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Slickk Magazine Improvements

       DEBBIE ONYEMELUKWE
Feedback
After submitting the first draft of my music magazine ‘Slickk’ I received some
feedback to make some changes and therefore end up with the best final product
possible.
I found this very helpful as I got the viewpoint from my peers and their opinion
which is extremely valuable as this is the target audience my magazine would
hopefully sell to.
The feedback I received was:

• Crop/Clone corners, fade edges to black
• ‘December 2010’ should line up to the last ‘K’ on ‘Slickk’ or should be made smaller and be
placed next to the issue number
• ‘2 hours in 2 pages’ should be a different font. Rephrase sentence.
• On the button, rub out a little bit of the splatter on model’s arm and fingers.
• On the button: Win tickets
                    to the
                    VMA’s
•Keep font the same for ‘Hip Hop is Dead’
Using the Clone Stamp tool
Feedback: Crop/Fade corners to take away the flash corners


                In order to improve upon
               this point, I used the Clone
                 Stamp tool to clone the
              edges of the flash unwanted
               effect. I selected the tool,
              then pressed the ‘Alt’ key to
                choose which part of the
              wall I wanted to clone in on
               top of the corners. As you
               can see from the image to
              the right, you can then start
               to colour over the desired
                           area.
Keeping the font the same
 Feedback: Don’t change font midway through a sentence


               In order to improve upon
               this point, I used the Text
                 tool and changed the
                 font of ‘dead’ back to
                   ‘Action of the Time
                       Upper Case’.
                 However, because this
                  font was somewhat
                  larger, I then had to
                resize the word in order
               for it to fit in the required
                         structure.
Improving the button
Feedback: Change the layout within the button

            In order to improve
         upon this action point,
          I increased the size of
               the button and
             positioned certain
          words on a new line. I
            also put the ‘VMA’s
           part on a new line as
         well as making it bigger
         and bolder. This was to
             add emphasis and
          draw the attention of
                 the reader.
Rubbing the splatter
Feedback: Reduce the amount of splatter marks


            In order to make this
            improvement, I used
              the rubber tool to
            erase the number of
              splatter marks on
            the model’s arm and
              all of it on his right
                       hand.
             I didn’t delete all of
               the marks on his
            right arm in order for
            the splatter effect to
               still come across.
Aligning the date
   Feedback: Align the date


     In order to align the
         date with the
   magazine’s masthead I
   went on ‘View’ and then
    chose the ‘Grid’ from
       the options that
      followed. The grid
     allowed me the see
    where things lined up
       and gave a more
   accurate alignment for
   the ‘0’ to be lined with
    the the ‘K’ on ‘Slickk’.
Explanatory Text
Feedback: Rephrase the explanatory text and choose a different font
                     I changed the font of the
                      explanatory text to ‘TW
                     Cen MT’ because it suited
                          better with the
                       accompanying font of
                    ‘Hand of Sean’ and so this
                       could also be my main
                      font used in my Table of
                              Contents.
                    I also changed the phrase
                        to something more
                    interesting. I added a pun
                       within the text as it’s a
                      typical media technique
                     used to entice customers
                    into buying the magazine.

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Slickk magazine improvements pdf

  • 1. Slickk Magazine Improvements DEBBIE ONYEMELUKWE
  • 2. Feedback After submitting the first draft of my music magazine ‘Slickk’ I received some feedback to make some changes and therefore end up with the best final product possible. I found this very helpful as I got the viewpoint from my peers and their opinion which is extremely valuable as this is the target audience my magazine would hopefully sell to. The feedback I received was: • Crop/Clone corners, fade edges to black • ‘December 2010’ should line up to the last ‘K’ on ‘Slickk’ or should be made smaller and be placed next to the issue number • ‘2 hours in 2 pages’ should be a different font. Rephrase sentence. • On the button, rub out a little bit of the splatter on model’s arm and fingers. • On the button: Win tickets to the VMA’s •Keep font the same for ‘Hip Hop is Dead’
  • 3. Using the Clone Stamp tool Feedback: Crop/Fade corners to take away the flash corners In order to improve upon this point, I used the Clone Stamp tool to clone the edges of the flash unwanted effect. I selected the tool, then pressed the ‘Alt’ key to choose which part of the wall I wanted to clone in on top of the corners. As you can see from the image to the right, you can then start to colour over the desired area.
  • 4. Keeping the font the same Feedback: Don’t change font midway through a sentence In order to improve upon this point, I used the Text tool and changed the font of ‘dead’ back to ‘Action of the Time Upper Case’. However, because this font was somewhat larger, I then had to resize the word in order for it to fit in the required structure.
  • 5. Improving the button Feedback: Change the layout within the button In order to improve upon this action point, I increased the size of the button and positioned certain words on a new line. I also put the ‘VMA’s part on a new line as well as making it bigger and bolder. This was to add emphasis and draw the attention of the reader.
  • 6. Rubbing the splatter Feedback: Reduce the amount of splatter marks In order to make this improvement, I used the rubber tool to erase the number of splatter marks on the model’s arm and all of it on his right hand. I didn’t delete all of the marks on his right arm in order for the splatter effect to still come across.
  • 7. Aligning the date Feedback: Align the date In order to align the date with the magazine’s masthead I went on ‘View’ and then chose the ‘Grid’ from the options that followed. The grid allowed me the see where things lined up and gave a more accurate alignment for the ‘0’ to be lined with the the ‘K’ on ‘Slickk’.
  • 8. Explanatory Text Feedback: Rephrase the explanatory text and choose a different font I changed the font of the explanatory text to ‘TW Cen MT’ because it suited better with the accompanying font of ‘Hand of Sean’ and so this could also be my main font used in my Table of Contents. I also changed the phrase to something more interesting. I added a pun within the text as it’s a typical media technique used to entice customers into buying the magazine.