'The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom' is a comprehensive and practical manual for students on how to write effective sentences for a variety of text types. The guide introduces students to grammar - different parts of speech - in the context of text response, poetry analysis, persuasive, creative, comparative and non-fiction writing.
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This is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 1 shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
* Text response analysis
* Persuasive writing
* Poetry analysis
* Creative writing
* Non-fiction writing
* Analysing images
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 1 equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
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Designed for Year levels 9 & 10, this is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2 (2nd Ed.) shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
*Text response analysis (analytical and personal text response)
*Persuasive writing
*Poetry analysis
*Non fiction writing (features articles and explainers)
*Creative writing
*Reflective writing (including personal reflective essays)
*Analysis of persuasive writing
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2 (2nd Ed.) equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
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This is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. 'The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2' shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
*Text response analysis
*Persuasive writing
*Poetry analysis
*Comparative analysis
*Creative writing
*Reflective writing
*Analysis of persuasive writing
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. 'The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2' equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
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The Senior English Writing Handbook (4th Edition) has been written for the new VCE English study design. This is not just another textbook filled with endless descriptions and information about each area of the English and EAL study design. Instead, The Senior English Writing Handbook shows students how to write successfully for each area of study in the new English and EAL study design. Each chapter focuses on a different area of study, guiding students through its aim and purpose and showing them how to develop their vocabulary and write purposeful, meaningful and sophisticated sentences and paragraphs. By providing students with a range of annotated exemplars and step by step instructions for how to write, the Handbook helps every VCE English and EAL student achieve success.
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This document is a handbook providing guidance for senior English students on developing their writing skills. It contains chapters on writing persuasive pieces, text response essays, comparing texts, creative responses to texts, analyzing arguments, and preparing for the English as an Additional Language listening exam. Each chapter outlines various tools and strategies for students to employ, such as generating arguments, structuring ideas, writing introductions and conclusions, analyzing language, and developing study plans. The handbook aims to equip students with practical resources and techniques for success in their senior English studies.
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Here are three examples of essay topics with key words circled:
The Great Gatsby highlights the destructive nature of the American Dream.
The Kite Runner explores the impact of betrayal on relationships.
In his poetry, John Donne uses metaphors to express complex ideas about love.
Phase 2: Brainstorming examples
and topic sentences
Once you've identified the key words, the next step is to brainstorm examples from the text that relate
to those words. Having a range of different types of examples is important - from different characters,
events, quotes, symbols etc.
You should then use the examples to write topic sentences for paragraphs that directly respond to the
key idea in the topic
This document provides guidance on essay writing structure and format. It discusses introducing a topic and thesis statement in the introductory paragraph. The body should include multiple paragraphs with a topic sentence, proofs, and comment for each point that proves the thesis. A concluding paragraph should restate the thesis and return to a general perspective. An optional rebuttal paragraph can acknowledge alternative arguments. Outlines should include the thesis, rebuttal points, topic sentences, proofs, and conclusion. Body paragraphs should be organized logically using principles like chronology or cause and effect. The document concludes with tips for writing strong essays like avoiding first person and contractions.
This document provides instruction and examples for writing comparison and contrast paragraphs. It discusses two common patterns for organizing comparison/contrast paragraphs: point-by-point and block. The point-by-point pattern discusses each subject point-by-point, while the block pattern discusses all aspects of one subject before moving to the other subject. The document also provides examples of topic sentences, transition words to use, and sample outlines for organizing comparison/contrast paragraphs in both patterns.
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This is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 1 shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
* Text response analysis
* Persuasive writing
* Poetry analysis
* Creative writing
* Non-fiction writing
* Analysing images
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 1 equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
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Designed for Year levels 9 & 10, this is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2 (2nd Ed.) shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
*Text response analysis (analytical and personal text response)
*Persuasive writing
*Poetry analysis
*Non fiction writing (features articles and explainers)
*Creative writing
*Reflective writing (including personal reflective essays)
*Analysis of persuasive writing
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2 (2nd Ed.) equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2jpinnuck
This is not just another grammar book filled with dull exercises and pointless activities. 'The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2' shows you how sentences are constructed using parts of speech, punctuation and different structures. Rather than looking at these complex ideas on their own, this book shows students how to use these grammatical ideas to create better sentences in the context of these common text types:
*Text response analysis
*Persuasive writing
*Poetry analysis
*Comparative analysis
*Creative writing
*Reflective writing
*Analysis of persuasive writing
Each chapter focuses on one text type, guiding students through the mechanics of how to produce sentences for every stage of the text. 'The Student Guide To Writing Better Sentences In The English Classroom 2' equips students to construct their own powerful sentences with comprehensive sets of examples, word lists and sentence crafting formulas.
The Senior English Writing Handbook (4th ed) - Full Previewjpinnuck
The Senior English Writing Handbook (4th Edition) has been written for the new VCE English study design. This is not just another textbook filled with endless descriptions and information about each area of the English and EAL study design. Instead, The Senior English Writing Handbook shows students how to write successfully for each area of study in the new English and EAL study design. Each chapter focuses on a different area of study, guiding students through its aim and purpose and showing them how to develop their vocabulary and write purposeful, meaningful and sophisticated sentences and paragraphs. By providing students with a range of annotated exemplars and step by step instructions for how to write, the Handbook helps every VCE English and EAL student achieve success.
The Senior English Writing Handbook - Third Editionjpinnuck
This document is a handbook providing guidance for senior English students on developing their writing skills. It contains chapters on writing persuasive pieces, text response essays, comparing texts, creative responses to texts, analyzing arguments, and preparing for the English as an Additional Language listening exam. Each chapter outlines various tools and strategies for students to employ, such as generating arguments, structuring ideas, writing introductions and conclusions, analyzing language, and developing study plans. The handbook aims to equip students with practical resources and techniques for success in their senior English studies.
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Here are three examples of essay topics with key words circled:
The Great Gatsby highlights the destructive nature of the American Dream.
The Kite Runner explores the impact of betrayal on relationships.
In his poetry, John Donne uses metaphors to express complex ideas about love.
Phase 2: Brainstorming examples
and topic sentences
Once you've identified the key words, the next step is to brainstorm examples from the text that relate
to those words. Having a range of different types of examples is important - from different characters,
events, quotes, symbols etc.
You should then use the examples to write topic sentences for paragraphs that directly respond to the
key idea in the topic
This document provides guidance on essay writing structure and format. It discusses introducing a topic and thesis statement in the introductory paragraph. The body should include multiple paragraphs with a topic sentence, proofs, and comment for each point that proves the thesis. A concluding paragraph should restate the thesis and return to a general perspective. An optional rebuttal paragraph can acknowledge alternative arguments. Outlines should include the thesis, rebuttal points, topic sentences, proofs, and conclusion. Body paragraphs should be organized logically using principles like chronology or cause and effect. The document concludes with tips for writing strong essays like avoiding first person and contractions.
This document provides instruction and examples for writing comparison and contrast paragraphs. It discusses two common patterns for organizing comparison/contrast paragraphs: point-by-point and block. The point-by-point pattern discusses each subject point-by-point, while the block pattern discusses all aspects of one subject before moving to the other subject. The document also provides examples of topic sentences, transition words to use, and sample outlines for organizing comparison/contrast paragraphs in both patterns.
A paragraph is a group of related sentences that develops a single main idea. It typically includes a topic sentence stating the main idea and supporting sentences that provide details, examples, or evidence. A good paragraph has unity around a clear topic, coherence through logical connections between ideas, and variety in structure. The four main types of paragraphs are descriptive, which describe a person, place, or thing; informative, which explain an idea or facts; narrative, which tell a story or event; and persuasive, which aim to influence the reader.
Jim commutes daily by train from London to work. The document provides pictures and sentences to match describing his train journey, including getting on the train, sitting in a compartment, and arriving at the station in London. It also provides a scene at the train station and a conversation between two people at the station discussing tickets, compartments, and missing trains. Finally, it lists various signs that could be placed in the correct locations at a train station, such as platforms, tickets, and toilets.
This document discusses techniques for writing effective summaries. A summary is a shortened version that retains the essential information from the original text without making judgments. It should be understandable without referring to the original, faithful to the ideas in the original, brief without unnecessary details, and a cohesive whole. Good techniques for summarizing include paraphrasing the text in one's own words, using synonyms, changing sentence structures, and combining sentences. The steps to write a summary are to identify the main theme, divide the text into sections and label them, summarize each section in one sentence, join the ideas with transition words, omit unnecessary details and opinions, and conclude with a statement of what was learned from the text.
This document provides guidance on summary writing for an English class. It explains that being able to summarize passages, notes, or graphs is an important skill. Summaries can take different forms, such as mind maps, flow charts, or paragraphs. The document outlines the steps to write a summary, which include reading carefully, underlining main ideas, rewriting the main points in one's own words, and indicating the word count. When summarizing, one should not include opinions, unnecessary details, or examples, and should preserve the original tone.
This document provides guidance on writing formal and informal letters. It outlines the typical parts of a letter, including the greeting, introduction, body, and closing. It also gives examples of different types of letters and provides phrases and expressions for various purposes like requesting information, apologizing, complaining, and thanking. The document aims to help writers understand the structure and language used in both formal and informal letters.
This document provides guidance on academic writing, including the structure and components of essays. It discusses the key elements of an introduction (background, thesis), body paragraphs (topic sentences, evidence, transitions), and conclusion (recap, restatement). Sample essay structures are presented, such as a five-paragraph comparative analysis template. Revision and editing tips are also covered. Overall, the document serves as a reference for students on how to plan, write and format academic essays.
Descriptive paragraphs provide details that engage the five senses to help readers visualize what is being described. They often follow a spatial order arrangement, describing items from left to right and top to bottom to create a word picture. Signal words are used to indicate spatial relationships between objects within a descriptive paragraph. The topic sentence should name what is being described, while the controlling idea gives an overall impression, and details use adjectives to enhance the description.
This document provides guidance on improving academic writing skills such as using transitions, developing arguments, and engaging in metacommentary. It discusses connecting sentences, using transition words to show relationships between ideas, repeating key words and ideas to build cohesion, and explaining your points to the reader to aid interpretation. The document also provides examples of techniques like metacommentary that help guide the reader through a text.
This document discusses different types of paragraphs according to their structure and content. It identifies introductory, transition, and closing paragraphs based on their location in a text. It also describes argumentative, conceptual, chronological, enumerative, descriptive, expository, narrative, comparative, cause-and-effect, process-sequence, deductive, inductive, and conclusion paragraphs based on the logical content and structure. The document emphasizes that writing in paragraphs helps to formally structure a text and distinguish different parts and perspectives to clearly convey overall meaning.
The document provides guidance on writing an opinion paragraph, including organizing it with a topic sentence stating an opinion, supporting sentences with facts/explanations/experiences, and a concluding sentence that restates the opinion. It also offers language tips on using "there is/there are" and "because/because of" correctly. The document aims to help students learn how to structure and write an effective opinion paragraph.
The document discusses various aspects of writing paragraphs and essays. It defines a paragraph as a group of sentences relating to one topic with a topic sentence, unity of thought, sequenced sentences and coherence. It describes the different types of paragraphs and essays such as descriptive, narrative, expository, and argumentative. It provides tips for essay writing including having a clear theme, logical order, brevity, and an objective style. It outlines the structure of an essay with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. It also discusses procedures for writing precise summaries and developing stories from outlines.
NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration.
The document provides guidance on writing opinion essays, including the typical structure of an introduction, main body, and conclusion. It explains that the introduction should state the subject and opinion clearly, while the main body paragraphs each focus on a viewpoint, reason, or opposing viewpoint supported with examples. The conclusion restates the original opinion. Linking words and phrases are provided to help connect different parts of the essay. Useful expressions for stating opinions are also listed. Overall, the document offers tips on organizing an opinion essay and including topic sentences, reasons, and a formal style.
HOW TO WRITE AN ESSAY (REVISITING PARAGRAPH WRITING)
English Language learners: This is a step-by-step 24-slide presentation to help you revisit necessary information about paragraph writing, so you can assemble an essay in a few easy steps. (Created by Rita Zuba Prokopetz / G&R Languages – October, 2013)
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This document provides guidance on writing effective sentences for text response essays. It begins by explaining the importance of writing skill for English class and outlines the chapter's focus on improving sentence structure. Examples are given of basic introductory sentences that introduce the text, author and main idea. The document also discusses using more detailed and descriptive language in introductions. Various sentences types that can be used in introductions are exemplified, including topic sentences and sentences that refer to the text in different ways. Tables with suggested words and phrases to aid writing introductions, topic sentences, and body paragraphs are also included.
This document contains the agenda and discussion questions for an EWRT 1A class. The class will discuss two assigned articles about marginalization and review the writing prompt for Essay #3. They will also cover the basic features of an argument essay, including outlining the introduction, thesis, and argument. The introduction should present the issue and the thesis should take a clear position. The body will include reasons and supporting evidence. Students will analyze sample student paper #3 on their own or in groups. They will identify different components of the paper like the title, thesis, quotes, and citations. Finally, the document reviews how to write an introduction with a focused issue presentation and clear thesis stating the student's position.
A paragraph is a group of related sentences that develops a single main idea. It typically includes a topic sentence stating the main idea and supporting sentences that provide details, examples, or evidence. A good paragraph has unity around a clear topic, coherence through logical connections between ideas, and variety in structure. The four main types of paragraphs are descriptive, which describe a person, place, or thing; informative, which explain an idea or facts; narrative, which tell a story or event; and persuasive, which aim to influence the reader.
Jim commutes daily by train from London to work. The document provides pictures and sentences to match describing his train journey, including getting on the train, sitting in a compartment, and arriving at the station in London. It also provides a scene at the train station and a conversation between two people at the station discussing tickets, compartments, and missing trains. Finally, it lists various signs that could be placed in the correct locations at a train station, such as platforms, tickets, and toilets.
This document discusses techniques for writing effective summaries. A summary is a shortened version that retains the essential information from the original text without making judgments. It should be understandable without referring to the original, faithful to the ideas in the original, brief without unnecessary details, and a cohesive whole. Good techniques for summarizing include paraphrasing the text in one's own words, using synonyms, changing sentence structures, and combining sentences. The steps to write a summary are to identify the main theme, divide the text into sections and label them, summarize each section in one sentence, join the ideas with transition words, omit unnecessary details and opinions, and conclude with a statement of what was learned from the text.
This document provides guidance on summary writing for an English class. It explains that being able to summarize passages, notes, or graphs is an important skill. Summaries can take different forms, such as mind maps, flow charts, or paragraphs. The document outlines the steps to write a summary, which include reading carefully, underlining main ideas, rewriting the main points in one's own words, and indicating the word count. When summarizing, one should not include opinions, unnecessary details, or examples, and should preserve the original tone.
This document provides guidance on writing formal and informal letters. It outlines the typical parts of a letter, including the greeting, introduction, body, and closing. It also gives examples of different types of letters and provides phrases and expressions for various purposes like requesting information, apologizing, complaining, and thanking. The document aims to help writers understand the structure and language used in both formal and informal letters.
This document provides guidance on academic writing, including the structure and components of essays. It discusses the key elements of an introduction (background, thesis), body paragraphs (topic sentences, evidence, transitions), and conclusion (recap, restatement). Sample essay structures are presented, such as a five-paragraph comparative analysis template. Revision and editing tips are also covered. Overall, the document serves as a reference for students on how to plan, write and format academic essays.
Descriptive paragraphs provide details that engage the five senses to help readers visualize what is being described. They often follow a spatial order arrangement, describing items from left to right and top to bottom to create a word picture. Signal words are used to indicate spatial relationships between objects within a descriptive paragraph. The topic sentence should name what is being described, while the controlling idea gives an overall impression, and details use adjectives to enhance the description.
This document provides guidance on improving academic writing skills such as using transitions, developing arguments, and engaging in metacommentary. It discusses connecting sentences, using transition words to show relationships between ideas, repeating key words and ideas to build cohesion, and explaining your points to the reader to aid interpretation. The document also provides examples of techniques like metacommentary that help guide the reader through a text.
This document discusses different types of paragraphs according to their structure and content. It identifies introductory, transition, and closing paragraphs based on their location in a text. It also describes argumentative, conceptual, chronological, enumerative, descriptive, expository, narrative, comparative, cause-and-effect, process-sequence, deductive, inductive, and conclusion paragraphs based on the logical content and structure. The document emphasizes that writing in paragraphs helps to formally structure a text and distinguish different parts and perspectives to clearly convey overall meaning.
The document provides guidance on writing an opinion paragraph, including organizing it with a topic sentence stating an opinion, supporting sentences with facts/explanations/experiences, and a concluding sentence that restates the opinion. It also offers language tips on using "there is/there are" and "because/because of" correctly. The document aims to help students learn how to structure and write an effective opinion paragraph.
The document discusses various aspects of writing paragraphs and essays. It defines a paragraph as a group of sentences relating to one topic with a topic sentence, unity of thought, sequenced sentences and coherence. It describes the different types of paragraphs and essays such as descriptive, narrative, expository, and argumentative. It provides tips for essay writing including having a clear theme, logical order, brevity, and an objective style. It outlines the structure of an essay with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. It also discusses procedures for writing precise summaries and developing stories from outlines.
NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration.
The document provides guidance on writing opinion essays, including the typical structure of an introduction, main body, and conclusion. It explains that the introduction should state the subject and opinion clearly, while the main body paragraphs each focus on a viewpoint, reason, or opposing viewpoint supported with examples. The conclusion restates the original opinion. Linking words and phrases are provided to help connect different parts of the essay. Useful expressions for stating opinions are also listed. Overall, the document offers tips on organizing an opinion essay and including topic sentences, reasons, and a formal style.
HOW TO WRITE AN ESSAY (REVISITING PARAGRAPH WRITING)
English Language learners: This is a step-by-step 24-slide presentation to help you revisit necessary information about paragraph writing, so you can assemble an essay in a few easy steps. (Created by Rita Zuba Prokopetz / G&R Languages – October, 2013)
The student guide to writing better sentences in the english classroom samplejpinnuck
This document provides guidance on writing effective sentences for text response essays. It begins by explaining the importance of writing skill for English class and outlines the chapter's focus on improving sentence structure. Examples are given of basic introductory sentences that introduce the text, author and main idea. The document also discusses using more detailed and descriptive language in introductions. Various sentences types that can be used in introductions are exemplified, including topic sentences and sentences that refer to the text in different ways. Tables with suggested words and phrases to aid writing introductions, topic sentences, and body paragraphs are also included.
This document contains the agenda and discussion questions for an EWRT 1A class. The class will discuss two assigned articles about marginalization and review the writing prompt for Essay #3. They will also cover the basic features of an argument essay, including outlining the introduction, thesis, and argument. The introduction should present the issue and the thesis should take a clear position. The body will include reasons and supporting evidence. Students will analyze sample student paper #3 on their own or in groups. They will identify different components of the paper like the title, thesis, quotes, and citations. Finally, the document reviews how to write an introduction with a focused issue presentation and clear thesis stating the student's position.
The document provides guidance on how to structure an effective essay. It discusses the key components of an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. For the introduction, it recommends including a neutral sentence, context sentence, argument sentence, and summary sentence. For body paragraphs, it advises using the PREC structure - point, reason, example, and concluding sentence. Finally, it suggests that the conclusion should restate the argument, outline how it was demonstrated, include a thoughtful analysis, and end with a strong concluding statement. The document also includes examples and tips for writing introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions according to this structure.
This document provides an overview and discussion questions for analyzing the novel "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time" by Mark Haddon. It examines the distinctive characteristics of the text including the narrator, themes, settings, narrative elements, language, form/structure, characters, and whether it can be considered a young adult or adult novel. Activities are suggested to develop an understanding of how these textual features shape meaning and establish the novel's qualities.
The document provides instructions and exercises for writing a descriptive paragraph. It explains that a descriptive paragraph should use vivid details to paint a clear picture of a person, place, thing, or idea for the reader. Students are guided through selecting a topic to describe, drafting sentences with relevant details, and revising their paragraph to improve its organization and clarity. Examples of strong descriptive paragraphs are provided for analysis. Finally, students are given exercises to write a descriptive paragraph about themselves.
This document provides an agenda and guidance for writing a concept essay, including how to use appositives, integrate quotations, avoid plagiarism, and tips for drafting the essay. It discusses using appositives to efficiently include definitions, experts' credentials, examples and specifics. It explains quoting briefly and summarizing longer passages, and gives examples of integrating quotations in the text. Students are advised to cite sources properly, ask if confused about plagiarism, and include works cited. Homework includes drafting the concept essay and studying vocabulary.
- The document provides guidance on writing a 5-paragraph essay, including the typical structure of an introduction, body, and conclusion.
- The introduction should include a hook to engage the reader, a transition sentence, and a thesis statement. The body should have 3 or more paragraphs with a topic sentence, details and examples, and concluding sentence in each.
- The conclusion should summarize the main points of the essay and include a "clincher" final thought to leave the reader with. Revision is encouraged throughout the writing process.
This document outlines the agenda for EWRT 211 Class 7. It will cover house points, vocabulary spells from lessons 1-18, reviewing introductions, thesis statements, body paragraphs, counterarguments, and conclusions. It will also cover integrating quotations and the MLA works cited page format. The class will review conclusions and examples will be provided. Students will practice writing conclusions in groups and receive instruction on properly formatting MLA style essays, including setting margins, headings, and works cited pages. Homework includes reading from Harry Potter, vocabulary, posting a draft conclusion, and bringing draft essays to the next class.
This document outlines the agenda for EWRT 211 Class 7. It will cover house points, vocabulary spells from lessons 1-18, a review of introductions, thesis statements, body paragraphs, and conclusions. It will also cover integrating quotations and the MLA works cited page format. The class will review conclusions and examples will be provided. Students will practice writing conclusions in groups and receive instruction on properly formatting MLA style essays, including setting margins, headings, and citations. Homework includes reading from Harry Potter, vocabulary, posting a draft conclusion, and bringing draft essays to the next class.
This document outlines the agenda for EWRT 211 Class 7. It will cover house points, vocabulary spells from lessons 1-18, a review of introductions, thesis statements, body paragraphs, and conclusions. It will also cover integrating quotations and the MLA works cited page format. The class will review conclusions and examples will be provided. Students will practice writing conclusions in groups and receive instruction on properly citing sources and formatting in MLA style. Homework includes reading a chapter from Harry Potter, vocabulary, posting a draft conclusion, and bringing draft essays to the next class.
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Assignments
1.
Read the following works:
a.
The Bridge of San Luis Rey
by Thornton Wilder
b.
Our Town
by Thornton Wilder
c.
“A Rose for Emily” by William Faulkner
d.
“Hills Like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemmingway
e.
Short Story of your choice by F. Scott Fitzgerald
f.
Five poems of your choice written by Langston Hughes
2.
The last lines of
The Bridge of San Luis Rey
are:
a.
“But soon we shall die and all memory of those five will have left the earth, and we ourselves shall be loved for a while and forgotten. But the love will have been enough; all those impulses of love return to the love that made them. Even memory is not necessary for love. There is a land of the living and a land of the dead and the bridge is love, the only survival, the only meaning.”
b.
In a 1-2 page essay, explain how this theme is developed in the novel.
3.
Pick one of the following essay prompts to write a 1-2-page essay for each prompt about
The Bridge of San Luis Rey.
a.
Thornton Wilder said that he wrote the novel to ask the follow question, "Is there a direction and meaning in lives beyond the individual's own will?" According to the novel, what conclusion if any does Wilder reach? If he does not reach a conclusion, then why not?
b.
Choose a character from the novel and discuss the nuances that contribute to the character’s development.
c.
Was Brother Juniper an objective researcher? Explain your answer.
d.
Consider the following quote:
i.
Now he discovered that secret from which one never quite recovers, that even in the most perfect love one person loves less profoundly than the other. There may be two equally good, equally gifted, equally beautiful, but there may never be two that love one another equally well.
ii.
Use examples from the book to defend, qualify or challenge this assertion.
4.
Write one 4-5-page essay on the following topic: These works deal with the issues of disillusionment with old ideas and ideals. How do we see this disillusionment in these works?
5.
Watch the movie
The Crucible
(I have a copy that you can borrow – please note this movie is PG-13, and it does have some very brief nudity in it). Then write a 2-3 page essay comparing and contrasting the movies with the play. This essay should address some of the following questions:
a.
How are the themes of the book represented in the movies? How does this enhance, change, or diminish the meaning of the book?
b.
How does the director interpret the book? How do these interpretations enhance, change, or diminish the meaning of the book?
c.
What stylistic choices (lighting, cinematography, music and sound effects, and/or other special effects) did the director make? How do these choices enhance, change, or diminish the meaning of the book?
d.
How were the characters similar to/different from how you interpreted them in the book? How does this enhance, change, or diminish the meaning of the book?
e.
What was added to the movie that was not in the book? What w ...
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DQ 5
Please write at least 250 words for each question. Also, double check the work for plagiarism and please cite all quotes.
CH. 10
1. Discuss the problem space hypothesis. How might it account for and explain the various blocks to problem solving?
2. In what ways is mental set similar to perceptual set? In what ways are the two phenomena dissimilar?
CH. 11
1. Describe the similarities and differences between inductive and deductive reasoning.
2. Describe the image theory and contrast it with expected utility theory.
3. Discuss the relationship between hindsight bias and overconfidence.
CH. 13
1. Discuss the implications of the major findings regarding gender differences in cognitive abilities.
CH. 14
1. Describe Hudson’s studies of pictorial perception and discuss their implications.
2. When trying to solve a problem, you might have been instructed to “stop thinking about it and come back to it later.” Based on what you have learned about impasses, do you think this is a good advice? Why or why not?
3. Consider the following choice? I will give you a free $5.00 bill, no strings attached. Optionally, I will allow you to flip a coin: heads you win $10.00, tails you win nothing. Do you want the $5.00, or do you want to flip the coin? What does expected value theory tell you that you should do? Does this accurately represent your feeling about the decision?
DQ 4
Please write at least 250 words for each question. Also, double check the work for plagiarism and please cite all quotes.
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3. Is there a critical period for language? Is so, what might this imply about learning multiple languages in school?
4. Who is Noam Chomsky? What was one of his major innovations as a linguist?
CH. 9
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4. What does the term “grammar” mean to linguists and psychologists? How does their understanding of the term differ from that of a layperson?
Ashford 5: - Week 4 - Instructor Guidance
ENG 125 WEEK 4 GUIDANCEDrama
"What is drama but life with the dull bits cut out." - Alfred HitchcockThis week's overview
Welcome to Week 4! We are already over halfway through our literary journey in this course. Your lesson this week involves drama, especially its history in Greek and Elizabethan theater. Some of you might be wondering what such old plays have to .
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Guidelines for Summarizing Sources
Summarizing
Another good skill to help you incorporate research into your writing is summarizing. Summarizing is to take larger selections of text and reduce them to their basic essentials: the gist, the key ideas, the main points that are worth noting and remembering. Think of a summary as the “general idea in brief form”; it's the distillation, condensation, or reduction of a larger work into its primary notions and main ideas.
As with directly quoting and paraphrasing, summarizing requires you to cite your sources properly to avoid "accidental" plagiarism. moreover, a summary should not change the meaning of the original source. a good summary should be a shortened version that conveys the purpose and main points of the original source.
Components of a Good Summary:
· Write in the present tense.
· Make sure to include the author, the year, and title of the work.
· For Example:
· In Pixar’s 2003 movie, Finding Nemo…
· In Stephen King’s horror book The Shining (1977),…
· In Emily Dickinson’s poem “Because I Could Not Stop for Death (1890),”
· Be concise: a summary should not be equal in length to the original text; it should be about 1/10 as long.
· Include 2–3 main points of the text or work.
· Include the conclusion or the final findings of the work.
· Avoid using quotations. A summary is not a paraphrase or a direct quote. If you must use the author's key words or phrases, always enclose them in quotation marks and cite.
· Don't put your own opinions, ideas, or interpretations into the summary. The purpose of writing a summary is to accurately represent what the author wanted to say, not to provide a critique.
When Is a Summary Useful?
You should summarize when…
· you want to give an overview of a source's main ideas/points;
· you can express a source's ideas or points in fewer words than the original text;
· you need to give a brief synopsis of more than one source; or
· Read through your notes from the third reading, look up the words/phrases that you do not know, and make any appropriate changes to the information you jotted down.
· you want an authority on the topic to support your ideas.
Examples of Good and Bad Summaries
Be careful when you summarize that you avoid stating your opinion or putting a particular bias on what you write. This point is important because the goal of a summary is to be as factual as possible.
For example, here is an example of an inaccurate, opinion-laden summary about Pixar’s popular movie Finding Nemo:
So there's a film where a man's wife is brutally murdered by a serial killer and his son is left physically disabled. In a twist of events, the son is kidnaped and kept in a tank while his father chases the kidnapper thousands of miles with the help of a mentally challenged woman. Finding Nemo is quite the thriller.
This example is a bad summary because it is very vague, and it contains the writer’s opinion as well as twists the events of the story into .
This document provides an agenda and instructions for an EWRT 1A class session on peer reviewing draft essays. The session will focus on revision, not just editing. Students will exchange papers and read their essays aloud while partners follow along and fill out a peer review worksheet. The worksheet prompts partners to evaluate the introduction, praise effective parts, suggest improvements, and ask clarifying questions. Capitalization, formatting quotes, correcting run-ons and fragments will also be reviewed. Students will incorporate peer feedback into essay revisions and submit final drafts through Turnitin. Homework assigned is to read a chapter of Harry Potter and revise essay #2 for the next class.
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Overall Instruction:
· For any of these topic choices, you must quote directly from your chosen works and include page numbers in a parenthetical citation after quotes. Instructions for in-text, parenthetical citations are attached (see pages 3-5 of this handout).
· Choose quoted passages that function as strong evidence and help you communicate your main message about the works of literature you are analyzing. Once you quote a passage, be sure to USE it: that is, interpret what it’s saying and tie it back to your main point about the text. Through your interpretation (analysis) of each and every quote, you should advance your paper’s main argument (thesis).
· Avoid summary! In none of these assignment choices do I ask you to summarize or retell the storyline. Assume your audience has read the pieces that you’re writing about. Instead of summary, I want your creative-analytical response to the literature.
Topics:
1. Put any character in conversation with a character from another work by a different author. Createthe dialogue they might have. Note that your dialogue should capture an important aspect of each character and should be focused on one main theme. You might, for example, have two characters discuss their views about their adversaries or lovers, their plans for dealing with a similar problem they have (e.g. unfaithful spouses or low social status), their different encounters with the underworld, and so on. Write a dialogue (of any length) between the two characters and attach it to an essay of 4-5 pages explaining the reasons you chose to write this particular dialogue and the message you wanted to get across about the role these characters play in their respective works and the burdens or successes they represent. Keep in mind that you don’t have to choose a work’s main characters; it would be very interesting to choose minor characters who play a smaller but critical role in the text. The best essays will illuminate a surprising intersection between the character and texts, as well as an important message about both your characters and the works they represent. Be sure to quote from the original texts in your dialogue and accompanying essay. An alternate approach to this essay choice would be to put two different authors from our syllabus into dialogue with each other.
2. Imagine that you’re planning a film based on a pairing or group of works from the syllabus. Write a description of your film, making sure to answer the questions: why make a film on your chosen works? What message, drawn from the original texts, are you trying to get across, and why do you think it’s important for a contemporary audience to hear this message? Also, think about the stylistic decisions that a film director makes and explain how you would like to see your film made, and why. (Is it a big- budget action film, a romance with recognizable stars, a musical, a comedy, or a “quieter” family drama?) Write an essay of 6-8 pages in which you discuss the .
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Choose one movie form these two My Own Private Idaho, 1991; Directed by Gus Van Sant or Boys Don't Cry 1998; Directed by Kimberly. Write a outline of the essay.
Assignment Objectives
:
Enhance and/or improve critical thinking and media literacy skills by:
1. Developing a clear and concise thesis statement (an argument) in response to the
following question:
Does the film have the power to transform political sensibilities?
2. Writing an outline for a five paragraph analytical essay building on a clear and
concise thesis statement, including topic sentences and secondary supports.
3. Identifying and explaining three scenes from the film text in support of the thesis
statement/argument.
4. Writing an introductory paragraph for the outlined analytical essay
Be sure to read thoroughly the writing conventions below before beginning this assignment
.
Note: You are NOT writing a full essay; rather, you are outlining an analytical essay by completing the dialogue in the boxes below.
Writing a Critical Review (analytical) Essay
Every essay that you write for this course must have a clear thesis, placed (perhaps) somewhere near the end of the introductory paragraph. Simply stated, a THESIS (or ARGUMENT) expresses, preferably in a single sentence, the point you want to make about the text that is the subject of your essay.
A
THESIS should be an opinion or interpretation of the text, not merely a fact or observation. The best possible THESIS will answer some specific questions about the text. Very often the THESIS contains an outline of the major points to be covered in the essay. A possible thesis for an essay on character in Perry Henzell’s
The Harder They Come might read somewhat as follows:
The protagonist of THTC is not a hero in the epic sense of the word, but a self-centered young man bred of economic oppression and cultural dependency. The characters in this film have no real psychological depth, but are markers for a society of consumption and momentary glory.
(You might then go on to exemplify from the text and argue in favor or against this interpretation: your essay need not hold to only one perspective.)
What single, clear QUESTION does the above THESIS attempt to answer?
Each essay should be organized into five (5) paragraphs, each based on one of two to four major ideas, which will comprise the BODY of the essay. Each paragraph must have a topic sentence, often (but not always) towards the beginning of the paragraph, which clearly states the ARGUMENT or point to be made in the paragraph. Following the thesis set forth above, the first paragraph might begin with a sentence like “Ivan’s desires and his destiny are signaled in the opening shots of the film, where the fr ...
The document provides tips on how to write and structure an essay. It recommends thoroughly researching the subject matter by reading materials and discussing them with others to gather different perspectives. Key steps include taking notes, brainstorming ideas without filtering them, creating a plan or concept chart, and structuring the essay with an introduction, body, and conclusion. The body should include arguments and discussions supported by facts from research. The conclusion should tie the themes discussed back to the original essay question in a balanced opinion. Allowing others to review and comment on the essay can help improve grammar, logic, and style.
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3. THE STUDENT GUIDE TO
WRITING BETTER
SENTENCES
In The English Classroom
A Ticking Mind Publication
4. CONTENTS
WRITING TEXT RESPONSE SENTENCES ....................................... 1
• Basic Introductory First Sentence
• More Detailed Introductory Statements
• Sentences Within Introductions
• Sentences Which Refer To The Text and its Author in a Variety of Ways
• Topic Sentences
• Body Paragraph Sentences
• Concluding Statements
Writing Persuasive sentences.............................................. 65
• Developing a contention
• Engaging the audience through pronouns
• Labelling the issue with positive
and negative nouns
• Using Adjectives
• Tricolons (the rule of three)
• Comparative and Superlative Adjectives
• Double-pronged sentences
• Cause and Effect verbs
• Using adverbs to create generalisations
• Writing about evidence
• Linking phrases
• Concluding phrases
Writing poetry analysis sentences...............................35
• Writing introductions
• Writing body paragraphs
• Topic sentences
• Sentences to analyse aspects of poetry
• Writing about similes and metaphors
• Using adjectives when writing in detail
about poetry
• Noun phrases
• Adverbs and prepositions for describing
when in a poem
• Analysing patterns in poetry
• Inserting quotes and analysing evidence
• Sentences about what a poet thinks
or believes
chapter 3
chapter 2
chapter 1
5. WRITING NON-FICTION SENTENCES ...........................................99
• Writing biographical and autobiographical sentences
• Writing film and novel review sentences
• Writing news report sentences
Writing language analysis sentences..................... 151
• Introducing the contention
• Writing creative sentences
• Continuing your introduction
• Introducing the reader
• Describing Tone
• Writing the body of a language analysis
• Introducing examples
• Using prepositions to support
your observations
• Introducing other examples
and explanations
• Writing Conclusions for
a Language Analysis
Writing creative sentences............................................. 189
• Choosing your ‘voice’
• Alternating names and pronouns
in 3rd person stories
• Writing a Narrative
• Using verbs effectively
• Putting Description into Writing
• Changing the position of adjectives
• Adjectives belonging to a character
• Using similes in an interesting way
• Adverbs
• Prepositions for detail
• Sentence length
• Marking the passage of time
• Putting Speech into Writing
Writing comparative sentences ....................................... 171
• Writing about genre
• Body Paragraphs
• Writing more descriptively
• Writing Transition Sentences
• Writing About Both Texts In The
Same Sentence
• Writing Conclusions
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
6.
7. WRITING
TEXT RESPONSE
SENTENCES
1
WRITING TEXT
RESPONSE SENTENCES
Writing a text response is a daunting task, but one that
you will be asked to do several times over the course of
the year in any English class. Many students have mastered
the basic structure of an essay and are able to construct
the essay overall, but are not able to improve their writing.
However, this is the most important part of becoming
better in English. Fortunately, there are a few phrases
and words which will help you improve your writing style
enormously.
This chapter is full of them.
chapter1
8. THE STUDENT GUIDE
TO WRITING BETTER
SENTENCES
2
Basic introductory first sentence
Often, the most difficult part of beginning writing is putting pen to paper - it can
be very difficult to know where to begin and what to write. The good news is that
once you have the first sentence down, it’s usually much easier to keep going.
The advice of this book is for you to write down a first sentence that gives your reader/
teacher/examiner some overall information about the text you are analysing. Not boring
information about when the novel was published, or who performed the first play, or the
actors in the film (anyone can find that sort of information with a quick Google search),
but a quick 20-second analysis of what the whole text is aiming to do.
Let’s look at some examples:
Throughout Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare explores the dangerous nature of love.
OR
In To Kill A Mockingbird, Harper Lee depicts the reality of prejudice in a small town.
OR
From the outset of Gattaca, Andrew Niccol scrutinises how genetics determines people’s
identity.
9. WRITING
TEXT RESPONSE
SENTENCES
3
In all of these examples, there are some common elements.
ELEMENT EXAMPLE
1. The writer begins each sentence with a
preposition or prepositional phrase. This
shows where or what time they are writing
about
Throughout…
In…
From the outset of…
2. The writer then identifies the text title
(indicating that they are writing about the
whole text)
…Romeo and Juliet,
….To Kill A Mockingbird,
…Gattaca,
3. The writer refers to the author and follows
this name with an analytical verb
…Shakespeare explores…
…Harper Lee depicts…
…Andrew Niccol scrutinises…
4. Finally, the writer uses an idea noun to give
an indication of what the ‘big idea’ of the text
is
…the dangerous nature of love.
…the reality of prejudice in a
small town.
…how genetics determines
people's identity.
10. THE STUDENT GUIDE
TO WRITING BETTER
SENTENCES
4
It’s time for you to give it a go
In your workbook, write an introductory sentence using the table below to help you.
Prepositional
phrase
Analytical
verb
Basic idea
nouns
Throughout...,
In...,
From the start of...,
From its outset,...
At its heart,...
Fundamentally,...
challenges
scrutinises
explores
highlights
questions
transforms
exposes
focuses
reveals
manipulates
speculates
discusses
advocates
contrasts
epitomises
growing up
discovery
identity
survival
loss
friendship
family
justice
nature
independence
happiness
value
loyalty
love
hate
conflict
courage
defeat
bravery
life
lives
hope
power
humanity
prejudice
oppression
conscience
the past
being a hero
11. Punctuation
tip:
Commas are used to separate extra information
from the main part of a sentence in order to
make the sentence clearer. Starting a sentence
with a preposition means you’re adding extra
information to the beginning of a statement,
so you need to put a comma at the end of this
extra information to separate it from the rest of
the sentence:
• Throughout Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare
explores the dangerous nature of love.
• In To Kill A Mockingbird, Scout discovers the
nature of prejudice in the town she lives in.
• From its outset, Gattaca scrutinises how
genetics determine the ways nearly all
people live.
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More detailed introductory statements
Once you have become adept at the basic introductory statement, you could try
extending your opening sentence like this:
Throughout Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare explores the dangerous nature of love and how
it can be a force of destruction.
OR
In To Kill A Mockingbird, Harper Lee depicts the reality of prejudice in a small town that
accepts division and hatred within its community as normal.
OR
From the outset of Gattaca, Andrew Niccol scrutinises how genetics determines people’s
identity, except for those people brave enough to challenge the conventions of society.
All of these sentences have been extended by the writer using an extra information
word (or conjunction) to join two noun phrases. Writing ‘and’ in a sentence is perhaps the
simplest and most powerful way to write more analytically about a text because it indicates
there is not just one thing to say. One important element of writing ‘and’ is to find different
ways of saying it. On the next page is a handy list of extra information words you can use in
your introductory statements.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
In your workbook, write an introductory sentence with more detail using the table
below to help you.
Basic Connecting Words (Ways of saying ‘and’, ‘but’ or ‘because’)
Conjunctions
Conjunction
phrases
Relative
pronouns
and
but
yet
or
because
and also
but also
yet also
not only…but also
both…and
in addition to
together with
as well as
in conjunction with
on top of
except for
despite the
which
who
that
Another way of adding detail to your introductory statements is by using phrases that allow
you to describe the ideas of a text or its setting in a more specific and interesting way.
In the example below, ‘world in which’ is phrase that allows the writer to describe the
setting and issues of Gattaca in more detail. It’s also a phrase that could be applied
to many texts.
From the outset of Gattaca, Andrew Niccol scrutinises a world in which genetic
engineering determines every aspect of people’s identity, except for those brave people who
challenge society.
On the next page is a chart that lists many noun phrases you might find useful
to help you describe the setting or issues of a text in more detail.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
In your workbook, write an introductory statement with a detailed noun phrase
using the table below to help you.
Introduction and topic sentence idea nouns and noun phrases
“Overall Idea” noun
phrases
“Overall Idea” nouns
• the challenges and triumphs of…
• the pressures and difficulties of…
• the dangerous nature of…
• the devastating impact of…
• the value of..
• the importance/significance of…
• how…is prevalent in the world of…
• the ways in which acts of…can…
• how experiences of…can
• how times of…can
• a world in which…is..
• how societies in which…can…
• the ways in which….affects us all.
• the ways in which people overcome…
• the nature of…in a world that/where…
• the experience of… in a world where…
• how…challenges us to…
• how…forces us to…
• how…compels us…
• what it means to be…
• what it means for…
• the struggle for…
• the quest for…
• the ways characters routinely
experience…
growing up
belonging
identity
independence
friendship
family
society
happiness
loyalty
love
hope
compassion
sacrifice
power
prejudice
oppression
self interest/selfishness
hate
defeat
despair
conflict
loss
grief
discovery
courage
strength
being a hero
lessons
survival
justice
conscience
truth
nature
life
lives
humanity
the past
the future
the present
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Sentences within introductions
Once you’ve practised your opening sentence a few times, it’s time to respond
to the topic you have been given to discuss.
Below is an example of an introduction which shows three types of sentences used
in introductions:
Essay topic:
JK Rowling’s Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone shows us that in order to
become a hero you don’t need to be talented, you just need to be courageous.
Introductory sentence Throughout Harry Potter, JK Rowling contrasts different
characters, demonstrating that each of them has their own
kind of heroism.
Sentence that addresses
the topic and discusses
how an author constructs
a text
Her novel highlights a range of attributes and attitudes that
heroes must have, such as the desire to improve Hogwarts
and the world around them.
Sentences that provide
an overview of the main
examples to be used
throughout the essay
As the protagonist of the novel, Harry is the most obvious
hero and, although he is new to the wizarding world, he does
have a number of talents that other wizards of his age do
not have. Hermione Granger is also new to the wizard world,
but her intelligence is greater than most other people of her
age - she is a very annoying character, but in the end, is also
a hero.
Sentence that links to
further or contrasting
examples to be used in the
essay
However, Ron, who has always been a part of the wizarding
world, is not particularly brave or intelligent but is a hero
because he is a loyal friend.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
The table below offers suggestions about phrases which can you can use to construct
the second and third types of sentences from the example above.
In your workbook, write an introduction using the table below to help you.
Sentence that addresses the
topic and discusses how an
author constructs a text
Sentences that provide
an introduction to the
main examples to be used
throughout the essay
Sentences that link to
further or contrasting
examples
Words to help introduce
the author, text and idea in
a new way
Phrases to provide an
overview of examples
Adverbs and conjunc-
tions to create links
Articles
The text…
The characters…
A central idea..
A key concern…
Pronouns
Her novel…
His novel…
One character who…
The main character who…
Many characters are…
Many moments in the
text are…
The narrative focuses on
events that…
But other characters such
as…
However, there is/are also
others…
The most significant
challenge for…is…
The most important tech-
nique for…
Similarly
Furthermore
In addition
Moreover
In comparison to this
But
Yet
In contrast
On the contrary
On the other hand
Despite
However
While
Whereas
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Sentences that refer to the text &
its author in a variety of ways
A crucial part of making your writing more sophisticated, is ensuring you don’t repeat
the same nouns too often. Rather than constantly writing the name of the text, author
or director, you can use other nouns to refer to them. Here’s an example:
In Edward Scissorhands, the protagonist is an outsider who initially finds acceptance in
society, but is excluded from it in the end. The film represents its central character…
Here is a list of useful alternative nouns to the name of a text, author or director:
Novel Film Memoir Play
narrative
tale
story
work
text
piece of cinema
text
autobiographical
account
biographical
account
personal narrative
narration
recount
life story
life history
chronicle
drama
piece of theatre
theatrical work
piece
author
writer
novelist
director chronicler
biographer
playwright
dramatist
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Topic sentences
The first thing that you need to write in a body paragraph is a great topic sentence.
Often, students make the mistake of writing a sentence that just has a topic noun
in it (like the name of a character or the name of a theme).
These topic sentences might look something like this:
• JK Rowling shows us Harry Potter’s courage.
• Romeo is impatient.
• Stanley needs friendship.
However, a better topic sentence has both a topic noun (also called an abstract or ‘idea’
noun) and a perspective phrase. In the three examples below, you can see that the
perspective phrase provides a more specific or detailed statement about how or why a topic
is explored in a text. This leads to better analysis in the body paragraph.
Author or
Character + verb
Topic
Noun
Perspective
phrase
Lee uses the symbol of night to emphasise the dark nature
of racism in Maycomb.
JK Rowling shows us Harry Potter’s courage by the way he stands up
to people who are more
powerful than himself.
Stanley needs friendship to overcome misfortune and
adversity.
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Starting your topic sentence is fairly straightforward.
Have a go starting a topic sentence with the name of an author or character, plus a verb
and then your topic. This table will help you with the verbs, but you’ll need to identify a
topic on your own:
Author verbs Character verbs
uses
emphasizes
shows us
reveals
highlights
focuses on
characterises
contrasts
depicts
illustrates
demonstrates
overcomes
typifies
seeks
uses
must
needs
The perspective in a topic sentence is a bit trickier. There are actually two parts to a
perspective phrase:
A conjunction, verb
or preposition which in-
troduces the
perspective A noun phrase
to emphasise the dark nature of racism in Maycomb.
by the way he stands up to people who are more powerful than himself.
to overcome misfortune and adversity.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Have a go at finishing your topic sentence by using one of these conjunctions, prepositions
or ‘to’ verbs to introduce a perspective about your topic.
Conjunctions Prepositions ‘to’ verbs
because
but
but also
not only…but also
as well as
through
by
with
for
to illustrate
to highlight
to represent
to depict
to show
to emphasise
to create
to overcome
Beyond the Basics
Once you have mastered this basic topic sentence structure, you can experiment with
changing the order of the concrete noun, verb and abstract noun.
For example:
abstract
noun verb concrete noun
Friendship enables Stanley to overcome the consistent unluckiness
and poverty that his family have had for
generations.
OR
Concrete
noun
Abstract
Noun Verb
Stanley’s friendship helps him overcome the consistent unluckiness
and poverty that his family have had for
generations.
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Topic sentences can also begin with prepositional phrases. These phrases can add important
information to the start of a topic sentence or help one paragraph link more effectively to
a preceding paragraph.
• Throughout the narrative, JK Rowling shows us the courage Harry Potter has in standing up
to people who misuse their power.
• From the very beginning of the play, Romeo’s impatience and thoughtlessness lead the way
to his eventual doom.
• At the climax of Holes, friendship enables Stanley to overcome the consistent unluckiness
and poverty that his family have had for generations.
Here are some prepositions and prepositional phrases you can use at the start of
topic sentences:
Throughout
Through
By
With
During
By showing us…
From the outset
In the beginning
At the start
At the point in the
story where…
For most of the
In the end
At the climax
At the crisis
By the end
Punctuation tip:
Remember: prepositional phrases at the start of a sentence need to
be separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma.
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Body paragraph sentences
with basic verbs and detailed noun groups
Often, when students write about examples in their text response essays they end up
retelling the story. They don’t mean to, but this is what happens. Usually, this happens
because these students are using very basic verbs like, goes, did, is.
For example:
Romeo is in love with Juliet and then he marries her.
In the table below is a list of verbs (on the left) that are frequently used throughout text
response writing. These verbs are often used to construct sentences that either retell the
story or offer only a very simple description of the text.
Frequently used
verbs
Poor sentence
example
went, goes Harry goes to Hogwarts to become
a wizard.
does, did Harry does not always do well in his classes.
has, had, have Stanley has a curse on him.
is, are, was, were Stanley is a fat boy.
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There are two ways we can improve sentences with these frequently used verbs :
1. Delete retelling verbs and replace them with a noun followed by a stronger verb.
Retelling
verbs
Poor sentence
example
Better sentence
example
went, goes Harry goes to Hogwarts to
become a wizard.
Harry’s education (noun) at
Hogwarts teaches (stronger verb)
him about the world of wizardry.
does, did Harry does not always do
well in his classes.
Harry’s struggle (noun) in his
classes demonstrates (stronger
verb) that he is not special in
every way.
2. Add more detailed noun groups to sentences with ‘is’ or ‘has’:
Retelling
verbs
Poor sentence
example
Better sentence
example
has, had, have Stanley has a curse on him. Stanley has a curse on him that
brings continual bad luck to him
and his family.
is, are, was, were Stanley is a fat boy. Stanley is a fat boy who struggles
to fit in because others tease him
for it.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
All of these words and phrases in the table below can be inserted after a noun to add
more information to it.
In your workbook, write a detailed sentence using the table below to help you.
Extra Information Words
Conjunctions Conjunction phrases
and
but
yet
or
because
and also
but also
yet also
not only…but also
Extra Information Words
ADJECTIVES AND
ADVERBIAL PHRASES RELATIVE PRONOUNS
along with
in addition to
together with
as well as
in conjunction with
on top of
including
which
who
that
in which
through which
by which
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Body paragraph sentences with multiple verbs
One of the important elements of analytical writing is to write longer sentences that
contain detailed analysis of the characters, events or techniques in a text.
Here’s an example:
By the very end of the novel, when Harry finds the Philosopher’s Stone, we think he is a hero
because he has worked with his friends, showing great team work and loyalty as well as
cleverness to figure out some of the puzzles.
Throughout this chapter there have been a number of suggestions about how to add extra
information to a sentence such as:
• By using conjunctions
• By creating noun groups
A further basic element to writing longer sentences is to use more verbs. Let’s look at how
many verbs are used in this example sentence:
By the very end of the novel, when Harry finds the Philosopher’s Stone, we think he is a
hero because he has worked with his friends, showing great team work and loyalty as well
as cleverness to figure out some of the puzzles.
In the example above, verbs have been used in three ways. Each of these ways allows the
writer to analyse the text in a different way and add variety to their sentence.
Below are examples of the three forms verbs can take in a sentence.
‘-ing’ verbs regular verbs ‘to’ verbs
finding
thinking
being
having
showing
figuring
finds
thinks
is
has
shows
figures
to find
to think
to be
to have
to show
to figure
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Effective text response sentences will always have a regular verb in them. To add more
detail, they will add more regular verbs or ‘to’ or ‘-ing’ verbs. It’s easy to know how to
use a regular verb in a sentence but ‘to’ and ‘-ing’ verbs are a bit tricky. Here are some
examples of how to use regular verbs plus ‘to’ and ‘-ing’ verbs within a sentence:
Sentences can also start with verbs. Here are same basic examples of how:
sentence structures
with multiple verbs examples
Regular verb chain Harry finds the philosopher’s stone, solves
puzzles and defeats Voldemort.
Regular verb chain + ‘-ing’ verb Harry finds the philosopher’s stone, solves
puzzles and defeats Voldemort, showing
us his heroic qualities.
Regular verb sentence + conjunction +
regular verb chain
Harry finds the philosopher’s stone because
he acts courageously, works with others
and thinks through problems.
different sentence
structures with
verbs examples
‘To’ verb + noun, rest of the sentence To find the philosopher’s stone, Harry must
work with others, solve problems and be
brave.
Preposition + ‘-ing’ verb, rest of
the sentence
By finding the philosopher’s stone, Harry
shows us he has the courage to stand up for
himself in frightening situations, put himself
in the face of danger and to trust his skills.
Conjunction + noun + verb, rest of
the sentence
When Harry finds the philosopher’s stone, it
shows us that he has the ability to work with
others, to solve problems and to be brave.
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tips:
• Commas are used to separate items on a list
where there is no ‘and’. When we use multiple
verbs in a sentence, it will usually create a list
of actions that need to be separated with a
comma:
Harry finds the philosopher’s stone (action 1),
solves puzzles (action 2) and defeats Voldemort
(action 3).
A comma goes after the first action in this list
but one isn’t needed between the second and
third action because there is an ‘and’.
• Commas are used before an ‘-ing’ verb when it
is adding on information to a sentence.
Harry finds the philosopher’s stone, solves puzzles
and defeats Voldemort, showing us his heroic
qualities.
• Sentence openers that add on information
before the rest of a main sentence need to be
separated out from the main sentence with a
comma:
When Harry finds the philosopher’s stone, it
shows us that he has the ability to work with
others, to solve problems and to be brave.
Adding a comma after the sentence opener
makes it easier for the reader to understand
the sentence.
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Body paragraph sentences that use evidence
In your body paragraphs, you will need to introduce a range of different examples to
support your discussion points. You should use a variety of ways to introduce different
types of evidence.
The paragraph below uses quotes, events and character attributes:
From the very beginning of the novel, it is clear that Harry is not an ordinary boy - he
is able to keep his sense of humour even when living with the horrible Dursley family
because he thinks “two of his ribs might already have cracked from trying not to laugh”.
The Dursleys are always mean to him and don’t even give him a real room to sleep in, but
Harry accepts the way he is treated. This acceptance highlights to the reader how Harry
is a kind of hero, even at the beginning of the narrative. Furthermore, when Harry begins
at Hogwarts, the reader starts to see just how heroic he really is. Harry’s heroism is evident
in his talent at Quiddich and flying, but it is also because Harry is clever and insightful
and is the only person who figures out that Voldemort has returned. By the very end of
the novel, when Harry finds the Philosopher’s Stone, we think he is a hero because he has
worked with his friends, showing great team work and loyalty as well as cleverness to figure
out some of the puzzles. So Rowling’s novel demonstrates that being a hero is more
complicated that just being brave.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
The table below offers a range of ways examples can be introduced.
In your workbook, practise introducing examples using the table below to help you.
• Highlighting this, is the …scene/moment where…
• Emphasing this, is the …scene/moment where…
• Images of…are used to highlight…
• Symbols of…are used to show…
• The technique of…illustrates how/that…
• A crisis emerges for… when…demonstrating that…
• The problem for…arises when…
• The incident where…suggests that…
• The scene in which…shows us that…
• It is when…
• It is evident when…
• Evidence such as…
• Instances such as…
• [Character’s name]’s statement that.. “…” shows us that…
• [Character’s name]’s belief that..“…” reveals to us that…
• [Character’s name] says, “…” indicating that…
• The action that most shows us…is when…
• The actions of …are contrasted with… when…
• The character is forced to… when…
• The setting of…emphasises that… because…
• [Author’s name] shows us that…is…when…
• In the scene/moment where…we see that…
• At the point where…the character is portrayed as…
• By…the character is represented as…
• When…occurs, the reader can clearly see…
• Throughout the text, moments of…underline the
importance of…
• In stark contrast to this, is the… where…
• This idea is made clear through…
• This is apparent when…
• These moments highlight…
• These characters highlight…
‘-ing’ verbs
Noun/
Article/
Pronoun
First
Preposition/
adverb
This/these
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Inserting and analysing quotes in your body
paragraphs
There are two important parts to using quotes effectively in your text analysis. The first
is actually inserting the quote itself and the second is analysing the quote. Let’s look
first at some different ways to insert quotes.
INSERTING QUOTES
Inserting quotes into your body paragraphs will be an important way for you to discuss and
analyse evidence from a text, but it’s one of the things students often find quite tricky.
One reason for this is that students often use quotes that are too long, like in the example
analysis about the character of Katniss from The Hunger Games below.
Katniss likes to have people to help her. ‘I take his hand, holding on tightly, preparing for the
cameras, and dreading the moment when I will finally have to let go.’ This shows that she
needs others to survive.
This example would have been better if the student writing it had selected the most
important words in the quote, rather than writing out a whole sentence, like this:
Katniss finds herself ‘dreading the moment’ when she will be on her own in the Hunger
Games, demonstrating that she needs others to help her survive.
From these two examples, it should be obvious that you should try to keep your quotes
short so you are focusing on the words that matter most.
Another reason students find putting quotes into sentences tricky is that they aren’t
familiar with different sentence structures they can employ to insert quotes.
Let’s look at two different examples of a student’s analysis of the character Katniss from
The Hunger Games:
‘I realize, for the first time, how very lonely I’ve been in the arena. How comforting the
presence of another human being can be.’ This shows that finding friendship is important
to her.
OR
Katniss learns ‘how comforting the presence of another human being can be’, which
demonstrates that finding friendship is important to her.
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The first example is not a very good one, because the student has not demonstrated an
ability to insert the quote within their own sentence. Inserting quotes properly into a
sentence means you must find a way for the quote to be a seamless part of the sentence.
Let’s break apart the second sentence to see how it inserts a quote seamlessly:
Character verb Quote
Relative
pronoun +
Analytical
verb
Katniss learns ‘how comforting
the presence of
another human
being can be’,
which demonstrates
that finding friendship
is important to her.
Once you can insert quote into a sentence like this, you might like to try putting a bit of
analysis in before the quote.
Here is an example:
Collins demonstrates how Katniss learns to find friendship and help when she writes
about ‘how comforting the presence of another human being can be’.
When this example is broken up, it looks like this:
Character
Analytical
verb Analysis
Reporting
verb + Quote
Collins demonstrates how Katniss learns
to find friendship
and help
when she writes about
‘how comforting the
presence of another
human being can be.’
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Use the words in the table below to insert a quote from a text into your own sentence.
Follow the structure in one of the example sentences from pages 24 and 25:
Relative
pronoun
Analytical
verb
Reporting
verb
which
who
that
demonstrates
shows
represents
describes
characterises
portrays
reveals
struggles
says
claims
thinks
feels
believes
admits
suggests
observes
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Analysis of quotes
In all of the examples we’ve used so far, the analysis of the quote looks pretty similar, but
this doesn’t mean there is only one way of structuring your analysis. In fact, your essay
would become pretty repetitive if that’s what you did.
One of the simplest ways of varying your sentence analysis is like this:
Katniss thinks ‘how comforting the presence of another human being can be’, demonstrating
how finding friendship is increasingly important to her.
When you break this sentence into its parts, it looks like this:
Character
Reporting
verb Quote
Comma +
‘ing’ verb
Katniss thinks ‘how comforting
the presence of
another human
being can be’
, demonstrating how
finding friendship
is increasingly
important to her.
Quotes can also follow sentence openers where the start of a sentence begins with an
extra information word like ‘when’, as you can see in the examples below:
Extra
information
sentence opener
+ reporting verb Quote Analytic verb
When Katniss thinks ‘how comforting the
presence of another
human being can be’
, she reveals how the
Hunger Games have
changed her into
someone with a better
understanding of others.
Although Katniss thinks ‘how comforting the
presence of another
human being can be’
, she struggles to give up
her independence and rely
upon the goodwill
of others.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Use the above examples as models and the verbs from the chart on page 13 to help you
analyse your quotes.
You can also use the extra information words
listed here to help you start your sentences
differently:
When
Although
Despite
Since
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tip:
You must put quotation marks around
your quotes.
Your teacher might prefer that you use double
quotation marks, like this “…” or single quotation
marks like this ‘…’ .
It doesn’t matter which you use, as long as you
are consistent and use the same quotation marks
every time you insert a quote.
There are also some other important rules
about how to punctuate when using quotes:
• Quotes after a reporting or thinking verb
such as ‘says’, ‘writes’, ‘suggests’, ‘claims’ ,
‘believes’ or ‘thinks’ need to be introduced
with a comma: Dumbledore says, “Voldemort…
cannot understand…love.”
• Quotes introduced after the verbs ‘is’,’are,’
‘was’, ‘has’ or ‘have’ do not need to be
introduced with a comma: Dumbledore says
that one thing Voldemort cannot “understand”
is “love”.
• Quotes not introduced after a verb don’t
need a comma before them: Dumbledore
says Voldemort “cannot understand…love”.
• Quotes can be introduced with a colon
when they provide explanatory evidence
for a complete point that has been made:
Dumbledore says that Harry is protected
from the dark lord by the care of his mother:
“Voldemort cannot understand love.”
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Body paragraph sentences that begin
in a variety of ways
A good body paragraph will include a series of similar examples or compare different
examples and discuss them.
To link sentences and build on discussion, we need to start our sentences in a variety
of ways as this body paragraph demonstrates:
From the very beginning of the novel, it is clear that Harry is not an ordinary boy - he
is able to keep his sense of humour even when living with the horrible Dursley family
because he thinks “two of his ribs might already have cracked from trying not to laugh”.
The Dursleys are always mean to him and don’t even give him a real room to sleep in but
Harry accepts the way he is treated. This acceptance highlights to the reader how Harry
is a kind of hero, even at the beginning of the narrative. Furthermore, when Harry begins
at Hogwarts, the reader starts to see just how heroic he really is. Harry’s heroism is evident
in his talent at Quiddich and flying, but it is also because Harry is clever and insightful and
is the only person who figures out that Voldemort has returned. By the very end of the novel,
when Harry finds the Philosopher’s Stone, we think he is a hero because he has worked with
his friends, showing great team work and loyalty as well as cleverness to figure out some of
the puzzles. So Rowling’s novel demonstrates that being a hero is more complicated than just
being brave.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
The table below provides suggestions about different words that can be used to start
sentences.
In your workbook, write a body paragraph and try to start sentences within it in at
least three different ways.
And
But
By
So
Use these words at the start of
a sentence to provide an
additional
example or further analysis on
top of the previous sentence
also
furthermore
as well as
moreover
along with
in addition
likewise
on top of
this is also
these
Use these words to introduce
a different example or point
of discussion
although
however
still
despite this
on the other
hand
nevertheless
yet
beside
aside from
in comparison
meanwhile
on the contrary
conversely
Use these words to begin
a sentence focusing on how
a technique is used or a
character acts in a text
through
since
with
when
as
Use these words to bring your
discussion to a conclusion
therefore
as a
consequence
hence
consequently
for this reason
ultimately
this
what this
these
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Concluding statements
Conclusions don’t simply repeat your introduction. They should highlight the main
points you have made in your essay, ensuring that your reader clearly understands the
best points you have made. There are a range of ways to begin your conclusion.
One simple and effective way is to begin with an adverb such as in this example:
Ultimately, J.K Rowling shows that heroes have different talents and abilities.
Here is a list of other adverbs and phrases you can use to start a conclusion:
Concluding
adverbs
Concluding
phrases
Ultimately…
Essentially…
Fundamentally….
On its surface the text be…but
underneath…
In the end…
While the novel shows us…the most
important message of the text is…
However, a conclusion needs more than just a concluding word or phrase at
its beginning.
Here is a complete example of a conclusion:
On its surface, Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone seems to show how important
bravery is. However, the characters are more than just courageous because they also use
their intelligence to overcome challenges. Furthermore, characters such as Hermione and
Ron demonstrate the power of loyalty in difficult times. Ultimately, the best kind of heroism
in Harry Potter and The Philosopher’s Stone is being true to yourself and your friends.
Notice that nearly all of the sentences in the above conclusion begin with a linking
adverb or adverbial phrase. These linking words allow the conclusion to:
• Provide an important point made in the essay
• Provide a alternative points in the essay
• Link each sentence and come to a logical end
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It’s time for you to give it a go
The table on the following page lists different words and phrases you can use to start
sentences that do each of these things.
In your workbook, write a conclusion using the table below to help you.
LINKING ADVERBS AND ADVERBIAL PHRASES
Alternative
perspective
Additional
points
Concluding
phrase
However
Although
While
Yet what is most important…However,
the text is not just about…
…but is actually
…really
…more importantly
…more signficantly
Furthermore
Moreover
Additionally
Finally
The result of this
As a result
As a consequence
In the end
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Writing poetry
analysis sentences
Many students groan at the idea of poetry – it’s full of
love-stuff and images of flowers, right? And what makes
it even weirder is that it’s written in short lines of words
in the wrong order that don’t sound like anything a real
person would say.
Firstly, most poetry is not about lovey-dovey images and
flowers. Your teacher will give you a range of poetry about
all sorts of things: from war, to indigenous experiences, to
images of everyday events. In fact, poetry is about exactly
the same things that all texts are about: life and how we, as
humans, experience it.
However, there is no arguing with the idea that poetry is
written quite differently to prose (prose is ‘normal’ writing),
and that it uses some pretty interesting words. These are
exactly the sorts of things you are expected to analyse
when writing about poetry. Rather than being put off by
how ‘weird’ poetry might look, you should analyse this very
weirdness.
This chapter is going to provide you with a range of words
and phrases to help you do just that.
POETRY ANALYSIS IS A TYPE OF TEXT RESPONSE
There are many ways in which writing an analysis of
poetry is like any other text analysis, and for this reason
you should use many of the tables from the ‘Writing text
response sentences’ chapter. However, there are specific
differences in writing about poems, and these are outlined
in this shorter chapter.
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Writing introductions
Writing about the type of poem
Your teacher will probably point out that there are different types of poems. Listed in
the table below are some types of poems that students commonly study.
See how many different types of poems you are already familiar with:
Poem
type Form Purpose
Limerick Five lines: lines 1,2 & 5 rhyme
with each other; lines 3&4 rhyme
with each other
To amuse and be funny for the
audience
Haiku Three lines: line 1 has 5 syllables,
line 2 has 7 syllables, line 3 has
five syllables
To provide a brief, vivid image
of something. Typically, a haiku
should contrast two ideas to show
one whole idea
Sonnet Fourteen lines: the first 8 lines
are called an ‘octet’; the last 6
lines are a ‘sestet’
Shakespearean sonnets have a
rhyming couplet as the last two
lines
Petrachan or classical sonnets just
have the octet and sestet
Like a haiku, a sonnet compares
two ideas to show a whole. Line 9
is called the ‘volta’ and is where
the contrasting idea is first
introduced
Ode Usually a regular (in rhyme and
rhythm) poem, often with several
stanzas
To praise a person, object or idea
Elegy Traditionally written in rhyming
couplets (when two lines rhyme)
To express sadness for a tragic
event, especially a death
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Poem
type Form Purpose
Ballad Several stanzas long, it usually has
four lines per stanza and these
lines rhyme in an ABAB pattern
To tell a story
Lyric poem The most common form in
modern poetry, lyric may be
written in free-form (i.e. not have
any obvious rhyme or rhythm).
However, the more you learn
about poetry, the more you will
be able to find the sneaky rhymes
and rhythms in this type of poetry
To explore an idea, emotion
or event
There are other types of poems you might be familiar with - including acrostic poems
(where every line begins with the letter of a larger word or name), or nursery rhymes, but
you will usually only look at these in the first years of primary school, and not be expected
to write an analysis of them.
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Writing introductory sentences
Knowing what kind of poem you are looking at will give you some clues as to why the
poet is using that form. This will provide the basis for an introductory sentence to your
analysis.
Let’s look at some examples:
One of Shakespeare’s most famous sonnets, ‘Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?’
draws heavily upon images of nature, and both compares his love with a summer’s day as
well as describing how his love is not going to pass away like summer, but will always be
remembered by his poem.
Although its images are ridiculous, Lewis Carroll’s famous ‘Jabberwocky’ is, in many ways,
a traditional ballad – it tells the tale of a young man defeating a monster.
By using the image of a single gum tree, Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s lyric poem ‘Municipal
Gum’ describes the way in which indigenous people have had their lives broken by European
settlement.
In each of these examples, the writer is using her understanding of the form of the poem to
describe what the poet is trying to do. Whenever you are writing about the form of a poem,
you must go on to explain why that form is important. Because each of these forms is doing
something slightly differently, you will need to use different analytical verbs to help with
your writing. Look at the table on the next page to see which verbs you will use for different
poems.
Sonnet
/Haiku Ode Elegy Ballad Lyric Limerick
contrasts
compares
juxtaposes
parallels
weighs
praises
lauds
enthuses
pays
tribute to
applauds
celebrates
mourns
laments
yearns
sorrows
over
longs for
suffers
dramatises
tells the
tale of
recounts
romanticises
embellishes
describes
ponders
reflects
considers
meditates
speculates
contemplates
imagines
revels in
delights
diverts
amuses
entertains
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As with the first sentence of a text response, the introductory sentence of a poetry
analysis has identifiable elements:
Introductory
sentence element Example
1. Introduces the poet, poem title
and poem form
…Shakespeare’s most famous sonnets, ‘Shall I
compare thee…’
…Lewis Carroll’s famous ‘Jabberwocky’…
… Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s lyric poem
‘Municipal Gum’…
2. Refers briefly to some of the
main images
… images of nature, and both compares his
love with a summer’s day…
…images are ridiculous…
…the image of a single gum tree…
3. Uses an analytical verb to describe
what is happening in the poem
… compares his love with a summer’s day…
… tells the tale of…
…describes the way in which…
It’s time for you to give it a go
Using both of the tables on pages 36 and 38, write a sentence that introduces the
poem you are analysing.
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Writing sentences about more than one poem
Sometimes you will be analysing more than one poem at a time, so you will need a
different way to introduce this sort of analysis.
There are two main ways you will be grouping poems together:
1. Poems that are about a shared idea (e.g. poetry about war)
2. A group of poems by the same poet (e.g. poems by Emily Dickinson)
These two groups require different sort of sentences, for example:
Many poets struggle to come to terms with the brutal and dehumanising experience of war,
often contrasting the glorious ideals of leaders with the horrifying reality of men’s deaths.
OR
Emily Dickinson’s collection of poetry explores the essence of life, nature and the
inevitability of death.
POEMS THAT ARE ABOUT A SHARED IDEA
When analysing poems about a shared idea, it is important to outline that idea in your first
sentence. In the case above, the shared idea is war, but rather than just jotting down that
very short word, the writer has put in a couple of interesting adjectives to describe the
nature of war. This means that her first sentence is much more interesting and gives a focus
to how she will discuss the way war is presented in the poems she is analysing.
It’s time for you to give it a go
Look at the table on the next page and choose one word from each column to construct
an introductory sentence that links your poems together.
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Words
to group
the poets Verb Adjectives
Idea
Nouns Verb 2
Many poets…
Countless
writers…
Various writers…
Frequently,
poets…
In many of their
works, poets…
ponder
muse upon
consider
reflect
describe
examine
explore
praise
enthuse
rhapsodise
struggle
wrestle
brutal
dehumanising
dreadful
awful
desperate
fundamental
essential
important
insightful
joyous
celebratory
exuberant
delightful
war
life
death
love
nature
cycles of life
prejudice
invasion
justice
gender
colonisation
suffering
joyous
moments
in life
being an
outsider
turning points
leaving…
feelings of…
images of…
moments
when…
being faced
with…
contrasting
comparing
juxtaposing
paralleling
weighing
praising
lauding
enthusing
paying tribute
to
applauding
celebrating
describing
pondering
reflecting
considering
meditating
speculating
contemplating
imagining
*or any other
verb from
earlier tables
with an –ing
ending
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A GROUP OF POEMS BY THE SAME POET
When grouping poems by a single writer together, you will need to have a range of noun
phrases to refer to the poems, like in the example below:
Emily Dickinson’s collection of poetry explores the essence of life, nature and the
inevitability of death.
It’s time for you to give it a go
Use one of the phrases from the list below, as well as words from the table above to
construct an introductory sentence about a number of poems by the same author.
Noun phrase for ‘group of poems’
collection of poetry
body of work
collection
anthology of poems
selection of verse
collection of verse
the collected works of…
a compilation
Writing body paragraphs
Topic sentences for the first paragraph
When you are analysing a single poem, it is often easiest to analyse from beginning to
end. You will need to tell your reader which part of the poem you are analysing, and
this information will often be in the topic sentence of your analysis. The topic sentence
for a poetry analysis should therefore include information about where in the poem
your analysis is focusing, and what this section of the poem is about.
Let’s have a look at an example of an analysis of Robert Frost’s poem
‘The Road Not Taken’:
The first stanza outlines the problem facing Frost: there are two diverging roads and the
poet must make a choice as he ‘could not travel both’.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Combine a phrase or word from each of the columns below to construct a topic sentence:
Place/time
phrase Verb Noun Phrase
The first stanza…
From the first line…
The opening stanza…
The initial couplet…
The first verse…
The first part of…
The…
…second stanza
…third stanza
…final verse
In the…
…first stanza,
…second stanza,
…third verse,
…fourth verse,
…final stanza,
…concluding stanza,
…last stanza,
…the poet…
…the poem…
…[Poet’s name]…
outlines
describes
explores
begins
creates
focuses on
expresses
suggests
hints at
suggests
considers
reflects upon
recounts
the problem facing…
the experience of…
the idea of…
a sense of…
a feeling of…
a memory of…
images of…
an image of…
a picture of…
a scene from…
a scene that…
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Sentences to analyse aspects of poetry
USING THE NAMES OF TECHNIQUES IN SENTENCES
Of course, writing about poetry will mean that you have to discuss different sorts of
things than you would in a ‘normal’ text response. You will have to talk about rhythm
and imagery and all sorts of other things. While it’s difficult to generalise about the
effects that these techniques will have in the individual poem you are analysing, there
are some new words that you will want to be aware of so that you can write about them
with some kind of insight.
Look in the table below for a list of poetic techniques, a short definition of what they are,
and a very general discussion of how they might work in a poem.
Technique How it works
What effect might
it have?
Rhyme Usually, the final word of
one line will rhyme with the
final word of another line.
Sometimes, there might be an
internal rhyme where the word
in the middle of a line rhymes
with a word elsewhere.
Connects words and ideas
together.
Rhythm This is how fast or slow the lines
of a poem go. There are many
different poetic rhythms that
you can look up online.
Makes a poem go faster or
slower and therefore makes it
seem more urgent or relaxed.
Caesura Punctuation that happens in
the middle of a line, rather than
at the end of it.
Stops the rhythm of a line and
therefore puts a pause where
the action or the description
stops. The reader pauses as
well.
Stanza The ‘verse’ of a poem - like a
paragraph in prose writing.
Contains an idea or image that
connects to the rest of the
poem, but is also independent.
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Enjambment A sentence flows from
one stanza to another (or,
sometimes, from one line to
another).
Gives a sense of anticipation of
what is coming next.
Alliteration Words begin with the same
sound, often the same letter
(e.g. raging rivers).
Connects words and their
images together.
Assonance Like a rhyme ‘gone wrong’ –
sounds within words sort of
rhyme, but it’s not an exact
match.
Connects words and their
images together.
Susurration Lots of whispering ’s’ sounds
(e.g. silver smoke swathes), or
the sounds of a soft ‘c’ (e.g.
cities, cell).
Makes it seem as if the poet is
whispering.
Onomatopoeia When the word makes the
sound it is describing (like the
word ‘bang’).
The reader can ‘hear’ what the
poet is describing.
Volta The ninth line of a sonnet. The ‘turning point’, where
a new or contrasting idea is
introduced.
Although these ideas may seem complicated at first, during class you will become more
familiar with them. The difficult thing is writing about them in your essay. You will need to
practise this skill.
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Below are two examples of sentences analysing the use of techniques in a poem. This first
is about Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s ‘Municipal Gum’ and the second is about Lewis Carroll’s
‘Jabberwocky’:
Noonucal highlights the idea of long-lasting suffering by using the rhyme of ‘wronged’ and
‘prolonged’ to connect the sound of ‘long’ with the hurt of the tree, which is ongoing.
The onomatopoeia of the word ‘galumphing’ conjures up the sound of a child making loud
sound effects as she pretends to gallop home, emphasising the child-like nature of the poem.
Broken into parts of speech, the sentences look like this:
Author +
Verb
Noun
phrase
Technique
& Quote
Analytic
verb
Noonucal highlights the idea of long last-
ing suffering
by using the rhyme
of ‘wronged’ and
‘prolonged’
to connect the sound
of ‘long’ with the hurt
of the tree, which is
ongoing.
Technique
+ Quote Verb
Noun
phrase
Analytic
verb
The onomatopoeia
of the word
‘galumphing’
conjures up the sound of a child
making loud sound
effects as she pre-
tends to gallop home,
emphasing the
child-like nature
of the poem.
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These examples demonstrate how verbs can be used in different forms. ‘Highlights’, ‘to
connect’ and ‘emphasising’ are all verbs, but in different forms. The table below shows a
range of useful analytic verbs in different forms.
Regular verbs ‘ing’ verbs ‘to’ verbs
highlights
emphasises
illustrates
conjures
creates
underscores
epitomises
represents
accentuates
intensifies
highlighting
emphasising
illustrating
conjuring
creating
underscoring
epitomising
representing
accentuating
intensifying
to highlight
to emphasise
to illustrate
to conjure
to create
to underscore
to epitomise
to represent
to accentuate
to intensify
Now it’s your turn
Write a sentence analysing the use of a technique in a poem, following the structures
provided in the example sentences above.
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Writing about similes and metaphors
Similes and metaphors or comparisons and contrasts are basic techniques used in
many poems. They allow the reader to associate a certain picture of one thing with a
particular idea or thing in a poem.
Here is an example analysis of a simile in Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s ‘Municipal Gum’:
Noonuccal likens the tree’s imprisonment in ‘hard bitumen’ to the experience of a ‘poor cart
horse’ which has been ‘castrated, broken…wronged’. This parallel to a mistreated animal,
creates for the reader a striking image of the tree as a living creature that is being tortured.
Two words are particularly important for this analysis of the connection between the tree
and the horse: the verb likens and the noun parallel.
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Now it’s your turn
Identify a simile, metaphor, comparison or contrast in a poem. Use the verbs and nouns in
the table below to write one or more sentences analysing this feature:
Verbs Nouns
SIMILAR DIFFERENT SIMILAR DIFFERENT
compares
likens
equates
draws a parallel
between
links
connects
creates an analogy
between
juxtaposes
contrasts
emphasises the
difference between
illustrates the
difference between
draws a line
between
comparison
likeness
parallel
link
analogy
juxtaposition
contrast
difference
distance
division
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Using adjectives when writing in detail
about poetry
We typically think about adjectives in connection with creative writing, but this is not
the only thing adjectives are good for. In the section about writing introductory sentences
analysing poetry, you will have noticed that we referred to using adjectives to help describe
the idea nouns. When analysing poetry, it is important to note that you should describe
what you are analysing, and to do this, you will need to use a whole range of adjectives.
1. ADJECTIVES TO DESCRIBE SOUNDS:
The sounds words make are an important tool poets use to create a feeling or picture for
the reader about the ideas they are writing about. Here is an example about Oodgeroo
Noonuccal’s ‘Municipal Gum’:
Noonuccal illustrates the difference between the world of the city and the bush, by
contrasting the harsh sound of the words ‘hard bitumen’ to the more natural and softer
sounds of the words ‘cool worlds of leafy forest halls’.
You will need to be able to analytically describe sounds in poems.
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It’s your turn
Look in the table below to find a series of adjectives that might help you to discuss the
sounds in the poem you are analysing:
sounds made
by ‘hard’
letters
(such as T,P,K)
sounds made
by ‘soft’
letters
(such as S)
happy
sounds
sad
sounds
percussive
jarring
explosive
clattering
clapping
harsh
cold
abrupt
susurrating
whispering
numerous
sighing
sibilant
Sounds made by
‘fricatives’ (such as f, th)
vibrating
shivering
shuddering
puffing
babbling
burbling
rapid
chattering
gleeful
warm
wailing
mournful
keening
weeping
lonely
cold
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2. ADJECTIVES TO DESCRIBE IMAGES
Poems are ‘word pictures’ that aim to create striking images in our minds of the things
they describe. This means we need to have a vocabulary to describe the types of pictures
poems create. Here is an example about Shakespeare’s ‘Shall I Compare The To A
Summer’s Day?’:
The speaker’s description of his lover’s attractiveness as ‘eternal’ draws an image of
magnificent and superior beauty for the reader.
If we break the above example sentence into parts, it looks like this:
Picture
noun
phrase
Picture
verb
Picture
noun
phrase
Positive
picture
adjectives
The speaker’s
description of his lover’s
attractiveness as ‘eternal’
draws an image of magnificent and
superior beauty
for the reader.
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Now it’s your turn
Identify a quote from a poem that creates an image. Write a sentence analysing the image
it creates using the words from the chart below to help you:
Picture verbs Picture noun phrases
create
draw
cast
illustrate
accentuate
sketch
reveal
illuminate
image of…
picture of…
vision of…
account of…
description of…
impression of…
Positive
picture
adjectives
Negative
picture
adjectives
Emphatic
picture
adjectives
lush
warm
enticing
soft
joyful
peaceful
magnificent
natural
superior
picturesque
luminous
incandescent
grim
dark
bleak
cold
lonely
violent
hard
isolated
alienating
unnatural
inferior
damaged
stark
vivid
powerful
strong
startling
striking
immense
profound
deep
complex
intricate
grave
dramatic
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Noun phrases
When you are writing about poetry, you will often want to be quite specific in your
language, or describe exactly what you mean in an idea. It’s often very difficult to find
one single word that says exactly what’s in your head. So you can build noun groups
to help you be more specific. You’ll remember that we discussed noun groups as
important components of a topic sentence. However, noun groups can be used in any
sentence in a poetry analysis to more specifically describe exactly what you mean.
Let’s look at an example about Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s ‘Municipal Gum’:
Noonucal’s question ‘What have they done to us?’ expresses both a sense that she is
connected to nature and grief for what has happened to it.
Although none of the words used to describe the question are very difficult, we know
exactly what the student means in this phrase.
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Now it’s your turn
Try using the noun phrases below to help you build longer noun phrase.
…the idea of… …the sound of…
…the impression that…
…the understanding of…
…the belief in…
…the significance of…
…the hope for…
…the memory of…
…the thought that…
…the echoing of…
…the refrain of…
…the tone of…
…the clamour of…
…the lament of…
…the feeling of… …the experience of..
…the sense that…
…the pleasure in…
…the desire for…
…the sorrow in…
…the grief for…
…the delight in…
…the horror over…
…the passion for…
…moments when…
…the times when…
…occasions of…
…stages in our lives when…
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Adverbs and prepositions for describing
when in a poem
Whenever you are pointing out something about a poem, you will need to be
specific about where this example is. To do this, you will need a range of adverbial or
prepositional phrases to help you pinpoint exactly where something is in the poem.
Below are two examples. The first is about Robert Frost’s ‘The Road Not Taken’ and the
second is about Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s ‘Municipal Gum’:
In the first two stanzas, Frost outlines the nature of the two different paths that confront
him.
Repeatedly in the poem, Noonuccal employs adjectives to portray the city world of the gum
as harsh and unnatural.
Now it’s your turn
Write three different sentences analysing different parts of a poem. Look in the table
below for some phrases and words to help you out.
Prepositional phrases Adverbial phrases
At the beginning of…
In the [first line, second line etc…)…
Throughout the (first stanza, second
stanza, etc.)…
From the very first line…
Towards the end of the poem…
In the closing line…
In the final couplet…
At the volta of the sonnet…
At this point, the poet…
Here, the poet…
Frequently, the poet…
Repeatedly in the poem,…
Again, the poet is here…
Early in the stanza…
Later in the poem…
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Analysing patterns in poetry
In poetry, more than any other kind of text, there are many patterns that you can
describe. Phrases are repeated, or can be transformed (so that they are similar, but
slightly different).
Here’s an example analysis of a pattern in Shakespeare’s ‘Shall I Compare Thee To A
Summer’s Day?’:
In line seven, the speaker argues that nature can be ‘dimmed.’ The next line reiterates this
idea, stating that nature ‘declines.’
In this example, the verb ‘reiterates’ is used to point out a pattern. You will need a range of
verbs like this to describe patterns in the poems you are analysing.
Now it’s your turn
Identify a pattern that occurs in poem. Using the words in the table below, write a
sentence or sentences analysing this pattern.
repeats builds upon transforms
comes back to
returns to
reiterates
replicates
adds to
heightens
intensifies
strengthens
expands upon
develops
alters
metamorphoses
converts
reshapes
refashions
revises
evolves
modifies
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Inserting quotes and analysing evidence
Like any text response writing, you will need to use quotes in your poetry analyses.
You should refer to the ‘Using Quotes’ section of the text response chapter for a guide
to different ways you can insert quotes into a sentence. However, there are a number
of unique aspects that you should be aware of when using quotes to analyse poetry.
Firstly, the quotes you will use in a poetry analysis are usually far shorter than quotes
you might use in a text response essay. Often, they are only one word long, like in the
example below:
Frost introduces the idea of ‘morning’, epitomising his own youth, as the morning is a new,
fresh time of day.
When this sentence is broken into parts of speech, it looks like this:
Author + verb Quote ‘–ing’ verb analysis
Frost introduces the idea of ‘morning’, epitomising his own youth, as the
morning is a new, fresh time of day.
Now it’s your turn
Write a sentence quoting and analysing a single word from a poem. Referring to the table
on page 47 will help you do this.
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At other times, you might want to insert two quotes to analyse a connection between
different parts of a poem.
Here is an example:
The speaker describes the second path as ‘ just as fair’ and ‘worn…about the same’,
illustrating that there is no real difference between the two roads.
When this sentence is broken into parts of speech, it looks like this:
Author
+ verb Quote
Conjunction
and further
quote
Comma +
‘–ing’ verb
to analyse
evidence
The speaker
describes the
second path as
‘ just as fair’ and ‘worn…about the
same’,
illustrating that there
is no real difference
between the two roads.
Now it’s your turn
Have a go putting two quotes from a poem into a sentence and analyse the quotes in the
same sentence. This table will help you:
Conjunctions ‘–ing’ verbs
and
as well as
and also
as both…and
as not just…but also
illustrating
epitomising
demonstrating
emphasising
highlighting
capturing
underlining
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However, sometimes you will want to insert a longer quote, possibly even a quote from
two different lines in the poem. There are two ways you can do this. Firstly, you can insert
the quotation in the same way as you would for a text analysis, like in the example below:
After this long pause, Frost delivers the punch line of his poem: that he took the road ‘less
travelled by,/ and that has made all the difference.’
You will note that there is a forward slash in the middle of the quote. This is to indicate
where the line break is. If you have a quote that includes a line break, it is conventional to
put in a forward slash to indicate that there should be a break.
A second way to insert a quote, especially if it’s longer than three lines, is like this:
Frost indicates the irony of the phrase ‘road not taken’ in the final stanza of his poem, when
he dramatises the importance of the decision-making of his youth in the lines
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
Here, he emphasises his own sense of self-importance with the long, dramatic pause between
the repetition of the word ‘I’…
Here, the lines of the poem are simply indented on separate lines within the paragraph of
the analysis but, after this, the paragraph continues as normal.
Now it’s your turn
Insert a quote of at least three lines into your analysis.
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Punctuation
tip:
Colons can be used to introduce explanations
or evidence. It is the punctuation equivalent of
using a phrase such as ‘for example’ or ‘which is’.
For instance, the above analysis could have been
written like this:
After this long pause, Frost delivers the punchline
of his poem, which is that he took the road ‘less
travelled by,/ and that has made all the difference.’
However, using a colon instead of ‘which is’
makes the analysis clearer and more elegant.
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Sentences about what a poet thinks or believes
One of your primary jobs in a poetry analysis is to analyse the message of the whole
poem or parts of a poem. You will usually do this in the conclusion of your analysis.
Sometimes a poem is simply providing an image of a certain memory or moment or
describing a feeling; at other times, the message might be more complex. While your
teacher will help you to understand what the particular message of a poem is, you will
need to have certain words or phrases to help you write about this. Typically, these
words will be nouns and noun groups, and then you will want an active verb to describe
what the poet thinks or believes about this idea.
Below are two examples of sentences analysing the message of particular parts of a poem.
The active verb and the noun groups have been put in bold. The first example is about
Shakespeare’s ‘Shall I Compare The To A Summer’s Day?’ and the second is about Robert
Frost’s ‘The Road Not Taken’:
With the words ‘thy eternal summer shall not fade’, the speaker celebrates the divine beauty
of his lover, which is superior to nature.
At the beginning of the last stanza Frost says, ‘I shall be telling this with a sigh’. Here, Frost
critiques the way memories can change the reality of what happened.
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Now it’s your turn
Using the words in the table below, analyse the message of a part of a poem:
Active verbs to
describe the beliefs
of the poet
Noun groups for
message of poem
cautions…
celebrates…
describes…
draws a connection between…
projects…
contrasts…
juxtaposes…
imagines…
creates…
dramatises…
expresses…
reflects…
emphasises…
critiques…
…the difficult nature of…
…the beauty of…
…the challenges of…
…the dangers of…
…the reality of…
…the experience of…
…a belief in…
…a sense of foreboding about…
…a powerful sense of…
…the way…can…
…a striking image of…
…a future, where…
…a past in which…
…memories of…
…the delights to be found in…
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Persuasive Piece
There are many different forms a persuasive piece can take.
They can be letters, editorials, opinion pieces or blogs.
However, all of these forms share certain kinds of language.
Writing persuasively is not what you write but how you
write it.
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Developing a Contention
All persuasive writing must have a clear contention - but this is not unique to
persuasive writing. Your expository essays, and text response essays should also have
contentions. What is unique to persuasive writing is that your contention should be a
call to action for the reader. You’re telling your reader what to think, what to do, how
to act. The words that most convey this in our contentions are modal verbs.
‘Mode’ means ‘method’ or ‘the way something is done’. Modal verbs mean verbs that tell
us the mode in which something should be done - perfect for persuasive writing. By using
a strong modal verb, you are telling your reader how they should, ought to, must react.
In the two examples below the second contention is much stronger because it has a modal
verb (must) in it and it therefore tells readers what action is necessary (whether or not
you agree with the contention!).
Using mobile phones is a distraction for students.
OR
Using mobile phones is a distraction for students and they must be banned from
all classrooms.
It’s time for you to give it a go
Use the strong modal verbs in the table below to write your contention:
Modal Verbs (strong) Modal Verbs (weak)
should
ought
must
need
would
have (i.e. We have to accept our
responsibility to the environment.)
can
could
may
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Engaging the audience through pronouns
Good persuasive writing relies upon you engaging your audience in a more direct way
than other, formal types of writing. This means that you will use pronouns that you
wouldn’t use in any other forms of writing.
There are three different groups of pronouns represented in the table below:
Number
First
Person
Second
Person Third Person
Singular I, me you he, she, it, her, him
Plural we, us you they, them, everybody,
everyone, nobody
Singular my, mine your, yours his, hers, its
(note that there is no
apostrophe here)
Plural our, ours your, yours their, theirs
(note that there is no
apostrophe here)
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tip:
One of the important things to notice
about pronouns is that they DO NOT have
any possessive apostrophes in them. The is
particularly important to understand about the
pronoun ‘it’. Let’s say we wrote this persuasive
sentence:
Society must take care of its environment.
In this sentence ‘its’ does not need an
apostrophe before the ’s’ because it is a
possessive pronoun. See the Grammar Habits
section at the end of the book for a more
detailed explanation about possessive pronouns.
Remember:
‘Its’ only has an apostrophe if it is short for ‘it is’.
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How will pronouns improve your writing?
Look at the following three sentences:
Technology allows access to interesting help and advice – I use it regularly – and that’s
why it should be used in all classrooms.
OR
Technology helps you access interesting help and advice – you probably use it regularly
– and that’s why it should be used in all classrooms.
OR
Technology helps Frankie access interesting help and advice – she uses it regularly –
and that’s why it should be used in all classrooms.
The most persuasive of these three sentences is the one with ‘you’ in it. Using second
person pronouns directly connects the reader to the writing itself, and that’s what good
persuasive writing does.
This second sentence would probably have been even more interesting if the writer had
tried to directly connect with the reader by combining the use of first and second person
pronouns, like this:
Technology helps us access interesting help and advice – like me, you are probably a regular
user – and that’s why technology should be used in all classrooms.
Connecting with your reader is one of the easiest ways you can write more persuasively;
we are much more likely to agree with people we like and feel a sense of connection with.
You can establish or create a sense of connection easily when you regularly use first and
second person pronouns.
One very basic way we can use pronouns to be persuasive is to show how people belong
to or don’t belong to a bigger group who think or act in a certain way. Sometimes being
part of this bigger group is a positive thing, or sometimes it’s a negative thing.
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Here are some examples of persuasive sentences which use first, second and third person
pronouns to show people how we can belong to a certain group and how this can be
positive or negative:
Good to be part
of a group
Bad to be part
of a group
1st person Like most of you, I want my children
to inherit a world which is not
destroyed by pollution.
What I’m suggesting that’s different
to what nearly everyone else thinks,
is that we must force people to take
action rather than wait for them to
decide to do it themselves.
2nd person Few of you would like to think of
yourselves as being against sustainable
energy.
A few of you care more about having
big cars than a healthy environment.
3rd person Every single persons knows we have
a responsibility to take care of the
environment.
Everyone at some point in their
lives has done something which has
damaged the environment.
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Below are some common and effective phrases featuring pronouns which show either
that it’s positive or negative that people belong to a bigger group.
It’s time for you to give it a go
Try engaging your audience with one or more of the phrases in this table.
What most people do What few people do
like most people, I…
like nearly everyone, I…
all of us
for all of us
each and every one of us
many of us/you
most of us/you
every one of us
each and every person
every single person
unlike most people, I…
in contrast to what most people think, I…
few of us
few of you
few of us like to admit that…
for some of you…
nobody
few people
no one
no one amongst us
alone there is little we can do
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Labelling the issue with positive
and negative nouns
In persuasive writing, you should try to label your side of the issue with positive nouns,
to create a positive reaction in your reader, and dismiss the other side of the issue with
negative nouns, like this:
Mobile phone use should be seen as an opportunity for the class room, rather than the
catastrophe most teachers try to describe them as.
OR
Students using mobile phones in class has reached crisis point - using more technology
is not always the miracle people try to suggest it is.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Have a practice using these nouns to label your own issue:
Positive Nouns Negative Nouns
opportunity
advantage
breakthrough
solution
miracle
answer to prayers
stroke of good luck
asset
improvement
leap forward
gain
progress
benefit
service
recovery
regeneration
upgrade
future
plight
problem
quandary
predicament
crisis
dilemma
destruction
catastrophe
embarrassment
imbroglio
emergency
disaster
mess
moment of truth (could be positive)
point of no return
hot potato
dire straits
showdown
shambles
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Using Adjectives
Of course, these nouns can be even more powerful if you use positive and negative
adjectives to paint a more favourable or gloomy picture, like this.
Mobile phone use should be seen as a brilliant opportunity for the class room, rather than
the dreadful catastrophe most teachers try to describe them as.
OR
Students using mobile phones in class has reached a dangerous crisis point - using more
technology is not always the productive miracle people try to suggest it is.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Select positive or negative adjectives to describe the nouns you are using to label the
outcomes of your issue:
Positive Negative
admiration of this view and people
who hold it
admirable
advanced
ambitious
brilliant
beautiful
creative
dazzling
essential
golden
important
intrepid
intelligent
new
original
realistic
reasonable
scientific
scholarly
detraction from this view and
people who hold it
abysmal
agonising
alarming
awful
bland
boring
broken
corrupt
disgraceful
dreadful
evil
grubby
gruesome
gullible
ignorant
mediocre
selfish
sentimental
snivelling
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Positive Negative
effort of people
brave
courageous
conscientious
determined
eager
energetic
fearless
heroic
imaginative
kind
effort of people
careless
clueless
confused
exhausted
fickle
foolhardy
helpless
ill-informed
impossible
impractical
incompetent
substandard
superficial
stupid
the effect
beneficial
decent
effective
essential
harmonious
hopeful
long-term
lasting
productive
profitable
rewarding
tangible
the effect
barren
bruising
dangerous
demanding
disastrous
failing
haunting
inconsequential
negligible
short-term
trivial
wasteful
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tip:
Commas are used to separate items on a list.
If you use three adjectives in a row, you will
need to separate them with one comma and a
conjunction such as ‘and’ as in this example:
Students’ use of mobile phones in class has reached
a dangerous, dreadful and difficult crisis point. Using
more technology is not always the creative, intelligent
and productive miracle people try to suggest it is.
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Tricolons (the rule of three)
And why stop at just one adjective? When trying to persuade others, people will often
use three adjectives (or three noun phrases, for that matter), to give their readers an
idea of just how great (or dreadful) something is:
Mobile phone use should be seen as a brilliant opportunity for the class room, rather than
the dreadful, evil and dangerous catastrophe most teachers try to describe them as.
OR
Students using mobile phones in class has reached a dangerous crisis point - using more
technology is not always the creative, intelligent and productive miracle people try to
suggest it is.
Note that each of these sentences has just one tricolon. It’s a bit too much
if you write something like:
Students using mobile phones in class has reached a dangerous, dreadful and difficult crisis
point, using more technology is not always the creative, intelligent and productive miracle
people try to suggest it is.
You can also apply a tricolon to the nouns you used in the previous noun activity,
like this:
Mobile phone use should be seen as an opportunity, a breakthrough and a leap forward
for the class room, rather than the catastrophe most teachers try to describe them as.
OR
Students using mobile phones in class has reached an emergency, a disaster and a crisis
point - using more technology is not always the miracle people try to suggest it is.
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Comparative and Superlative Adjectives
You can add extra impact by experimenting with comparative and superlative
adjectives. These are adjectives that tell you just how great (or terrible) something is.
Often, as with many of the adjectives in the above table, you can change an adjective
into a comparative adjective by adding more before it, and into a superlative by adding
most before it, like this:
Mobile phone use should be seen as a brilliant opportunity for the class room, rather than
the most dreadful catastrophe most teachers try to describe them as.
OR
Students using mobile phones in class has reached a dangerous crisis point - using more
technology is not always the most productive miracle people try to suggest it is.
However, many adjectives are changed into comparative form by putting ‘-er’ at the ending
or superlative form by putting ‘-est’ at the end.
Grammar note:
When you use a superlative adjective to describe a noun, you will need to also use
‘the’ before it.
‘The’ is called a ‘definite article’ because it means you are writing about one
specific thing. ‘A’ or ‘an’ are called ‘indefinite articles’ because you’re not using
them to write about a particular thing, but something general.
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These are some persuasive adjectives and their comparative and superlative forms:
Adjective Comparative Superlative
Positive good
wise
great
large
quick
big
simple
smart
better
wiser
greater
larger
quicker
bigger
simpler
smarter
best
wisest
greatest
largest
quickest
biggest
simplest
smartest
Negative strange
sad
short
tiny
narrow
shallow
stranger
sadder
shorter
tinier
narrower
shallower
strangest
saddest
shortest
tiniest
narrowest
shallowest
So you could describe your issue as:
The best opportunity, the wiser course of action, the simplest solution
Or rubbish the other side of the issue as:
The shorter term solution, the strangest idea, the tiniest of improvements
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Persuasive help and hurt verbs
Just as adjectives can be used to persuasively label something as good or bad, so too
can help and hurt verbs. These verbs help you persuasively describe how an action will
create a positive or negative outcome.
For example:
Extra funding will improve road safety.
Road deaths destroy families and communities.
Now it’s your turn
Have a go writing a persuasive sentence using a verb from the first two columns from the
table below:
Help verbs Hurt verbs Adverbs
benefit
start
improve
succeed
help
support
aid
advance
enhance
promote
develop
create
expand
lift
build
produce
establish
uphold
abolish
harm
hurt
destroy
devastate
take away
restrict
cut
stop
prevent
crush
lose
ruin
wreck
finish
damage
demean
ravage
entirely
completely
dramatically
significantly
considerably
utterly
ultimately
permanently
instantly
rapidly
quickly
slowly
actively
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Verbs can be made even more powerful by combining them with adverbs - particularly in
persuasive writing.
In the examples below, the adverbs are underlined and the verbs in bold:
The extra funding will dramatically improve road safety.
This law will work to significantly reduce racism.
Now it’s your turn
This time, have a go writing a persuasive sentence using both a verb and an adverb from
the table above.
It’s important to note that help verbs don’t always need to be used to describe a positive
outcome and hurt verbs don’t always need to be used to describe a negative outcome.
Sometimes we want to argue that we shouldn’t support an action because it will bring
about something bad:
These laws will only support racists to hurt and offend others.
At other times we want to argue that an action will stop something bad:
This law will abolish discrimination from our schools.
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Double-pronged sentences
Often, persuasive writers will wish to show their readers that there is a particular fact
that has a rational explanation or consequence.
To do this, persuasive writers will often use multi-pronged sentences like these which
combine both the fact and further explanation:
(First prong) Although mobile phone use has increased amongst the student population,
the results students receive have not increased, (Second prong) demonstrating that mobile
phone use does not have a positive impact upon student work.
OR
(First prong) While students’ results have not necessarily increased over the past decade,
they have not decreased either, (Second prong) no matter how much they have used their
mobile phones.
Compare the sentences above with the sentences below:
Mobile phone use has increased amongst the student population. The results students
receive have not increased. Mobile phone use does not have a positive impact upon
student work.
OR
Students’ results have not necessarily increased over the past decade. They have not
decreased either. No matter how much they have used their mobile phones. We cannot
assume that mobile phone use has impacts negatively upon student learning.
What the second set of sentences lack are conjunctions: the words which help us add more
information to a sentence. Without the conjunctions, the second set of sentences seem
more like a list of separate things, rather than ideas that connect.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Use the individual conjunctions and the phrases or pairs in this table to construct double
pronged sentences which persuasively present the meaning of examples and evidence:
Conjunctions
Conjunction
phrases
Conjunction
pairs
although
while
despite
since
unless
if
as a consequence of
as a result of
as soon as
as long as
even if
in order to
no matter how
now that
Not only…, but also
Not just…, but also
Rather than…, we should/
must…
If…, then why…
Neither…nor
Cause and Effect verbs
Another thing that creates stronger persuasive writing is using strong verbs that
describe the cause or effect of certain issues, like this:
Although mobile phone use has increased amongst the student population, the results
students receive have not increased, demonstrating that mobile phone use does not have
a positive impact upon student work.
OR
While students’ results have not necessarily increased over the past decade, they have not
decreased either, no matter how much they have used their mobile phones: therefore,
we cannot assume that mobile phone use impacts negatively upon student learning.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Pick at least one cause or effect verb from the table below to write a sentence arguing
about the impact of an action:
Alternative Verbs for
“Cause” or “Impacts” -ing form
results
activates
influences
inspires
benefits
advances
instigates
mobilises
prompts
spurs
supports
stimulates
propels
rouses
motivates
energises
induces
impels
drives
incites
emerges
occurs
aids
supports
produces
forces
alters
resulting
activating
influencing
inspiring
instigating
mobilising
prompting
spurring
stimulating
propelling
rousing
motivating
energising
inducing
impelling
driving
inciting
emerging
occurring
aiding
supporting
producing
forcing
altering
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Using adverbs to create generalisations
One of the very basic persuasive techniques you can use is creating generalisations.
Generalisations persuade us by making the issue seem more (or less) frequent than
it really is - they can intensify the importance of the issue.
This means that we can argue:
People in the real world always have their mobile phones with them.
OR
Students simply don’t use their phones appropriately.
OR
Mobile phones have been an integral part of life since 1996.
While many people are familiar with adverbs that end in -ly, the table below has a list
of regular adverbs (the -ly sort) and irregular adverbs. All of them will help you to
create generalisations.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Write one sentence using either a regular or irregular adverb to make a persuasive
generalisation:
Regular Irregular
only
really
literally
certainly
simply
completely
entirely
absolutely
regularly
mostly
repeatedly
daily
hourly
constantly
lately
especially
very
too
almost
enough
so
quite
sort of
kind of
somewhat
always
everyday
everywhere
every time
wherever
once
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Writing about evidence
Evidence is a key part of any persuasive piece. However, in order to use evidence as
effectively as possible, there are two things we need to do in our persuasive writing:
make an audience trust the source of evidence and convince the audience the evidence
shows us something important. This section takes you through the grammar of how to
do these two things.
1. INTRODUCING EVIDENCE SO AN AUDIENCE TRUSTS ITS SOURCE:
A key part of any persuasive writing is to use examples to support your case. For instance,
let’s say we’re arguing that a school’s uniform should be changed. We might say:
Seventy eight per cent of families agree that our school uniform should be changed.
This sentence is okay, but it would be even better if it read like this:
A recent poll of our school’s community carried out by the school council found that 78%
of people support a change to school uniform.
The adjective recent tells the reader they should be convinced by this statistic because
it’s up-to-date. Also, the noun school council is persuasive because it informs us that the
survey was carried out by a trustworthy or reliable source.
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Now it’s your turn
Introduce a statistic on a topic you’re writing about by using a word or phrase from each
of the columns below:
adjectives nouns Verb
recent
comprehensive
nationwide
extensive
major
detailed
significant
survey
poll
study
carried out by
conducted by
released by
published by
run by
Sometimes you won’t be using statistics to make your case but the words of experts, as in
this example:
Stephanie Brace, who is the head of Australian Nature, Australia’s leading environmental
research institute, argues that cats do more damage to the environment than any other animal.
In this case, the noun head and the adjective leading tell us why we should trust the expert.
You can have a go writing about expert evidence by combining the words in the
columns below:
adjectives nouns Verb
leading
well regarded
renowned
biggest
international
best
expert/s
scientist/s
researcher/s
head/s of
leader/s of
argue
agree
urge
recommend
have found
advises
states
believes
have proven
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2. CONVINCING AN AUDIENCE THAT EVIDENCE SHOWS US
SOMETHING IMPORTANT
Evidence doesn’t always speak for itself. Often you will need to explain to your audience
exactly what it means.
For example, if we’re arguing that cats are better than dogs, the following would not be a
particularly effective use of evidence:
A recent survey showed that more Australians like cats than dogs.
Our task is not just to use evidence, but to persuade our audience as to exactly what
the evidence means. Here are two more persuasive uses of evidence:
A recent survey, in which 83% of Australians said they liked cats more than dogs, provides
clear proof that cats simply must be better because a majority of people can’t be wrong.
Or
A recent survey of Australians revealed that 83% of people prefer cats to dogs, clear
cut proof that establishes beyond all doubt that the noble cat is simply better than
the stinky dog.
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In the chart below is a range of parts of speech that you can use to establish the effect
of a piece of evidence.
It’s time for you to give it a go
Try writing sentences using one word from each column to explain the significance
of evidence:
verbs adverbs adjectives nouns
The evidence
points to…
points to
paints a picture of
shows
offers
confirms
provides
establishes
substantiates
suggests
demonstrates
makes clear
makes evident
leaves no doubt
that
The evidence
clearly points to…
clearly
plainly
manifestly
emphatically
absolutely
abundantly
beyond all doubt
This black and
white evidence
establishes that…
black and white
clear cut
certain
irrefutable
undeniable
plain
clear
overwhelming
conclusive
compelling
remarkable
profound
shocking
shameful
formidable
grim
stark
This evidence
provides compelling
proof that…
evidence
proof
facts
picture
testimony
confirmation
corroboration
substantiation
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Building your piece to
a persuasive conclusion
Linking phrases
Let’s be clear about something to begin with: ‘firstly’, ‘secondly’ and ‘thirdly’ are not
linking adverbs which will set your persuasive piece on fire. They’re stale words that
create a list, not a series of arguments that build upon each other. But, did you notice
how this section started? It used the phrase, ‘Let’s be clear about something to begin
with’. This phrase performs the same function as ‘firstly’ but does it much more
persuasively.
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It’s time for you to give it a go
Use one phrase from each of the sections in the table below to start the body paragraphs
in your persuasive piece:
Basic linking
adverb More persuasive phrases
Firstly Let’s start by looking at some facts.
Let’s be clear about the facts to begin with…
Let’s be clear about a few things to begin with…
Let’s be upfront about one thing in particular to start with…
Perhaps the most important thing to say to begin with is
this:…
Perhaps the most important thing to say to begin with is
not…or…but…
I’ll start by saying this:
Secondly, Thirdly Beyond these facts…
Of the upmost importance in all of this is…
On top of this
But it’s not just a matter of…it’s also…
Yet this issue is about more than…it’s also about…
However, we shouldn’t lose sight of…
What is more…
The last word in this argument is….
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Contrasting statements
A simple and important strategy in persuasive writing is to contrast one thing with
another, like this:
Homework shouldn’t be boring and pointless tasks, but should be activities which are
interesting and will genuinely help us.
Contrasting statements like the one above emphasise to the reader how an action or idea
is better than something else. This section takes you through three basic ways we can
create contrasting statements.
1. CONTRASTING POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE VERB PHRASES:
One basic way to create contrasting statements is by using a negative verb phrase such
as ‘should not’ in conjunction with a positive verb phrase such as ‘should be’. These verb
phrases have been highlighted in the example below:
Homework shouldn’t be boring and pointless tasks, but should be activities which are
interesting and will genuinely help us.
You should use the conjunction ‘but’ to link the two contrasting parts of your sentence.
Now it’s your turn
Use a negative and positive verb phrase from the chart below to create a contrasting
persuasive statement. Don’t forget to use ‘but’ to link them.
Negative verb phrase Positive verb phrase
is not
shouldn’t be
we can’t
we don’t need
we should not
we must not
it is
should be
we can
do need
we should
we must
we need
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Help and hurt verbs can also be used effectively to create contrasting statements.
You can use the help and hurt verb list on page 89 to create statements like this:
We need to stop dithering on this and start acting now.
2. USING COMPARATIVE ADJECTIVES:
Beyond using verbs and verb phrases to create contrasting statements, we can also use
simple contrasting adjectives to compare two things, as in the example below:
We need less talk and much more action.
Now it’s your turn
Have a go writing one persuasive contrasting statement, using the adjectives from the
table below.
Adjective 1 Adjective 2
less
far less
fewer
limited
more
much more
increased
maximum
3. INTRODUCING A CONTRAST WITH AN ADVERB:
You can also use an adverb such as rather to introduce a contrast:
Rather than spending more money on another pointless idea that won’t work, we should
spend our money on a plan that has proven science behind it.
Now it’s your turn
Have a go writing one persuasive contrasting statement, using an adverb from the first
column to introduce it.
Adverb phrase Verb phrase
Rather than…
Instead of…
we should
we must
it would be better if..
let’s…