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Revision
Nothing’s ever perfect…
What is revision?
Re-seeing
Re-shaping
The Writing Process
– Invention
– Drafting
– Revision
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Revision’s Two Parts
Higher Order
(Content)
Lower Order
(Editing)
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Higher Order Revising
 Thesis
 Evidence
 Development
 Arrangement
Know your audience AND the “so what?”
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Techniques
Peer Review
Self as Audience
Read Aloud
Toulmin Analysis
Take a Break
Lower Order Revising
 Transitions
 Spelling (beware the checker)
 Word Choice
 Correct Punctuation!
 Subject-Verb Agreement
Techniques
 Peer Review
 Read Aloud
 Backwards paper reading
use your resources
?
Group Activity
In groups of two, revise a short
paragraph.
What and how did we revise?
Assignment
For next class complete Toulmin Analysis
of your drafts.
Be prepared to discuss next time.

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Lesson Plan: Revise revise revise

Editor's Notes

  1. This is where you make sure the cake is in good shape.
  2. Intentional misuse of exclamation point. Editing is like placing on the icing-super tasty and important, but needs to come last.
  3. Any questions?