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1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.

At first, explaining about a sound drivers, then states about how to open the case of computer and shut
down a computer. Then the article states the method that how to find the motherboard. Next, explain
the place of bus. Finally turn on computer and check it running.

2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly
represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

It changes topic between the heading and the individual sections suddenly, so
it is difficult for us to understand this content.

3.What details are included in the document?

First of all, explaining about a sound drivers, next states about how to open the case of computer and
shut down a computer, next the article states the method that how to find the motherboard, next explain
the place of bus. Finally turn on computer and check it how to run.

4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

There is contradiction between the heading and the individual sections, so
it is difficult for us to understand this content.

5.What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

It separated to many sections. It is important for us to understand.


6.Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

To many same topics are include in the heading and the individual sections.

7.What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?

This article is too minute. It should be more simple, and be more specialized, and use more pictures
than this article.

8.Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a
similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

1. It should be more simple.
2. It should be more specialized.
3. It should use more pictures than this article.

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Week4 kozin

  • 1. 1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. At first, explaining about a sound drivers, then states about how to open the case of computer and shut down a computer. Then the article states the method that how to find the motherboard. Next, explain the place of bus. Finally turn on computer and check it running. 2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. It changes topic between the heading and the individual sections suddenly, so it is difficult for us to understand this content. 3.What details are included in the document? First of all, explaining about a sound drivers, next states about how to open the case of computer and shut down a computer, next the article states the method that how to find the motherboard, next explain the place of bus. Finally turn on computer and check it how to run. 4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? There is contradiction between the heading and the individual sections, so it is difficult for us to understand this content. 5.What is good about the writing? Why is it good? It separated to many sections. It is important for us to understand. 6.Are there any errors that need to be corrected? To many same topics are include in the heading and the individual sections. 7.What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? This article is too minute. It should be more simple, and be more specialized, and use more pictures than this article. 8.Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). 1. It should be more simple. 2. It should be more specialized. 3. It should use more pictures than this article.