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Report of pitch
1. What wentwell in the pitch
I presentedmypitchina professional mannerbyprovidingabookletwhichcoincidedwith
the contentinmy powerpoint.Additionally,Imaintainedeyecontactandspoke clearly,
withconfidence,whichenabledme topromote myideaswell tothe panel. Ialsoexplained
my targetaudience well withgooduse of theory,coveredall areaswell inmysecondidea,
and mymusic sample withinmyfirstideawas“great”.Moreover,Iincludedall of the
necessaryaspectsrequiredwithinmypowerpointpresentations,excludingmysecond
powerpointwhichdidn’tincludethe sample of audioforthe purpose of time management,
whichenabledme togetthe grade of a Merit.
2. What didn’tgo well in the pitch
Regardingwhatdidn’tgoso well withinmypitch,the title of ‘Plaything’formyfirstideawas
questionable asthe panel wasnotsure if it presentedwhatthe storywasabout.
Additionally,withinbothof mypowerpointsIdidnot include the ‘shortof the week’which
was the desiredareaforthe marketplace of myfilm, ratherthandisplayingitonthe
YouTube platform.
3. What didthe panel say (likes/dislikes)
The panel likedthe conceptof the dogsymbol withinmyfirstidea‘Plaything’aswell asthe
areas of peerpressure andthe side effectsof drugs,inmysecondidea‘Side Effects’,which
was “coveredwell.”Furthermore,the panel likedthe use of bookletstocorrespondbothof
my powerpointsaswell asthe use of eye contactand confidence whichmade myspeech
clearand easyto understand.
However,the panel wasunsure of the use of ‘Plaything’forthe title of myfirstideaasthey
were unsure if thisrepresentedwhatthe ideawasfocusingon.Additionally,bynotincluding
the ‘Shortof the week’withinmypresentations,mymarketplace segment(forbothideas)
was limited.
4. How will you take thison board for future pitches
Withinfuture pitchesIwill rememberthe importance of eye contactinorderto engage the
panel as well asbyspeakingclearlytomake the overall presentationeasytounderstand.
Also,Iwill make sure thatI have includedeverythingnecessary,whichIdidnotdo withthe
marketplace,inordertomake my overall pitchflawless.
5. Whichidea are you goingto take forward to developintoyour short film
The ideaI will be developingintoashort filmwill be myfirstidea,‘Plaything’asIhave
produceditin more detail andhave more of a passionforproducingafilmaboutanimal
abuse ratherthan the theme of drug abuse withinmysecondidea.However,Iwill
reconsiderwhethermytitle isright forthe storyand if I needto change itin orderfor the
title torepresentthe overall theme better.

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Report of pitch

  • 1. Report of pitch 1. What wentwell in the pitch I presentedmypitchina professional mannerbyprovidingabookletwhichcoincidedwith the contentinmy powerpoint.Additionally,Imaintainedeyecontactandspoke clearly, withconfidence,whichenabledme topromote myideaswell tothe panel. Ialsoexplained my targetaudience well withgooduse of theory,coveredall areaswell inmysecondidea, and mymusic sample withinmyfirstideawas“great”.Moreover,Iincludedall of the necessaryaspectsrequiredwithinmypowerpointpresentations,excludingmysecond powerpointwhichdidn’tincludethe sample of audioforthe purpose of time management, whichenabledme togetthe grade of a Merit. 2. What didn’tgo well in the pitch Regardingwhatdidn’tgoso well withinmypitch,the title of ‘Plaything’formyfirstideawas questionable asthe panel wasnotsure if it presentedwhatthe storywasabout. Additionally,withinbothof mypowerpointsIdidnot include the ‘shortof the week’which was the desiredareaforthe marketplace of myfilm, ratherthandisplayingitonthe YouTube platform. 3. What didthe panel say (likes/dislikes) The panel likedthe conceptof the dogsymbol withinmyfirstidea‘Plaything’aswell asthe areas of peerpressure andthe side effectsof drugs,inmysecondidea‘Side Effects’,which was “coveredwell.”Furthermore,the panel likedthe use of bookletstocorrespondbothof my powerpointsaswell asthe use of eye contactand confidence whichmade myspeech clearand easyto understand. However,the panel wasunsure of the use of ‘Plaything’forthe title of myfirstideaasthey were unsure if thisrepresentedwhatthe ideawasfocusingon.Additionally,bynotincluding the ‘Shortof the week’withinmypresentations,mymarketplace segment(forbothideas) was limited. 4. How will you take thison board for future pitches Withinfuture pitchesIwill rememberthe importance of eye contactinorderto engage the panel as well asbyspeakingclearlytomake the overall presentationeasytounderstand. Also,Iwill make sure thatI have includedeverythingnecessary,whichIdidnotdo withthe marketplace,inordertomake my overall pitchflawless. 5. Whichidea are you goingto take forward to developintoyour short film The ideaI will be developingintoashort filmwill be myfirstidea,‘Plaything’asIhave produceditin more detail andhave more of a passionforproducingafilmaboutanimal abuse ratherthan the theme of drug abuse withinmysecondidea.However,Iwill reconsiderwhethermytitle isright forthe storyand if I needto change itin orderfor the title torepresentthe overall theme better.