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NED’s young talents build
mega solar farm

Nabduan
Rossukon

D.
P.

5013144 (476)
5217450
Module 1
PAIBOC
- Analyze the article
- Analyze business communication
problems
- Acronym of questions
P : Purpose

A : Audience

- To promote Solar
Farm
- To convince readers to
use Solar Energy
- To inform the
important of
workforce diversity

-

General Public
Energy Consumers
Energy Supplier
Energy Producers
Environmental
Organization
- Thai Government
- Thailand
I : Information B : Benefit
- The Solar Farm project - Energy Consumers
- Workforce diversity
- Energy Supplier
- New innovation
- Environmental
Organization
- Thai Government
- Thailand
O : Objection C : Context
-

Fossil fuel producers
Fossil fuel retailers
Local people
Consumer goods

Good Economy
- Complete project
sooner
- Cheaper energy cost
- More loan budget
Economic Slowdown
- Complete slower
- Expensive energy cost
- Less loan budget
Module 2
Adapting Your Message to Your
Audience

knowledge
- Require knowledge to run

Empathy

- Save the world (global
the business and operation warming)
- People must participate
- People in Thailand will
and share information or
get safer and cleaner
knowledge
energy
- People outside
- Can help to save the
organization also get some energy to the next
knowledge from this project
generation
Demographic Value and
Age :
belief
- the company is run by
local staff under the age
of 35
- Every Thai citizens will
get the benefit in all age ,
income, education and
gender

- Different people has
different value and belief.
- Some might agree with
this project but some are
not so the company
should do the research in
order to understand there
thinking
Module 3
Communicating Across Cultures

knowledge

knowledge

- Require knowledge to

- Require knowledge to

run the business and
operation
- People must participate
and share information or
knowledge
- People outside
organization also get
some knowledge from
this project

run the business and
operation
- People must participate
and share information or
knowledge
- People outside
organization also get
some knowledge from
this project
Gender

Social class

- Male might be
interested about this
project more than female

-High class people will
have more chance to
know and try this
project because of
high education

Race

-Developing country has
lower chance to learn
- Low class might
about this project
ignore it because it is
-Thailand has lower
resource if compare
with developed country

not directly related to
their life
Regional

-Urban area can
receive this news
easier than people
who live in rural
area

Age

-Adult and elder will
interested in this
project more children
and teenager

Physical ability

- Inability people has less opportunity
to know about this message for
example they cant read and
understand
Module 4
Planning, Writing, Revising
Planning
- analyzing the problem
- defining purposes
- analyzing audience
NED’s solar farm plan
- to solve the problem of
fuel energy shortage

Writing
- formal draft
- List of options
- Putting word on paper
NED’s solar farm plan
- to build the conscious
of saving the world
from pollution
- to finding the new
choices of energy
providing
Planning, Writing, Revising
Revising

Revision

- evaluating work
- revise
- adding, substitute
- editing
- deleting, rearrange
- proofreading
NED’s solar farm plan
- Trying to understand
the need of local people
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Ned

  • 1. NED’s young talents build mega solar farm Nabduan Rossukon D. P. 5013144 (476) 5217450
  • 3. PAIBOC - Analyze the article - Analyze business communication problems - Acronym of questions
  • 4. P : Purpose A : Audience - To promote Solar Farm - To convince readers to use Solar Energy - To inform the important of workforce diversity - General Public Energy Consumers Energy Supplier Energy Producers Environmental Organization - Thai Government - Thailand
  • 5. I : Information B : Benefit - The Solar Farm project - Energy Consumers - Workforce diversity - Energy Supplier - New innovation - Environmental Organization - Thai Government - Thailand
  • 6. O : Objection C : Context - Fossil fuel producers Fossil fuel retailers Local people Consumer goods Good Economy - Complete project sooner - Cheaper energy cost - More loan budget Economic Slowdown - Complete slower - Expensive energy cost - Less loan budget
  • 8. Adapting Your Message to Your Audience knowledge - Require knowledge to run Empathy - Save the world (global the business and operation warming) - People must participate - People in Thailand will and share information or get safer and cleaner knowledge energy - People outside - Can help to save the organization also get some energy to the next knowledge from this project generation
  • 9. Demographic Value and Age : belief - the company is run by local staff under the age of 35 - Every Thai citizens will get the benefit in all age , income, education and gender - Different people has different value and belief. - Some might agree with this project but some are not so the company should do the research in order to understand there thinking
  • 11. Communicating Across Cultures knowledge knowledge - Require knowledge to - Require knowledge to run the business and operation - People must participate and share information or knowledge - People outside organization also get some knowledge from this project run the business and operation - People must participate and share information or knowledge - People outside organization also get some knowledge from this project
  • 12. Gender Social class - Male might be interested about this project more than female -High class people will have more chance to know and try this project because of high education Race -Developing country has lower chance to learn - Low class might about this project ignore it because it is -Thailand has lower resource if compare with developed country not directly related to their life
  • 13. Regional -Urban area can receive this news easier than people who live in rural area Age -Adult and elder will interested in this project more children and teenager Physical ability - Inability people has less opportunity to know about this message for example they cant read and understand
  • 15. Planning, Writing, Revising Planning - analyzing the problem - defining purposes - analyzing audience NED’s solar farm plan - to solve the problem of fuel energy shortage Writing - formal draft - List of options - Putting word on paper NED’s solar farm plan - to build the conscious of saving the world from pollution - to finding the new choices of energy providing
  • 16. Planning, Writing, Revising Revising Revision - evaluating work - revise - adding, substitute - editing - deleting, rearrange - proofreading NED’s solar farm plan - Trying to understand the need of local people