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ENGLISH COMPOSITION


                    EDITING FOR EFFECTIVENESS




                        Helver Álvarez Pertuz




                      UNIVERSIDAD DE CÓRDOBA
             FACULTAD DE EDUCACIÓN Y CIENCIAS HUMANAS
LICENCIEATURA EN EDUCACIÓN BÁSICA CON ENFASIS HUMANIDADES – INGLÉS
                             MONTERÍA
                               2012
EDITING FOR EFFECTIVENESS

                           OPENINGS AND CONCLUSIONS

ENGAGING OPENINGS                              SATISFYING CONCLUSIONS

General - to - specific pattern               Rethorical question

Striking assertion                            Summary

Anecdote                                      Call to action

Interesting detail, statistic, or quotation   Speculation

Provocative question

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Openings andconclusions

  • 1. ENGLISH COMPOSITION EDITING FOR EFFECTIVENESS Helver Álvarez Pertuz UNIVERSIDAD DE CÓRDOBA FACULTAD DE EDUCACIÓN Y CIENCIAS HUMANAS LICENCIEATURA EN EDUCACIÓN BÁSICA CON ENFASIS HUMANIDADES – INGLÉS MONTERÍA 2012
  • 2. EDITING FOR EFFECTIVENESS OPENINGS AND CONCLUSIONS ENGAGING OPENINGS SATISFYING CONCLUSIONS General - to - specific pattern Rethorical question Striking assertion Summary Anecdote Call to action Interesting detail, statistic, or quotation Speculation Provocative question