A girl wakes up in a hospital bed with flashbacks of a party. As she explores the hospital, she hears screaming and finds herself transported to different strange locations like a flat and communal bathroom. She sees a young girl with cuts on her face and is later startled by a figure in a black hood. The document proposes possible taglines and titles for a psychological thriller about this girl, Dawn Crimson, who seems to be a target as she finds herself in dangerous situations unable to escape.

1. What you expect from my thriller Do u have the feeling that you are alone. A girl wakes up in bed, she sits up, trying to remember how she got there, she gets flashbacks of a party. As she gets out of bed she walks to the door, as she opens it she finds herself in a hospital hallway. She hears crying and screaming coming from the other end, she starts running to the opposite the screaming and crying get louder she runs into a room, as she looks around, she gets a flash back to when she was having a meal with her mum & dad having fun around the table. She walk into this room touching the table as she remembers. She hears a noise from one of the rooms in the flat she runs towards it when she sees another door close in front of her as she opens it she finds herself in a flat corridor she tries running down the stairs but she ends up coming down the same floor, as she tries to walk back up in a confused state, she ends up walking up to the same floor, she panics starts running through loads of different rooms, bath room, dining room, hallway. Then she finds herself in a white room with a small girl reading a book in the corner of the room as she lowers the book, she sees this small girl has cuts all over her face. She finds another door finding herself in a communal toilet she walks to the mirror looks at her reflection, looks at herself then turns the tap on, washes her face then sees a figure with a black hood on, hiding their identity. She then quickly looks behind her then there is nothing there…….

2. Possible taglines What you don't understand can kill you. You have nothing to lose but your mind. There just dying for a second chance. Her mind is her prison. It doesn't matter if you're not perfect...You will be. You can't escape if you can't leave. Possible names Dawn Crimson

3. The title of my thriller could be.. Rooms, but I see this as a name just to replace the cubes name made in 1997. It is a Canadian psychological thriller/horror/science fiction film, directed by Vincenzo Natali. The film was a very successful product of the Canadian Film Centre's First Feature Project. Despite its low budget , the film achieved moderate commercial success So I have gone with a simple name, a name were you would want to know what happens next Simple names are most effective. So I came up with Dawn Crimson

4. Act 1 In act 1 a girl Who: 17 year old girl/her name Dawn Crimson Dawn Crimson : meaning ; morning of Blood. Where: in a hospital bed with blood stained knifes and sharp objects. Why: she is a target to the

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6. ACT 1…. A 17 year old girl is on top of a wooden table while she is waking up she has fast flash backs of when she is at an amazing rave, this happens 5 times, she can remember a hooded man with an accomplice treys to take her away with this other guy from the night. wakes up in a small dark room with metal knifes, and on that is a array of sharp object they appear dirty and stained with blood, she is not tied down so she jumps out of the chair and runs out of the room, she finds her self in a dark old abandoned weir house, she is really distressed she looks for a exit. ACT 2…. The phisyco She gets spiked