NEW PITCH 
By Jessica Morgan and Lucy 
Oniyide
Plot 
A teenage boy ends up being at the center of a murder inquiry after his 
girlfriend goes missing. But she has actually been kidnapped by the teenage 
boys best friend and family in an attempt to make the world pure.
Narrative 
A boy plans a romantic picnic for his girlfriend with his best friend, 
but on her way to the date she misdirected by anonymous text 
message thinking it her boyfriend she follows the instructions but 
ends up being kidnapped.
Casting 
• Boyfriend- kola Oladetoun 
• Girlfriend- Zara Rehan 
• Best Friend- Lennon 
Backup Casting 
• Boyfriend-Chiane 
• Girlfriend- Laura Williams 
• Best Friend- Brenya
Locations 
House outside school kitchen filming 
We decided to do the kitchen scenes inside a house to make it more personal to the 
audience so that they can relate with the surroundings. Also we have chosen to do 
this because it fits with the conventions of a thriller film of it happening in a normal 
peaceful neighborhood. 
Backup location- Rainham School for girls kitchen in C block 
If we are unable to get a house kitchen then we will use the school cooking rooms 
as they have everything we need, but it will make it less personal and therefore 
might make it harder for the audience to be able to relate. 
Rainham school for Girls Wooded area filming 
We will be using the wooded area behind the school because it is local and we feel 
safe to film there without any trouble, one problem could be the home for the 
elderly next to the wooded area so we will have to take this into consideration 
when filming not to break their privacy and to not get it in the shots
Questionnaire Questions
Age Rating & Target Audience 
Age rating is 15+ 
• We have chosen this because it won’t have features such as sex which 
would make it an 18 but will include features such as violence and 
explicit language which makes it a 15. Target audience is 16 to 24 
• We have chosen this age because we believe that our opening movie 
will appeal to this age group. We have also chosen this target audience 
because these age groups have money so they are more likely to go to 
the cinema or other places.
Props and Costumes 
Costumes 
Boyfriend 
• Jeans 
• T-shirt 
• Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is raining) 
• Coat 
Girlfriend 
• Jeans 
• T-shirt 
• Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is raining) 
• Coat 
Unknown Guy 
• Jeans 
• T-shirt 
• Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is 
raining) 
• Coat (that is the same as the boyfriends) 
Props 
• Picnic basket 
• Knife 
• Phones 
• Mug 
• Plate 
• Food
Script & Screen Directions 
Outside of school kitchen filming 
Kola- on the phone “hey babe you excited……….no I can’t tell you what we are doing it’s a surprise………………I’ll 
text you the place and the time then all you have to do is follow the signs………………..I’ll see you soon love you babe 
bye” 
Best Friend-Walks in to kitchen “was that Zara?” 
Kola- “yeah she really doesn’t like surprises but thanks to you I’m going to make her like this one” 
Best friend- “no problem man it’s what best friends do but you have to tell me how it went” 
Kola- “I’ll tell you now because we both know it’s going to be killer” (Puts knife in bag) 
Best friend-”she won’t know what hits her” 
Inside school filming wooded area 
Zara- enter wooded area looks around for a second then Rings boyfriend “babe where are you you told me to follow 
the signs but I can’t see any” 
Kola- voice over “turn around” phone cuts out 
Zara- turns around looks for sign “god I hate this” sees sign and starts walking 
Zara- whilst walking “I’m in the middle of god knows where and he wants me to be happy, he knows I hate surprises” 
enters clearing 
Best friend- “SURPRISE” 
Zara- turns around “what are you doing here?!” 
Best friend- runs towards her 
Zara- screams and runs away
Production Timetable 
• Friday 20th November- inside school filming (3:00-4:00) 
• Friday 28th November- Outside of school filming (All Day) 
• Week of the 1st December Editing and Evaluating

Thriller pitch 2

  • 1.
    NEW PITCH ByJessica Morgan and Lucy Oniyide
  • 2.
    Plot A teenageboy ends up being at the center of a murder inquiry after his girlfriend goes missing. But she has actually been kidnapped by the teenage boys best friend and family in an attempt to make the world pure.
  • 3.
    Narrative A boyplans a romantic picnic for his girlfriend with his best friend, but on her way to the date she misdirected by anonymous text message thinking it her boyfriend she follows the instructions but ends up being kidnapped.
  • 4.
    Casting • Boyfriend-kola Oladetoun • Girlfriend- Zara Rehan • Best Friend- Lennon Backup Casting • Boyfriend-Chiane • Girlfriend- Laura Williams • Best Friend- Brenya
  • 5.
    Locations House outsideschool kitchen filming We decided to do the kitchen scenes inside a house to make it more personal to the audience so that they can relate with the surroundings. Also we have chosen to do this because it fits with the conventions of a thriller film of it happening in a normal peaceful neighborhood. Backup location- Rainham School for girls kitchen in C block If we are unable to get a house kitchen then we will use the school cooking rooms as they have everything we need, but it will make it less personal and therefore might make it harder for the audience to be able to relate. Rainham school for Girls Wooded area filming We will be using the wooded area behind the school because it is local and we feel safe to film there without any trouble, one problem could be the home for the elderly next to the wooded area so we will have to take this into consideration when filming not to break their privacy and to not get it in the shots
  • 6.
  • 7.
    Age Rating &Target Audience Age rating is 15+ • We have chosen this because it won’t have features such as sex which would make it an 18 but will include features such as violence and explicit language which makes it a 15. Target audience is 16 to 24 • We have chosen this age because we believe that our opening movie will appeal to this age group. We have also chosen this target audience because these age groups have money so they are more likely to go to the cinema or other places.
  • 8.
    Props and Costumes Costumes Boyfriend • Jeans • T-shirt • Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is raining) • Coat Girlfriend • Jeans • T-shirt • Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is raining) • Coat Unknown Guy • Jeans • T-shirt • Trainers (boots are a possibility if it is raining) • Coat (that is the same as the boyfriends) Props • Picnic basket • Knife • Phones • Mug • Plate • Food
  • 9.
    Script & ScreenDirections Outside of school kitchen filming Kola- on the phone “hey babe you excited……….no I can’t tell you what we are doing it’s a surprise………………I’ll text you the place and the time then all you have to do is follow the signs………………..I’ll see you soon love you babe bye” Best Friend-Walks in to kitchen “was that Zara?” Kola- “yeah she really doesn’t like surprises but thanks to you I’m going to make her like this one” Best friend- “no problem man it’s what best friends do but you have to tell me how it went” Kola- “I’ll tell you now because we both know it’s going to be killer” (Puts knife in bag) Best friend-”she won’t know what hits her” Inside school filming wooded area Zara- enter wooded area looks around for a second then Rings boyfriend “babe where are you you told me to follow the signs but I can’t see any” Kola- voice over “turn around” phone cuts out Zara- turns around looks for sign “god I hate this” sees sign and starts walking Zara- whilst walking “I’m in the middle of god knows where and he wants me to be happy, he knows I hate surprises” enters clearing Best friend- “SURPRISE” Zara- turns around “what are you doing here?!” Best friend- runs towards her Zara- screams and runs away
  • 10.
    Production Timetable •Friday 20th November- inside school filming (3:00-4:00) • Friday 28th November- Outside of school filming (All Day) • Week of the 1st December Editing and Evaluating