Group 7

1. Targetsfor final draft
 Reduce textmessage conversation
 Addmore of a varietyof shotsand lesspanning+ zooming
 Include more close-upshotsof the deadbodyforeffect
 Improve overall acting(addmore emotion)
Editing/sound:
 Make sure to cleanup errors(jumpcuts,continuityandoverall synchronization of the clips
and the score)
 Varytempo/pace throughoutthe OTS
 More Foley effectsare needed
 Include variousincidental musicscore
 Decide andmaintaina volume throughoutthe OTS
Mes enScene:
 The antagonistmustbe distinctlyseenasa threatingcharacter (More aggression,holds
weapon)
 To declutterthe settingfromunnecessaryitems(Bedroomandremove glassesfromKyle)