1. Class code: 71ENG410043_54
Student’s name: Nguyen To Trinh
Peer editor’s name: Pham Tran Gia Han
Date: 9/10/2023
WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON _7_
Unit: 8
Topic:
In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online
courses available to university students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of
studying an online course?
• 1st draft
Introduction: It is widely believed that E-learning courses provided for college students over
the past ten years have growth in the quantity and diversity. This essay will discuss the
strengths and weaknesses of learning online educational programs provided.
Conclusion: To summarize, virtual courses available for higher education students always
have benefits and drawbacks, it can be solve if tertiary students are more disciplined in
studying and do not skip online classes. Parents should provide adequate equipment for their
children. And finally, the school can organize a course to teach students online learning
techniques, and troubleshooting skills.
• Self-assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Sentences
Does the writer use punctuation correctly? Y
Are there any spelling errors? N
Does the writer check the verb tenses? N
Do the subjects and verbs agree? Y
Does the writer use the provided useful structures? Y
Introduction and conclusion
2. Does the topic sentence paraphrase the task
question?
Y
Does the thesis statement briefly outline what is going
to be discussed?
Y
Does the conclusion summarize the main ideas (and
give the writer’s opinion if possible)?
Y
• Peer assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Sentences
Does the writer use punctuation correctly? Y
Are there any spelling errors? Y
Does the writer check the verb tenses? N
Do the subjects and verbs agree? Y
Does the writer use the provided useful structures? Y
Introduction and conclusion
Does the topic sentence paraphrase the task
question?
Y
Does the thesis statement briefly outline what is going
to be discussed?
Y
Does the conclusion summarize the main ideas (and
give the writer’s opinion if possible)?
Y
• Final version
Introduction: It is widely believed that E-learning courses provided for college students have
grown in quantity and diversity over the past ten years. The strengths and weaknesses of
learning online educational programs provided will be discussed in this essay.
Conclusion: : To summarize, virtual courses available for higher education students always
have benefits and drawbacks, it can be solved if tertiary students are more disciplined in
studying and do not skip online classes. It is important for parents to provide their children
with adequate equipment. Finally, the school has the ability to organize a course that teaches
students online learning techniques and troubleshooting skills.
3. • Rubric for grading
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