The document provides guidelines for effectively evaluating writing assignments, including clearly outlining the purpose and requirements of assignments, providing models and grading rubrics, and focusing feedback on key areas for improvement. Teachers should explain assignment goals, give detailed instructions and grading criteria, discuss sample papers, and limit comments to one or two most important issues to address per paper. Grading should balance evaluation of content and writing mechanics.
GRIPS Academic Writing Workshop: process, not crisisLawrie Hunter
Focus: PhD students (but applies to masters)
To use the writing center services of GRIPS' CPC effectively, you need to know
(a) what the problems are in your writing,
(b) how to work with a model paper, and
(c) how to work with a mentor.
GRIPS Academic Writing Workshop: process, not crisisLawrie Hunter
Focus: PhD students (but applies to masters)
To use the writing center services of GRIPS' CPC effectively, you need to know
(a) what the problems are in your writing,
(b) how to work with a model paper, and
(c) how to work with a mentor.
Personal Essay RevisionDue Week 5 and worth 150 pointsIt tak.docxkarlhennesey
Personal Essay Revision
Due Week 5 and worth 150 points
It takes practice to become an effective written communicator. In this course, you will practice writing effectively for different purposes.
Identify a topic from the list below. Each topic identifies an issue that you will investigate over the 11-week term. Throughout this course, you will discuss why you chose the topic research and then propose a way to address the issue. You will write a draft and revision for two types of essays.
Point of View: Use First Person POV, i.e. “I,” for the personal essay. Use Third Person POV, i.e. “he/she/they,” for the stance essay. Do not use the Second Person POV, “you.”
Topic list: Choose ONE topic to write about throughout the course.
1. Treating Animals Humanely
2. Finding Child Care
3. Working Remotely
4. Monitoring Toddlers and Technology
5. Examining Reality TV
ENG 115
ASSIGNMENT 1: PERSONAL ESSAY REVISION
Due Week 5 and worth 150 points
Now that you have completed a first draft of this essay, it is time to carefully review the feedback your instructor has provided.
Then, make revisions and submit a final draft of your personal essay. What is a personal essay? It’s one of many types of formal
essays. All formal essays maintain the same basic structure: Introduction with a thesis statement, supporting paragraphs, and
conclusion. The personal essay is a narrative in which the author writes about an experience that was highly meaningful (usually a
lesson was learned). For this assignment, choose a topic and discuss three reasons why the topic is important to you. The topic
choices are presented in your WebText. To make this a personal essay, it’s important to include one or more stories from your life
that demonstrate why your selected topic is meaningful to you.
Important note: Personal Essays DO NOT incorporate any type of research from the WebText or outside sources. If you have written
a Personal Essay in a previous course, please reach out to your professor to see if you can re-use it. You are not permitted to use ANY
paper from an unrelated current or past course.
INSTRUCTIONS:
You are required to use your WebText to draft your essay in the templates!
Compose a two (2) page paper in which you do the following:
A. Structure Your Paper: Story, Introduction, Supporting/Body, Conclusion
1. Incorporate a story from your life into one or more of the following sections: introduction, supporting/body
paragraph(s), or conclusion.
a. Is your personal story relevant to your topic?
b. Is your personal story structured effectively, with a clear progression of events?
c. Is your language descriptive and precise?
d. Do you include an appropriate level of detail in your story – just enough to help the reader understand
your main points?
2. Write an introduction paragraph, which includes your thesis statement. It is suggested that this paragraph contain
5-7 sentences.
a. Does your introduction incl ...
Assessment Task 1 Leadership Development ReportThis assessmen.docxdavezstarr61655
Assessment Task 1: Leadership Development Report
This assessment task is a REPORT.
This requires you to use a particular style of writing which involves both the way the report is structured and the way that you acknowledge other people’s ideas used in your work.
Your second step should be mastering the art of referencing. There are many styles of referencing in use in different disciplines and geographical locations.
HARVARD REFERENCING is required.
Remember: this current assessment task is a REPORT not an ESSAY.
The critical thinking element
We want you to be very comfortable with questioning everything you read and hear.
Anyone can remember facts and state other people’s views but a far more useful skill is to critically review what you read and hear and decide for yourself how reliable, accurate, applicable, contemporary, objective and fair it is.
In this report, your assessor will value the fact that you are able to see both benefits and deficiencies in a particular theory. Make sure you look through the critical thinking exercises in the course site to get a clear understanding of critical thinking!
How many references should I cite?
There is no right answer to this question because it all depends on what you write in your report. Some statements you make in your report will certainly need a reference to support them.
So, to determine how many references you need to cite, first (as described in the report writing tutorial) draw a mind map of ideas to go into your report and for each idea try to link it to a reference source.
How will the report be marked?
Your lecturers have already created a marking rubric that will be used to award you a mark out of 50 as the report comprises 50 of the overall 100 marks available in this course.
The rubric is reproduced over the page and will be used as a way of providing feedback to you on how you performed.
The most important thing about the rubric is that it DEFINES what you will be marked on. If you include additional material that is not mentioned in the rubric it will not attract any marks, if you forget to write about something listed in the rubric, you’ll lose marks.
So the rubric is like a “contract” between you and your lecturer. Following the rubric clearly is your best strategy for a good result
THE TASK
1. Explore the Central Michigan University competencies model (5 clusters eg. Self-Management, Leading others, Task management, Innovation and Social Responsibility)
2. Identify your current strengths and weaknesses as a leader (or potential leader) within the context of the CMU (eg. Create a clear vision of yourself in approx. 5-10 years time – only then will you be able to identify your strengths and weaknesses)
3. Review the leadership theories explored in this course and describe how they relate to you and your leadership development (again in the context of the CMU model eg. Blake and Mouton model grid)
4. Create a leadership development plan (*Starting point – Acti.
Assessment Task 1 Leadership Development ReportThis assessmen.docxfredharris32
Assessment Task 1: Leadership Development Report
This assessment task is a REPORT.
This requires you to use a particular style of writing which involves both the way the report is structured and the way that you acknowledge other people’s ideas used in your work.
Your second step should be mastering the art of referencing. There are many styles of referencing in use in different disciplines and geographical locations.
HARVARD REFERENCING is required.
Remember: this current assessment task is a REPORT not an ESSAY.
The critical thinking element
We want you to be very comfortable with questioning everything you read and hear.
Anyone can remember facts and state other people’s views but a far more useful skill is to critically review what you read and hear and decide for yourself how reliable, accurate, applicable, contemporary, objective and fair it is.
In this report, your assessor will value the fact that you are able to see both benefits and deficiencies in a particular theory. Make sure you look through the critical thinking exercises in the course site to get a clear understanding of critical thinking!
How many references should I cite?
There is no right answer to this question because it all depends on what you write in your report. Some statements you make in your report will certainly need a reference to support them.
So, to determine how many references you need to cite, first (as described in the report writing tutorial) draw a mind map of ideas to go into your report and for each idea try to link it to a reference source.
How will the report be marked?
Your lecturers have already created a marking rubric that will be used to award you a mark out of 50 as the report comprises 50 of the overall 100 marks available in this course.
The rubric is reproduced over the page and will be used as a way of providing feedback to you on how you performed.
The most important thing about the rubric is that it DEFINES what you will be marked on. If you include additional material that is not mentioned in the rubric it will not attract any marks, if you forget to write about something listed in the rubric, you’ll lose marks.
So the rubric is like a “contract” between you and your lecturer. Following the rubric clearly is your best strategy for a good result
THE TASK
1. Explore the Central Michigan University competencies model (5 clusters eg. Self-Management, Leading others, Task management, Innovation and Social Responsibility)
2. Identify your current strengths and weaknesses as a leader (or potential leader) within the context of the CMU (eg. Create a clear vision of yourself in approx. 5-10 years time – only then will you be able to identify your strengths and weaknesses)
3. Review the leadership theories explored in this course and describe how they relate to you and your leadership development (again in the context of the CMU model eg. Blake and Mouton model grid)
4. Create a leadership development plan (*Starting point – Acti ...
From the CALPER/LARC Testing and Assessment Webinar Series
Download the handouts and ppt: https://larc.sdsu.edu/archived-events/
View the recording: https://vimeo.com/60470458
Webinar Date: February 21, 2013
Project 4 PortfolioWriter’s Role EvaluatorAudience UA Stude.docxbriancrawford30935
Project 4: Portfolio
Writer’s Role: Evaluator
Audience: UA Students, Your Current and Subsequent Writing Instructor
Genre: Portfolio
Due Dates:
· Wednesday, Nov. 30th: Portfolio Idea Proposal
· Monday, Dec. 5th: First Draft of Portfolio
· Friday, Dec. 9th: Final Portfolio due via d2l by 7:59 AM
The goal of this final portfolio is to reflect on and demonstrate your learning in this course. Kathleen Yancey, an expert in reflective writing, says writers need to know their work before they can like or critique it. Applying what we’ve learned to subsequent (and different) writing contexts depends on taking time to assess your writing practices. Evaluating your progress in English 101, it follows, should convince readers that you know your work and you can reflect on and assess your writing experiences. Project 4, as a portfolio, allows you to document your performance in this class by examining what you’ve produced this semester in relation to some of the student learning outcomes. So, too, the course has emphasized key terms that represent core concepts in writing, and they will be useful vocabulary for explaining what you’ve learned about writing.
Course Key Terms
· Audience
· Purpose
· Context
· Genre
· Community
· Rhetorical situation
Before beginning your portfolio, then, it is important to carefully read over the learning outcomes and key terms (as we have been doing throughout the semester). Decide which outcomes and key terms you would like to highlight; in the reflective essay, you will explain how learning is demonstrated (or areas in which you still need to improve) in the artifacts you’ve curated to represent your writing.
Portfolio Requirements
Task #1: Curate Portfolio Artifacts.
An important part of reflection involves reviewing and selecting samples of your writing across the semester. “Any writing” means anything you’ve written for English 101. It might be notes you made in class. It might be all of the major assignments with rough drafts. It might be one or two homework assignments that you felt had a big influence on your learning this semester. It could even be all of the homework assignments put together in a way that you think demonstrates learning outcomes.
Of course, learning is not always captured in successes. While you will predominately select writing that illustrates success in learning outcomes in the portfolio, you will also select at least one instructive failure, one example of writing that represents an outcome you have struggled with and will continue to work on. Often a critical incident with writing, or an instructive failure, prompts the best learning. With that in mind, use the following guidelines to curate a portfolio:
· Select artifacts that demonstrate mastery of one or two learning outcomes in each goal (see below). Remember, any writing you did for class counts.
· Select one artifact that represents your struggle with one learning outcome.
· Design a table of contents (TOC) with clear titles.
LED 6510 Lesson Plan Peer Review FormTitle of Lesson Plan Revi.docxjesssueann
LED 6510 Lesson Plan Peer Review Form
Title of Lesson Plan Reviewed:
Your Peer’s Name:
Your Name:
Directions: Each student will be assigned 2 peers’ draft of final lesson plan for review on Canvas. Upon completion of reading, do provide your feedback to your peers using the following directions:
1) use the peer-review form to provide overall feedback for the other students' draft of lesson plan; Attach the forms with your feedback to your peers while you have completed peer review activity;
· Per the requirement, each student’ draft of lesson plan should include the following components (The other components are optional depending on each individual’s progress, so you just provide your feedback based on the content in the lesson plan)
· The below section is mandary to be reviewd and provided with feedback using the guided question in this form, highlighted in red in the form
· Language comparison, grammar focus of instruction, and establishment of relevance
· Introductory Statement of Your Language Task
· Structured input activity, structured practice activity and output assessment activity
2) For the grammatical, spelling, mechanic and other suggestions, kindly use the "Review" or "Track changes" button in the student's original word document and post your comment on the right side of the column of the word document, and then return the document to your peers with your comment/feedback.
1. Does the author clearly present the grade level of students, concentration domain, materials and digital tools need and time needed for the lesson?
I’m not sure if the students are in first grade or in middle school. Be more specific.
2. Does the author concisely describe the following aspects in Learners & Learning Environment? How can the author improve in each aspect, if any?
Yes, but it is confusing because there is no header indicating that she is talking about it.
· Language comparison, grammar focus of instruction, and establishment of relevance:
Yes, it is descriptive.
· Introductory Statement of Your Language Task
Yes, it is clear.
· Review of Terminology
Good review of the terminology
· Annotation
The annotations are not highlighted in yellow.
3. Does the author concisely define the following aspects in Standard and Outcomes? How can the author improve in each aspect, if any?
Yes they are clearly outlined. If they were in bullet points it would be easier to read.
4. Does the author understand the concepts of structured input activity, structured practice activity and output/assessment activity clearly and concisely?
The structured input activity is not clearly defined. The output assessment activity should be more descriptive. Also is the instructional practice the structured practice activity? The headers should be more clearly defined.
Does the author demonstrate the structured input activity, structured practice activity and output/assessment activity in a clear and organized way? Does the author provide teaching r.
To learn some British and American slang terms and practice them in sample
dialogues;
• To practice reading for general idea, listening for gist and writing skills;
• Practice the language of agreeing/disagreeing in speech
Honest Reviews of Tim Han LMA Course Program.pptxtimhan337
Personal development courses are widely available today, with each one promising life-changing outcomes. Tim Han’s Life Mastery Achievers (LMA) Course has drawn a lot of interest. In addition to offering my frank assessment of Success Insider’s LMA Course, this piece examines the course’s effects via a variety of Tim Han LMA course reviews and Success Insider comments.
Operation “Blue Star” is the only event in the history of Independent India where the state went into war with its own people. Even after about 40 years it is not clear if it was culmination of states anger over people of the region, a political game of power or start of dictatorial chapter in the democratic setup.
The people of Punjab felt alienated from main stream due to denial of their just demands during a long democratic struggle since independence. As it happen all over the word, it led to militant struggle with great loss of lives of military, police and civilian personnel. Killing of Indira Gandhi and massacre of innocent Sikhs in Delhi and other India cities was also associated with this movement.
Synthetic Fiber Construction in lab .pptxPavel ( NSTU)
Synthetic fiber production is a fascinating and complex field that blends chemistry, engineering, and environmental science. By understanding these aspects, students can gain a comprehensive view of synthetic fiber production, its impact on society and the environment, and the potential for future innovations. Synthetic fibers play a crucial role in modern society, impacting various aspects of daily life, industry, and the environment. ynthetic fibers are integral to modern life, offering a range of benefits from cost-effectiveness and versatility to innovative applications and performance characteristics. While they pose environmental challenges, ongoing research and development aim to create more sustainable and eco-friendly alternatives. Understanding the importance of synthetic fibers helps in appreciating their role in the economy, industry, and daily life, while also emphasizing the need for sustainable practices and innovation.
A Strategic Approach: GenAI in EducationPeter Windle
Artificial Intelligence (AI) technologies such as Generative AI, Image Generators and Large Language Models have had a dramatic impact on teaching, learning and assessment over the past 18 months. The most immediate threat AI posed was to Academic Integrity with Higher Education Institutes (HEIs) focusing their efforts on combating the use of GenAI in assessment. Guidelines were developed for staff and students, policies put in place too. Innovative educators have forged paths in the use of Generative AI for teaching, learning and assessments leading to pockets of transformation springing up across HEIs, often with little or no top-down guidance, support or direction.
This Gasta posits a strategic approach to integrating AI into HEIs to prepare staff, students and the curriculum for an evolving world and workplace. We will highlight the advantages of working with these technologies beyond the realm of teaching, learning and assessment by considering prompt engineering skills, industry impact, curriculum changes, and the need for staff upskilling. In contrast, not engaging strategically with Generative AI poses risks, including falling behind peers, missed opportunities and failing to ensure our graduates remain employable. The rapid evolution of AI technologies necessitates a proactive and strategic approach if we are to remain relevant.
The French Revolution, which began in 1789, was a period of radical social and political upheaval in France. It marked the decline of absolute monarchies, the rise of secular and democratic republics, and the eventual rise of Napoleon Bonaparte. This revolutionary period is crucial in understanding the transition from feudalism to modernity in Europe.
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June 3, 2024 Anti-Semitism Letter Sent to MIT President Kornbluth and MIT Cor...Levi Shapiro
Letter from the Congress of the United States regarding Anti-Semitism sent June 3rd to MIT President Sally Kornbluth, MIT Corp Chair, Mark Gorenberg
Dear Dr. Kornbluth and Mr. Gorenberg,
The US House of Representatives is deeply concerned by ongoing and pervasive acts of antisemitic
harassment and intimidation at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). Failing to act decisively to ensure a safe learning environment for all students would be a grave dereliction of your responsibilities as President of MIT and Chair of the MIT Corporation.
This Congress will not stand idly by and allow an environment hostile to Jewish students to persist. The House believes that your institution is in violation of Title VI of the Civil Rights Act, and the inability or
unwillingness to rectify this violation through action requires accountability.
Postsecondary education is a unique opportunity for students to learn and have their ideas and beliefs challenged. However, universities receiving hundreds of millions of federal funds annually have denied
students that opportunity and have been hijacked to become venues for the promotion of terrorism, antisemitic harassment and intimidation, unlawful encampments, and in some cases, assaults and riots.
The House of Representatives will not countenance the use of federal funds to indoctrinate students into hateful, antisemitic, anti-American supporters of terrorism. Investigations into campus antisemitism by the Committee on Education and the Workforce and the Committee on Ways and Means have been expanded into a Congress-wide probe across all relevant jurisdictions to address this national crisis. The undersigned Committees will conduct oversight into the use of federal funds at MIT and its learning environment under authorities granted to each Committee.
• The Committee on Education and the Workforce has been investigating your institution since December 7, 2023. The Committee has broad jurisdiction over postsecondary education, including its compliance with Title VI of the Civil Rights Act, campus safety concerns over disruptions to the learning environment, and the awarding of federal student aid under the Higher Education Act.
• The Committee on Oversight and Accountability is investigating the sources of funding and other support flowing to groups espousing pro-Hamas propaganda and engaged in antisemitic harassment and intimidation of students. The Committee on Oversight and Accountability is the principal oversight committee of the US House of Representatives and has broad authority to investigate “any matter” at “any time” under House Rule X.
• The Committee on Ways and Means has been investigating several universities since November 15, 2023, when the Committee held a hearing entitled From Ivory Towers to Dark Corners: Investigating the Nexus Between Antisemitism, Tax-Exempt Universities, and Terror Financing. The Committee followed the hearing with letters to those institutions on January 10, 202
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1. Evaluating Writing Assignments
Successful writing assignments depend on preparation, careful and thorough
instructions, and on explicit criteria for evaluation. Although experience with a
given assignment will suggest ways of improving a specific paper in class, the
following guidelines should help you anticipate many potential problems and
considerably reduce your grading time.
I. Purpose
Explain the purpose of the writing assignment.
II. The assignment
A. Provide complete written instructions.
B. Provide format models where possible.
C. Discuss sample strong, average, and weak papers.
III. Evaluation
On a grading sheet, indicate the percentage of the grade devoted to content and
the percentage devoted to writing skills (expression, punctuation, spelling,
mechanics). The grading sheet should indicate the important content features.
Five Principles
As you think about creating writing assignments, use these five principles:
• Tie the writing task to specific pedagogical goals.
• Note rhetorical aspects of the task, i.e., audience, purpose, writing situation.
• Make all elements of the task clear.
• Include grading criteria on the assignment sheet.
• Break down the task into manageable steps.
***
Checksheet 1:
Have I
• written out the assignment so that students can take away a copy of the
precise task?
• specified the audience and purpose of the assignment?
• included my grading criteria on the assignment sheet?
• given students models or appropriate samples?
Checksheet 2:
1. Is the assignment written clearly on the board or on a handout?
2. Do the instructions explain the purpose(s) of the assignment?
3. Is the assignment stated in precise language that cannot be misunderstood?
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2. 4. Is the due date clearly visible? (Are late assignments accepted? If so, any
penalty?)
5. Are the grading criteria spelled out as specifically as possible? How much
does content count? Organization? Writing skills? One grade or separate
grades on form and content? Etc.
6. Does the grading criteria section specifically indicate which writing skills the
teacher considers important as well as the various aspects of content?
7. What part of the course grade is this assignment?
8. Does the assignment include use of models (strong, average, weak) or
samples outlines?
Focus your commenting energy
• remember that students can only take in so much information about a paper
at one time;
• writers tend to feel overloaded quickly by excessively detailed feedback
about their writing;
• commenting exhaustively on every feature of a draft is counter-productive;
• too many comments can make student writers feel as if the teacher is taking
control of the paper and cutting off productive avenues for revision;
• peer review is excellent way to enhance your students' writing experience
• typically, it is recommend that teachers comment in detail on the one or two
most important features of a paper, determined either by your criteria for the
assignment or by the seriousness of the effect on a reader of a given paper.
Sample policies on grading grammar versus content
Form:
Your paper should contain from 1,500 to 2,000 words, or about five to seven
pages. The paper must be typewritten, double spaced, and bound. Neatness is
essential.
A Check List of Points to Consider:
I. Mechanics
Neatness. Is your report clean, neatly organized, with a look of professional pride
about it?
Spelling. Two points will be deducted for each misspelled word.
Grammar and punctuation. Five points will be deducted for each sentence which
uses improper grammar or punctuation.
Form. Is your paper in the proper form?
II. Content. . . .
NB! – be careful with assigning points for errors – you will have to mark
and count them all
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3. Use a grading sheet
Grading comment sheets or checksheets give teachers and students two
advantages over free-form grading:
• Even if you decide to use a simple checksheet that ranks students'
performance on each criterion on a 1-10 scale, students will be able to see
quickly where their strengths and weaknesses are as writers for this
assignment.
• Grading sheets, particularly checksheets, typically save teachers time. Even
composition teachers don't comment exhaustively about each criterion for
each assignment; they can comment at some length on just one or two
points (typically the major strengths and the major weakness) and then rely
on the checksheet to fill in for less crucial areas of the paper.
Grading Sheet 1
Strengths Weaknesses
I. Introductory paragraphs
A. Lead-in
B. Thesis (narrowed topic + clear
stance)
II. Body paragraphs: (Effective
transition, clear focus,
development with details, clear
transitional words) A. Body
paragraph one
B. Body paragraph two
C. Body paragraph three
D. Body paragraph four
E. etc.
III. Conclusion
IV. Punctuation, grammar,
style, spelling
Grade for essay: ___________
Revision Instructions:
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4. ***
Grading Sheet 2
These are the areas in which your paper is
strong weak
Thesis
Development
Paragraphs
Sentences
Grammar
Word choice
Punctuation
Style
General Grading Criteria: Composition 1xx
Very Consistently, clearly and effectively communicates it purpose to its
Good audience in all areas of writing: Consistently clear focus, sufficient
development, and coherent in terms of organization and style. The
ideas are also well thought-out and worthwhile.
Good Strong in most areas, but intermittently deficient in one area of
containing minor problems in more than one area. For instance, the
essay may be strong in all areas but have some problems with
audience contact, portions may lose focus or be underdeveloped, or
there may be some distracting inconsistencies or errors in style
(coherence).
Fair The essay generally does the main job of the assignment--so it
maintains its purpose. But it's either intermittently deficient in two
categories or consistently deficient in one. For instance, there may be
intermittent problems with both audience contact and development, or
the whole essay may be consistently underdeveloped.
Poor The essay is consistently deficient in two areas--for example,
consistently unfocused and underdeveloped to the degree that the
deficiencies undermine the purpose of the essay. An unfocused and
underdeveloped essay, for instance, would not be able to convey its
message to a reader in any significant way. The essay could also have
enough serious problems in a combination of areas that the purpose is
undermined. It could also miss a major portion of the assignment--like
an essay which has no connection to the assigned topic.
Very poor This is an essay that either was not turned in, or is so deficient in so
many areas that it might just as well not have been. Or, it could be an
essay which completely misses the assignment altogether.
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5. 7 Tips for Evaluating Student Writing
1. Respond to the content first, not the mechanics, of each paper you read.
Sometimes we spend more time looking for errors than ideas.
2. Respond positively and personally where possible.
Caring is the necessary first step to actually writing better.
3. Comment critically on one item at a time. Once you see that a paper has
multiple problems, it may be a good idea to single out one or two conceptual or
organizational problems for comment, suggesting that the other problems will be
dealt with on subsequent drafts.
4. Be specific when you comment on problems. Point out exactly what you
object to but without necessarily correcting it yourself; that way the writer has
something concrete to go on when he or she turns attention to revision.
5. Learning to critique is a part of learning to write. Include peer evaluation
where you can in your class. Learning how to be critical is part of learning how to
write yourself.
6. Discuss samples of good and bad writing with your class. Bring the
students into the evaluation process, trusting them to have voices and make
reasonable judgments.
7. What is said includes how it is said: Don't split grades. It is important to
quit separating ideas from the language in which they're expressed.
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