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Each piece of relevant evaluation is worth one mark.
Start by saying Overall…
• State a historian’s view about the factor’s importance
• How important is the specific factor? Most/least? Why?
• Compare each factor to your main factor (Line of argument)
• Does your factor show some success but include overall
problems or limitations? (Line of argument)
** Whatever your evaluation, you must include new evidence
(reasons) for your decision **
Evaluation covers the Overall points
Factor State the factor you will discuss
Info Describe at least 2/3 relevant facts
Debate Explain (give an argument) why this
issue is important
Explain (give an argument) why this
issue is not the most important
Mention historiography (historians’ views)
Overall… Say how important the factor is when
compared to other factors
e.g. most important, least important. Build a line of argument
2 mark Evaluation – one factor
Overall the Suffragettes were the least important
reason that women won the vote. This is because,
unlike other factors, women’s extreme campaigns
actually damaged the campaign because the
government could not be seen to give in to terrorism
as they did not want to encourage further violence in
Ireland, meaning they would ignore the Suffragettes’
demands. (Evaluation)
4 mark Evaluation – two factors
Overall the Suffragettes had an important role but
were less important than World War One. This is
because the Suffragettes’ actions at the start of war
in suspending their campaign to support the war
effort undermined suggestions that they were
undeserving of the vote, helping support their cause
and showing that the war’s influence was of most
importance. (Evaluation)
The first issue to be discussed is the role of the Suffragettes. They
were a radical campaign group that often engaged in violent protests,
such as arson, vandalism and even attacking politicians. Their most
famous action was in 1913 when Emily Davison died after running out
in front of the King’s horse at the Derby horse race. The Suffragettes
played an important role in women gaining the vote because the
publicity their actions created helped put pressure on the government
to consider their demands. However it can be argued that they often
undermined the campaign because the violence they used allowed
the government to characterise women as irrational and so did not
deserve the right to vote.
Overall the Suffragettes had an important role but were less
important than World War One. This is because the Suffragettes’
actions at the start of war in suspending their campaign to support
the war effort undermined suggestions that they were undeserving
of the vote, helping support their cause. (One mark for evaluation)

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  • 2. Your Evaluation is worth up to 4 marks. Each piece of relevant evaluation is worth one mark. Start by saying Overall… • State a historian’s view about the factor’s importance • How important is the specific factor? Most/least? Why? • Compare each factor to your main factor (Line of argument) • Does your factor show some success but include overall problems or limitations? (Line of argument) ** Whatever your evaluation, you must include new evidence (reasons) for your decision **
  • 3. Evaluation covers the Overall points Factor State the factor you will discuss Info Describe at least 2/3 relevant facts Debate Explain (give an argument) why this issue is important Explain (give an argument) why this issue is not the most important Mention historiography (historians’ views) Overall… Say how important the factor is when compared to other factors e.g. most important, least important. Build a line of argument
  • 4. 2 mark Evaluation – one factor Overall the Suffragettes were the least important reason that women won the vote. This is because, unlike other factors, women’s extreme campaigns actually damaged the campaign because the government could not be seen to give in to terrorism as they did not want to encourage further violence in Ireland, meaning they would ignore the Suffragettes’ demands. (Evaluation)
  • 5. 4 mark Evaluation – two factors Overall the Suffragettes had an important role but were less important than World War One. This is because the Suffragettes’ actions at the start of war in suspending their campaign to support the war effort undermined suggestions that they were undeserving of the vote, helping support their cause and showing that the war’s influence was of most importance. (Evaluation)
  • 6. The first issue to be discussed is the role of the Suffragettes. They were a radical campaign group that often engaged in violent protests, such as arson, vandalism and even attacking politicians. Their most famous action was in 1913 when Emily Davison died after running out in front of the King’s horse at the Derby horse race. The Suffragettes played an important role in women gaining the vote because the publicity their actions created helped put pressure on the government to consider their demands. However it can be argued that they often undermined the campaign because the violence they used allowed the government to characterise women as irrational and so did not deserve the right to vote. Overall the Suffragettes had an important role but were less important than World War One. This is because the Suffragettes’ actions at the start of war in suspending their campaign to support the war effort undermined suggestions that they were undeserving of the vote, helping support their cause. (One mark for evaluation)