This slides will guide you on how to avoid common mistakes while doing the writing part of TOEFL iBT.

1. Five Common Mistakes
Made by TOEFL iBT Test Takers
Writing

2. 1
You start writing immediately.
Independent writing -> Make a simple outline first.
• Introductory Paragraph: ?
• Body Paragraph 1: ?
• Body Paragraph 2: ?
• Concluding Paragraph: (just restate the thesis
statement in the introduction)
For the Integrated one, no need to write an outline. You just
report information and write based on your notes.

3. 2
You think you’re finished,
but you’re not.
Edit your work!
Check the spelling and the mechanics (punctuations
& capitalization), and if there’s still enough time,
grammar & vocabulary.

4. 3
You use fancy words.
No need to use fancy words unless:
• familiar
• understand
• comfortable
No need to sound smart!
Yes, you need synonyms to avoid repetitions.
“Don’t use a five-dollar word when a fifty-cent word
will do.” (Mark Twain)

5. 4
You think your opinion matters.
Yes, for the independent writing,
but NOT for the integrated writing.

6. 5
You do it all alone.
You DO need somebody to give you feedbacks,
somebody to tell you what to do.
You need a TEACHER!

7. Adapted from:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hjHF8TQFLgY