The rough cut feedback for a film opening suggested shortening clips, adding titles between cross cuts to provide context, showing the male character more, adding sound/music, moving titles to be TV safe, using pseudonyms instead of real names, and placing each title on its own page.

1. ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

2. Our rough cut feedback, gave us an indication on what
changes we need to make to our final film opening. Here are
some of the constructive criticisms:
• The opening was too long, therefore we were told to cut some clips as they were
not all necessary.
• In between the cross cutting we need to add titles otherwise it will look like its
jumping from one scene to another and it will not make sense.
• We needed to cross cut more to the male character as enough of him was
not shown.
• We didn't add any sound/music as there was not enough time. So we were told to
make our sound and add it in quickly.
• The titles were on the corners of the frames so we had to move them to make them
TV safe.
• We used our real names in the titles and were told it is better not to.
• Also there were some titles on the same page but were told to add different pages
for each.