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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

Do not use cell phone in car. Because if use it called when you are driving, your attention will leave
to drive. Then, you will damage person by car. And you will break city. Then, you have to pay
much money .Because these reasons, we should not use cell phone when we are driving.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

These articles are separated step by step. And steps is colored. It is very easy for us to understand
and read. Next point is that, one article has outline. It is easy for us to understand why use cell
phone in car. And it is easy to understand what the author want to describe in article.



3. What details are included in the articles?

Do not use cell phone in car. Because if use it called when you are driving, your attention will leave
to drive. Then, you will damage person by car. And you will break city. Then, you have to pay
much money .Because these reasons, we should not use cell phone when we are driving.

4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

There is noting point not to understand point. These articles are summarized, so I can read and
understand these articles in a moment. Because these articles are very easy to read and understand, I
think that these articles have not point to fix.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

There is noting point to fix in these articles. Because these are very easy to read and underestand,
these article are written briefly and clearly. I think that these articles are perfect. Because these
reasons, I think that there is noting point to fix.

7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?

I think that these article are perfect. So I can chage these very little. If I fix these articles, I unionize
these two articles. If it is done that document will more useful and efficient.

8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

One of the difference is to write way. One is step by step and other is written outline. Second is
using color. One is using color and other is not using. Third is letter of document. These two
document is easy to read.

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Pre4

  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? Do not use cell phone in car. Because if use it called when you are driving, your attention will leave to drive. Then, you will damage person by car. And you will break city. Then, you have to pay much money .Because these reasons, we should not use cell phone when we are driving. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. These articles are separated step by step. And steps is colored. It is very easy for us to understand and read. Next point is that, one article has outline. It is easy for us to understand why use cell phone in car. And it is easy to understand what the author want to describe in article. 3. What details are included in the articles? Do not use cell phone in car. Because if use it called when you are driving, your attention will leave to drive. Then, you will damage person by car. And you will break city. Then, you have to pay much money .Because these reasons, we should not use cell phone when we are driving. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? There is noting point not to understand point. These articles are summarized, so I can read and understand these articles in a moment. Because these articles are very easy to read and understand, I think that these articles have not point to fix. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There is noting point to fix in these articles. Because these are very easy to read and underestand, these article are written briefly and clearly. I think that these articles are perfect. Because these reasons, I think that there is noting point to fix. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I think that these article are perfect. So I can chage these very little. If I fix these articles, I unionize these two articles. If it is done that document will more useful and efficient. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). One of the difference is to write way. One is step by step and other is written outline. Second is using color. One is using color and other is not using. Third is letter of document. These two document is easy to read.