Mitchell Turner created a document detailing improvements made to a final product. The main image on the initial page was plain so it was enhanced. The contents page also needed more visuals to engage audiences. For the front cover, extra visual elements like a puff and banners were added to fill white space and match the school color scheme. The contents page then had more images added and its color scheme was altered to coordinate with the school style.

1. Improving the final product
By Mitchell Turner

2. My Initial intentions
• The main image in the centre of the page was
too plain and needed lots of improving in
order to reach a higher standard.
• The contents page was very bland and needed
more images in order to obtain the audiences
attention.

3. Improvements: Front Cover
• A puff was added to the front cover in order to
fill up some of the white space along with
moving the image up as the audience is only
interested in the head down to the chest.
• The colour of the banner on the left hand side
has changed from black to blue in order to
coincide with the house style of Trinity school
and another banner was added to the bottom
of the page.

4. Improvements: Front Cover
Puff added to
fill in white
space
The change of colour to fit in
with the Trinity colour scheme
Banner added to
the bottom of
the page

5. Improvements: Contents
• The contents page was changed a lot from the
drafts versions and initial versions of my
product.
• It changed from two images into four, this is so
the audience have more images to engage
with.
• The colour scheme also changed in order to
match the Trinity colour scheme.

6. Improvements: Contents
Amount of
images
being
changed
from two
to four
Background
colour
added to
contents
page
Colour scheme changed in order to
match the Trinity house style