The document provides instructions for installing sound driver hardware but lacks clear organization and structure. It explains the hardware and drivers but does not outline the installation steps. The lack of headings and prefixes like "first" and "next" make it difficult to understand the overall procedure. The writing could be improved by adding clear headings for each section and itemizing the installation steps for better clarity.

1. Ex#1
(1)Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.
First, explains what the installed driver hardware is. Next, explains whether install each step following to
what procedure in this document.
(2)Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I do not think that individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Reason of that, divided the section into every procedure, but it is difficult to understand at
a glance that what is explaining this because there are no headlines.
(3)What details are included in the document?
First, this document explains what relation do hardware and drivers and what are there. Next, it explains
how to install the sound driver hardware and procedure of this.
(4)Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
Yes there are. For example, there are not prefixes like a "first"and "next", and, do not write each the
procedure of step about why it is an instruction. Reason of that, it is difficult to be able to understand the
procedure of step.
(5)What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I think that it is important to make purpose of the document clear when write the document. Reason of
that, It is important for the reader to know what content the document is. And, it is important for them to
think clearly headline each section. The effect of that, the reader becomes easy to look for necessary
information in the document.
(6)Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
There is no error.
(7)What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
I want to suggestions that think the clearly headline for the document. The reason of that, It is easy to
understand contents of the document. For the same reason, I suggest that when it explains the procedure,
it itemizes it.
(8)Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
・We think about the headline that it is easy to understand in the every step when we write the procedure.
・We write not only correct procedure, but also incorrect it.
・The purpose of operation is very clearly written when we write the explanation or procedure.