle.”
https://veganuary.com/about/
https://faunalytics.org/feature-
article/veganuary-2014-report/
5. “vitamin B12 is a vitamin that can be hard for vegans to obtain as it is found in meat, which is created by bacteria
but is also added to fortified foods such as breakfast cereals. A supplement of B12 is the easiest way to make sure
you do not lack it in your diet.”
http://www.pcrm.org/health/diets/vegdiets/
dont-vegetarians-have-trouble-getting-
enough
https://www.vegansociety.com/resources/nutritio
n-and-health/nutrients/vitamin-b12/what-every-
vegan-should-know-about-vitamin-b12
6. “but avoiding meat and animal products can help to virtually eliminate the most severe diseases such as
cardiovascular disease, obesity, type 2 diabetes, diverticulosis and e.coli infections.”
https://www.peta.org/issues/animals-used-for-
food/eating-health/
http://www.ecorazzi.com/2012/10/16/4-
diseases-and-health-problems-a-vegan-diet-
will-help-prevent/
7. “A vegan diet can be more beneficial to women as PMS symptoms become less intense or
disappear altogether. This is due to the elimination of dairy from their diet.”
http://health.allwomenstalk.com/
excellent-benefits-of-a-vegan-
diet/6/
https://medium.com/cl
ued-in/no-meat-no-
problem-the-effect-of-
veganism-and-
vegetarianism-on-the-
menstrual-cycle-
d78cb32a5245
8. “Veganism helps the environment and helps to stop excess greenhouse gases. Over 70 billion land animals such as
cows, pigs and chickens are specifically bred, farmed and killed for food every year.”
https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2016/mar/21/eat
-less-meat-vegetarianism-dangerous-global-warming
https://www.peta.org/issu
es/animals-used-for-
food/factory-
farming/turkeys/
9. “70% of the fresh water produced is used for the meat industry and takes 2500 gallons of water for 1 pound of beef. “
http://www.earthsave.org/environment.htm
https://www.theguardian.com/news/datablog/2013/jan/10/ho
w-much-water-food-production-waste
