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1. AS Blog feedback
L/O: to understand teacher comments on blog and know how to
improve blogs, also know what marks you currently have

2. marks
• Lowest = 1
• Highest 13-14
• Average: 7-8
• Remember the blog is EASY marks, much easier to achieve L3/4 than
video or evaluation….
• POOR R&P = POOR VIDEO + POOR EVAL. 

3. • What’s wrong with these?

4. And this?

6. Templates…..

7. This is L1

9. Not embedded correctly

10. Good blogs
• http://1415twbsasmediagroup4.blogspot.co.uk/ GROUP 4
• (notice their technical skills – zooms/embedded videos in prezi) like in
this:
http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2015/10/research-
assignment-4-types-of-ots_9.html
• Extensive research/analysis and excellent presentation!
http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2015/12/research-
frame-analysis.html

11. Good work

12. Group 7’s revised planning
• This is fine if you have decent planning from before
• If rubbish:
(separate posts)
http://1516twbsasmediagroup7.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/planning-assignment-60-revised-planning.html

13. More good stuff:
• Joseph – excellent costume/prop:
http://1516twbsasmediagroup8.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/assignment-
46-costume-props-make-up.html
• Jamaal – music/sound research
http://1516twbsasmediagroup7.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/research-
assignment-37-music-research.html

14. Target audience was area for development
• MASS = xfactor (some people said top gear?) or avatar
• NICHE= location location location or Geordie shore
• #36 (your target audience and how it’s appealing…..)
• Create a chart to make demographics clear
• Psychographics?
• Explain clearly HOW/WHY your film would be appealing to your TA

15. Marks/Grades
A B C D E U
80-100 70-79 60-69 50-59 40-49 39-0
A B C D E U
160-200 140-159 120-139 100-119 80-99 79-0
Aim for 175 Aim for 150 Aim for 130
____/100
____/100 c/w + ____/50 mock = _____
33/100 c/w + 34/50 mock = 67/200
Wants secure B = 150-67 = 83 more marks
30/100 c/w + 19/50 mock = 49/200
Wants secure B = 150-49 = 101 more marks