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Thriller Questionnaire – Rough Cut
1. Overall, please rate your enjoyment of our Thriller opening. (1 = poor
& dislike it, 5 = really enjoyed it)
2. How effective did you find the music/sound effects?
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If you were in charge of making improvements, what would you
improve? (Please list and explain answers.)
Rated 1
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Rated 5

2. • Lack of screaming/ glass smashing. If I was kidnapped (which I wouldn't
do 'cause I'm a hunky man) I would be making more noise.
• If I was in charge of making improvements I don't think I would have really
made any...it was really good.
• I'm not sure if it had to be a certain time but it would be better if it was a
bit longer.
• I would alter the bit when the girl is behind the fuzzy glass door and she is
dragged by the neck, by making a close up on the hand that touches her.
• Not really much I would change but probably making the voices less
echoed in the house? Makes it seem more homemade I guess. And try
and reduce the reflection on the missing poster. But that's just me being
picky!!
• I loved the video but I thought the end title of "Missing" didn't fit right with
the ending, so I would change that.
• The cross cutting between the house-scene, and the scene where she
received the ring could have been a little bit smoother. However, only a
minor improvement.
• Do something at the grab scene.
• More angles on the giving of the ring.
• Perhaps make the characters differ in appearance. I got confused as to
who is who as lots of long blonde hair going on!
• I wouldn't make any improvements because it was
AMAAAAAAAAAAAZING! :D
• I didn't like the shoes much. And when she was trying to get out you'd
expect to hear a scream or something.
• when she was giving the ring as a present i would have wrapped it up
and have said happy birthday or something along those lines
• Nothing, it is amazing. I would not change any part of it. I thought the
cinematography was perfect and have never been more enthralled in my
life.
• I think I would have shown the girls face in the ring giving because you
can't tell.
4. Do you understand the plot of our Thriller so far?

3. Yes
Sort Of
No
Please write your interpretations:
• Some sort of rapist guy who kills people, kind of like Desperate
Housewives.
• My interpretation of the plot is that the girl enters the house, delivering
missing posters and finds the ring belonging to her missing friend. She
then can't get out of the house and becomes the next victim...
• I don't understand the ring part completely. Just a girl who goes home to
a open house with no one in there and then someone took her away, and
kills her? Not sure if she actually died..
• A murderer who lures girls (or just people) into a house they think is safe,
before killing them.
• A girl is delivering something to a house when she enters she finds it's
mysteriously empty but the door is unlocked. She searches the house.
Meanwhile the video cuts to a person in a dark room and the person is
using the dark room to wet paper. The girl in the house finds a ring and
the video flashes back to a scene where a different girl is being given the
ring. The girl in the house gets creeped out so she tries to leave. The
door won't open and then the person who was in the dark room gets her
and kills her. He then hangs a photo of her dead body on the line next to
her photo and we find out that the paper he was wetting was a photo of
her.
• A girl has gone missing (perhaps she's run away?) and she returns home,
but nobody (except a very creepy person) is there. The doors locks, the
creepy person emerges. A photo of her dead is developed and placed on
the wall next to lots of other dead people. Sorry if that isn't what the film is
about at all, and I'm casually rambling.
• Is it about a guy who steals teenagers?
• Some girls have gone missing, one mate is looking for one and turns out
this guy has been killing them all, the kill hers and photographs it.

4. • Girls have gone missing. Girl looks for girl with missing poster leaflets,
Girl gets munched.
• Girl looking for missing person finds herself in home of murderer.
• It aims to make people poop themselves. A lot of murders happening...
• Girl in a house (why?) finds a ring of a friend that she gave it too, finds it a
bit weird so tries to escape but doesn't.
• A guy who kills young women and keeps a photo record of all of his kills.
• Jonny is going to do some rather unsavory things to Grace.
• There is a missing girl, and then there are people looking for her and then
she ends up getting caught and dies.
• A girl that's gone missing and the friend is going to find her but gets
trapped.
5. What was your favourite part of our Thriller opening?
• Umm, seeing Hannah. Although, the photo makes me sad, but it was still
you 
• My favourite part of the Thriller opening was the ending where the girl
can't get out of the house.
• The cliffhanger ending.
• I liked the interchanging of the girl in the house, and the bits in the candle
lit room. The editing is really good and runs really smoothly.
• The photos = CREEPY!! :)
• The smoothness between the shots and the way that we got to see the
photo being made throughout the video then we see it being hung up at
the end. I loved it all though!
• The majority of it. The filming was very good; all of the shots were
completely appropriate. I also loved how slowly the main character
moved, as it built up lots of tension.
• The end was spooky.
• The ring and the flashback bit.
• The Dark Room picture processing.
• The dark room.
• The music was perfect for what was happening.
• When she was trying to get out.
• The bit when she was trying to get out of the locked door and the door
behind her opened.
• The bit where the closet door opened... *shudder*.
• I think the house was beautiful and the acting was cool but it lacked a
dog.
• All of it.

5. Yes
Sort Of
No
6. What was your least favourite part of our Thriller opening?
• Look at improvements (lack of screams etc.)
• My least favourite part was the beginning where the girl was entering the
house, and looking around.
• A bit rushed.
• Most probably when the girl is behind the door, but I didn't dislike any of
the bits to be honest. 
• The echoes I think. That's it.
• Just the text "Missing" at the end.
• The suspense... I don’t like suspense.
• When she didn't make a noise when he grabbed her by the door,
anticlimax.
• The pondering of the ring, maybe a little 1 dimensional.
• Getting confused with characters.
• The suspense was quite scary. It made a little bit of wee come out.
• The flashback.
• The ring giving.
• It was all pretty bitchin’.
• I think it was the ring giving because you can't see one of the girls faces.
• The present giving, I mean what?
7. Does our Thriller opening make you want to watch the rest of the
film?

6. Yes
Sort Of
No
6. What was your least favourite part of our Thriller opening?
• Look at improvements (lack of screams etc.)
• My least favourite part was the beginning where the girl was entering the
house, and looking around.
• A bit rushed.
• Most probably when the girl is behind the door, but I didn't dislike any of
the bits to be honest. 
• The echoes I think. That's it.
• Just the text "Missing" at the end.
• The suspense... I don’t like suspense.
• When she didn't make a noise when he grabbed her by the door,
anticlimax.
• The pondering of the ring, maybe a little 1 dimensional.
• Getting confused with characters.
• The suspense was quite scary. It made a little bit of wee come out.
• The flashback.
• The ring giving.
• It was all pretty bitchin’.
• I think it was the ring giving because you can't see one of the girls faces.
• The present giving, I mean what?
7. Does our Thriller opening make you want to watch the rest of the
film?