This memorandum analyzes the writing skills demonstrated in a research paper about Coumadin that Reagan Haney wrote for a chemistry class. The analysis finds that the paper could be more concise by removing unnecessary words and merging sentences. While there is little use of dead phrases, more specific details may have helped non-scientific audiences understand. The paper also uses some scientific jargon without defining terms for general readers. Some sentences effectively use strong nouns, verbs, and active voice, but others could be improved by emphasizing risks of Coumadin instead of just stating them. The conclusion recognizes the need for Reagan to write with clearer style and allow more time for writing in the future.