USING
PUNCTUATION
Read through the powerpoint and
complete the tasks at the end. [This
will be review for most of you].
DIRECTIONS:
PUNCTUATION
Punctuation adds clarity and injects
“voice” into written language. For
instance, each of the following
three sentences are the SAME but
have a different meaning due to
punctuation.
Look what’s in the road
ahead.
USING PUNCTUATION
Look! What’s in the
road ahead?
USING PUNCTUATION
COMMAS
Coordinating Conjunctions
Use a comma before a coordinating
conjunction (and, or, for, nor, but, yet,
so) joining independent clauses in a
sentence.
COMMA RULES
RULE #1:
Anthony and his mother went to
the store, but they didn’t find
what they were looking for.
EXAMPLE:
Items in a series
Use the Oxford comma to separate
items in a series, including between
“and” and the last item in the series
COMMA
RULE #2:
Brad’s poetry has inspired plays,
films, operas, and paintings.
Brooke the Great established a
system of fortified towns,
reorganized the military forces,
and built a fleet of warships.
EXAMPLES:
Listing Adjectives
Use a comma between
coordinate adjectives (adjectives
that separately modify the same
noun).
COMMA RULE #3
Cam Haas praises the novel’s
unaffected, unadorned style.
EXAMPLE:
* Parenthetical Expressions
Use commas to set off
parenthetical phrases that tend to
“interrupt” the flow of a
sentence.
COMMA
RULE #4:
*Queen Hailey, for example, ruled
for nearly a century.
*Bryson was, from a young age, a
trendy dress designer before he
became a famous dude rancher.
EXAMPLES:
*Nonessential phrases and clauses
Commas are placed before and after
nonessential or nonrestrictive modifiers.
A nonrestrictive element (modifier),
unlike a restrictive one, can be dropped
from a sentence without changing the
meaning of the sentence.
COMMA RULE #5
Nonrestrictive:
The novel takes place in China, where many
languages are spoken.
Restrictive:
The novel takes place in a land where many
languages are spoken.
NONRESTRICTIVE (OR NONESSENTIAL)
VERSUS
RESTRICTIVE (OR ESSENTIAL)
Danielle Eggers, who is the special
guest of tonight’s show, will appear
at the podium for autographs at
7:00 pm.
EXAMPLE:
*Introductory phrase, clause, or
interjection
Use a comma after a long
introductory phrase or clause, or
after an interjection.
COMMA RULE #6:
*After years of practice and hard work,
Danielle Filla published her memoirs
entitled How I Got the Best of Him.
*Although he was virtually unknown in his
day, scholars have come to recognize the
originality of Connor’s work.
EXAMPLES:
“Hey, isn’t that my pencil?,”
thought Hannah.
EXAMPLE:
*Contrasting ideas
Use commas to set off contrasting
ideas or negations.
COMMA
RULE #7:
*Josie, not her mother, sets the
plot in motion.
*Captain Kaylen remains a tragic
figure, despite her appalling
actions.
EXAMPLES:
•Conventional reasons
-Between city and state [Lazy, OH]
-In a letter [Dear Emily, ]
-Between day and year [October 4,
1977]
-Commas within numbers [2,000 or
1,000,000]
COMMA RULE #8
*With Quotations
Commas go inside quoted
material when a comma is called
for.
COMMA RULE #9:
“You’ve got to be kidding,” wrote
Zachary Gill II about his grandmother
starring as Frankenstein.
“Read the book,” Kelly told the class,
“then you’ll know what happens.”
EXAMPLES:
*Direct Address
When addressing someone in a
sentence, a comma follows the
address.
COMMA RULE #10:
Kim, did you clean your room this
morning?
We thought we told you, Maddie,
about the upcoming test next week.
Ryan, how’re you doin’?
EXAMPLES:
#1 – 10:
Compose an original sentence
that exemplifies each comma rule.
TASK #1: COMMAS
SEMI-COLONS
Rule #1: Independent clauses
Use a semicolon between two
independent clauses not joined
by a conjunction.
SEMICOLON:
The coat is tattered beyond
repair; still, Paige hopes the tailor
can mend it.
Angels live in heaven; demons
live in hell, or so Grant claims.
EXAMPLES:
Rule #2: Items in a series
w/commas
Use semicolons between
items in a series when the
items contain commas.
SEMICOLON
Present at the symposium were
Maggie Massengill, the art critic;
Josh Morgan, the Daily Tribune
reporter; and Olivia McDaries,
the conceptual artist.
EXAMPLE:
In a sentence with two
independent clauses joined by a
conjunctive adverb or transitional
adverb or phrase, put a
semicolon before and a comma
after the adverb.
SEMICOLON RULE #3:
Rebecca wanted to provide students with
all the semicolon rules before they left for
break; however, she forgot about this one.
This is an extremely specific semicolon
rule; moreover, it is one of those rules
which must be followed exactly (or else
Sara will kick you out of the club).
EXAMPLE:
# 11, 12, 13
Compose original sentences that
exemplify the semicolon rules.
TASK #2:
SEMICOLONS
COLONS
Rule #1: Introductions
Use a colon to introduce a list, a
formal elaboration, or rule or
principle
COLON
Example 1 Introducing a list:
Nick’s reading list included three
Latin novels: The Death of Artemio
Cruz, One Hundred Years of
Solitude, and The Green House.
COLON
Example 2: Elaboration:
The plot is founded on
deception: the main character,
Anthony Laricchiuti, has a secret
identity.
COLON
Example 3 Rule or Principle:
Many books would be briefer if their
authors followed the logical principle
known as Occam’s razor: Explanations
should not be multiplied unnecessarily.
COLON
Rule #2: Setting off formal quotations:
Use a colon to introduce a quotation
that is independent from the structure
of the main sentence.
COLON:
In Ginn’s novel The Classy Bean
Pickers, Mr. Rubble exhorts Cam to
stop putting beans in his nose: “You
are going to have weeds growing
out of your ears if you don’t stop
that, young man!”
EXAMPLE:
#14, 15
Compose original sentences
exemplifying the correct uses of the
colon – one that demonstrates
introductory material and one showing
how to set off a formal quotation.
TASK 3: COLONS
DASHES & PARENTHESES
•Use dashes or parentheses to
enclose a sentence element that
interrupts the train of thought or
diversion of the main clause.
*Stronger than parenthetical expression
DASHES AND PARENTHESES
Sometimes (not always) I use dashes
to emphasize the material between,
before, or after the dashes:
Swift’s satire portrays the extreme
prejudice of the English toward the
Irish – that was his point.
DASHES
Soaring in a balloon – Kaylen
first performed this feat in 1783
– is her way of spying on her
friend’s peripatetic behavior.
DASH
EXAMPLE:
The colors of the costume –
blue, scarlet, and yellow – acquire
symbolic meaning in Hannah’s
story.
*Using dashes here eliminate confusion.
EXAMPLE
Sets apart material within sentence that disrupts
and/or not essential to the clause:
Brooke is emphatic (or so she seems) in
her opinion that applying punctuation
correctly shows the mark of a mature
writer.
*I use parentheses to de-emphasize the material within,
spoken like an understatement.
PARENTHESES
#16
Provide an original example using a dash
in a sentence.
TASK 4: DASH
#17
Provide an original example
using a set of parentheses in a
sentence.
TASK 5: PARENTHESES
SHOWING VOICE
Make sure to pay attention to the
nature of your sentences: if a
sentence asks a question or shows
marked emotion, use the correct
punctuation!!!
PAY ATTENTION!!!
OTHER WAYS TO SHOW
“VOICE”
*Italics, capitalization, underlining, bolding,
fonts, etc.
“You misunderstood! I said Othello’s ashes
are in the urn -- not a fellow’s ashes!”
(Othello is my deceased black cat.)
(…yes, I’m a “Poe” fan, but no…I
wouldn’t think of it…)
Finally, use your miscellaneous
marks on the number bar to
suggest profanity or “off-color”
language (such as Who the &*)^
is Jackson Pollock?).
ONCE YOU UNDERSTAND THE “CLUB
RULES,” DON’T BE AFRAID TO USE
PUNCTUATION!!!
Re-write the sentences below using
punctuation to establish a specific
voice.
#18
Rewrite the following sentence
using Dracula’s voice:
Excuse me I am not a vegetarian
TASK 6: ADD VOICES!
#19 Take the sentence below and
impose a regional, “Appalachian”
dialect (I can ask this since I’m a
native). Don’t be afraid (afeerd) to
change words/spelling:
If you do not take out the trash right
now I am going to give you a spanking
ADDING VOICES:
#20
Your mother’s voice:
What’s that smell don’t you ever do
your laundry
ADDING VOICES:

Using punctuation correctly

  • 1.
  • 2.
    Read through thepowerpoint and complete the tasks at the end. [This will be review for most of you]. DIRECTIONS:
  • 3.
    PUNCTUATION Punctuation adds clarityand injects “voice” into written language. For instance, each of the following three sentences are the SAME but have a different meaning due to punctuation.
  • 4.
    Look what’s inthe road ahead. USING PUNCTUATION
  • 5.
    Look! What’s inthe road ahead? USING PUNCTUATION
  • 6.
  • 7.
    Coordinating Conjunctions Use acomma before a coordinating conjunction (and, or, for, nor, but, yet, so) joining independent clauses in a sentence. COMMA RULES RULE #1:
  • 8.
    Anthony and hismother went to the store, but they didn’t find what they were looking for. EXAMPLE:
  • 9.
    Items in aseries Use the Oxford comma to separate items in a series, including between “and” and the last item in the series COMMA RULE #2:
  • 10.
    Brad’s poetry hasinspired plays, films, operas, and paintings. Brooke the Great established a system of fortified towns, reorganized the military forces, and built a fleet of warships. EXAMPLES:
  • 11.
    Listing Adjectives Use acomma between coordinate adjectives (adjectives that separately modify the same noun). COMMA RULE #3
  • 12.
    Cam Haas praisesthe novel’s unaffected, unadorned style. EXAMPLE:
  • 13.
    * Parenthetical Expressions Usecommas to set off parenthetical phrases that tend to “interrupt” the flow of a sentence. COMMA RULE #4:
  • 14.
    *Queen Hailey, forexample, ruled for nearly a century. *Bryson was, from a young age, a trendy dress designer before he became a famous dude rancher. EXAMPLES:
  • 15.
    *Nonessential phrases andclauses Commas are placed before and after nonessential or nonrestrictive modifiers. A nonrestrictive element (modifier), unlike a restrictive one, can be dropped from a sentence without changing the meaning of the sentence. COMMA RULE #5
  • 16.
    Nonrestrictive: The novel takesplace in China, where many languages are spoken. Restrictive: The novel takes place in a land where many languages are spoken. NONRESTRICTIVE (OR NONESSENTIAL) VERSUS RESTRICTIVE (OR ESSENTIAL)
  • 17.
    Danielle Eggers, whois the special guest of tonight’s show, will appear at the podium for autographs at 7:00 pm. EXAMPLE:
  • 18.
    *Introductory phrase, clause,or interjection Use a comma after a long introductory phrase or clause, or after an interjection. COMMA RULE #6:
  • 19.
    *After years ofpractice and hard work, Danielle Filla published her memoirs entitled How I Got the Best of Him. *Although he was virtually unknown in his day, scholars have come to recognize the originality of Connor’s work. EXAMPLES:
  • 20.
    “Hey, isn’t thatmy pencil?,” thought Hannah. EXAMPLE:
  • 21.
    *Contrasting ideas Use commasto set off contrasting ideas or negations. COMMA RULE #7:
  • 22.
    *Josie, not hermother, sets the plot in motion. *Captain Kaylen remains a tragic figure, despite her appalling actions. EXAMPLES:
  • 23.
    •Conventional reasons -Between cityand state [Lazy, OH] -In a letter [Dear Emily, ] -Between day and year [October 4, 1977] -Commas within numbers [2,000 or 1,000,000] COMMA RULE #8
  • 24.
    *With Quotations Commas goinside quoted material when a comma is called for. COMMA RULE #9:
  • 25.
    “You’ve got tobe kidding,” wrote Zachary Gill II about his grandmother starring as Frankenstein. “Read the book,” Kelly told the class, “then you’ll know what happens.” EXAMPLES:
  • 26.
    *Direct Address When addressingsomeone in a sentence, a comma follows the address. COMMA RULE #10:
  • 27.
    Kim, did youclean your room this morning? We thought we told you, Maddie, about the upcoming test next week. Ryan, how’re you doin’? EXAMPLES:
  • 28.
    #1 – 10: Composean original sentence that exemplifies each comma rule. TASK #1: COMMAS
  • 29.
  • 30.
    Rule #1: Independentclauses Use a semicolon between two independent clauses not joined by a conjunction. SEMICOLON:
  • 31.
    The coat istattered beyond repair; still, Paige hopes the tailor can mend it. Angels live in heaven; demons live in hell, or so Grant claims. EXAMPLES:
  • 32.
    Rule #2: Itemsin a series w/commas Use semicolons between items in a series when the items contain commas. SEMICOLON
  • 33.
    Present at thesymposium were Maggie Massengill, the art critic; Josh Morgan, the Daily Tribune reporter; and Olivia McDaries, the conceptual artist. EXAMPLE:
  • 34.
    In a sentencewith two independent clauses joined by a conjunctive adverb or transitional adverb or phrase, put a semicolon before and a comma after the adverb. SEMICOLON RULE #3:
  • 35.
    Rebecca wanted toprovide students with all the semicolon rules before they left for break; however, she forgot about this one. This is an extremely specific semicolon rule; moreover, it is one of those rules which must be followed exactly (or else Sara will kick you out of the club). EXAMPLE:
  • 36.
    # 11, 12,13 Compose original sentences that exemplify the semicolon rules. TASK #2: SEMICOLONS
  • 37.
  • 38.
    Rule #1: Introductions Usea colon to introduce a list, a formal elaboration, or rule or principle COLON
  • 39.
    Example 1 Introducinga list: Nick’s reading list included three Latin novels: The Death of Artemio Cruz, One Hundred Years of Solitude, and The Green House. COLON
  • 40.
    Example 2: Elaboration: Theplot is founded on deception: the main character, Anthony Laricchiuti, has a secret identity. COLON
  • 41.
    Example 3 Ruleor Principle: Many books would be briefer if their authors followed the logical principle known as Occam’s razor: Explanations should not be multiplied unnecessarily. COLON
  • 42.
    Rule #2: Settingoff formal quotations: Use a colon to introduce a quotation that is independent from the structure of the main sentence. COLON:
  • 43.
    In Ginn’s novelThe Classy Bean Pickers, Mr. Rubble exhorts Cam to stop putting beans in his nose: “You are going to have weeds growing out of your ears if you don’t stop that, young man!” EXAMPLE:
  • 44.
    #14, 15 Compose originalsentences exemplifying the correct uses of the colon – one that demonstrates introductory material and one showing how to set off a formal quotation. TASK 3: COLONS
  • 45.
  • 46.
    •Use dashes orparentheses to enclose a sentence element that interrupts the train of thought or diversion of the main clause. *Stronger than parenthetical expression DASHES AND PARENTHESES
  • 47.
    Sometimes (not always)I use dashes to emphasize the material between, before, or after the dashes: Swift’s satire portrays the extreme prejudice of the English toward the Irish – that was his point. DASHES
  • 48.
    Soaring in aballoon – Kaylen first performed this feat in 1783 – is her way of spying on her friend’s peripatetic behavior. DASH EXAMPLE:
  • 49.
    The colors ofthe costume – blue, scarlet, and yellow – acquire symbolic meaning in Hannah’s story. *Using dashes here eliminate confusion. EXAMPLE
  • 50.
    Sets apart materialwithin sentence that disrupts and/or not essential to the clause: Brooke is emphatic (or so she seems) in her opinion that applying punctuation correctly shows the mark of a mature writer. *I use parentheses to de-emphasize the material within, spoken like an understatement. PARENTHESES
  • 51.
    #16 Provide an originalexample using a dash in a sentence. TASK 4: DASH
  • 52.
    #17 Provide an originalexample using a set of parentheses in a sentence. TASK 5: PARENTHESES
  • 53.
  • 54.
    Make sure topay attention to the nature of your sentences: if a sentence asks a question or shows marked emotion, use the correct punctuation!!! PAY ATTENTION!!!
  • 55.
    OTHER WAYS TOSHOW “VOICE” *Italics, capitalization, underlining, bolding, fonts, etc. “You misunderstood! I said Othello’s ashes are in the urn -- not a fellow’s ashes!” (Othello is my deceased black cat.) (…yes, I’m a “Poe” fan, but no…I wouldn’t think of it…)
  • 56.
    Finally, use yourmiscellaneous marks on the number bar to suggest profanity or “off-color” language (such as Who the &*)^ is Jackson Pollock?). ONCE YOU UNDERSTAND THE “CLUB RULES,” DON’T BE AFRAID TO USE PUNCTUATION!!!
  • 57.
    Re-write the sentencesbelow using punctuation to establish a specific voice. #18 Rewrite the following sentence using Dracula’s voice: Excuse me I am not a vegetarian TASK 6: ADD VOICES!
  • 58.
    #19 Take thesentence below and impose a regional, “Appalachian” dialect (I can ask this since I’m a native). Don’t be afraid (afeerd) to change words/spelling: If you do not take out the trash right now I am going to give you a spanking ADDING VOICES:
  • 59.
    #20 Your mother’s voice: What’sthat smell don’t you ever do your laundry ADDING VOICES: