Mind the GAP                              SKILL: RETRIEVE (1a)
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been                                                                 B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                          show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                           question (the task/skill)
                                                                                          U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                          G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
  You need to mind the GAP for every
            text you read!


                                                                                                              YOU ALSO HAVE
                                                                                                              15 MINS
                                                                                                              READING TIME




                                                                             4 mins
                                                                           reading &         4 MARKS = 6 MINUTES
                                                                          underlining
                                                                                                WRITING TIME




               You will always be asked to list 4 things about what you learn from the article.

               1) Use your own words.


               2) Write in clear sentences. For example:   Rachel Latham is a swimmer – clear

                                                           Swimmer – not clear

               What the examiner said about Question 1a in January:

               Students need to write in clear sentences.

               Lengthy responses supported by quotations are not required for 1a – the
               space supplied on the examination paper for this question is an indication of
               the length of response required.
Mind the GAP                                    SKILL: INFER (1b)
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been
       written?                                                                               B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                              show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
                                                                                              question (the task/skill)
                                                                                              U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
  You need to mind the GAP for every                                                          G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
            text you read!




                                                                                                      4 MARKS = 6 MINUTES
                                                                                                         WRITING TIME




             3 paragraphs each focusing on a different point made up of the following:

             POINT = Focus closely on the key words from the question and use these when making your
             point.

             QUOTE = Relevant and concise quotation which supports your point. YOU MUST USE
             QUOTATION MARKS!

             INFER = What you can read between the lines about your chosen quotation (link it back to
             the question).

             For example:
                                                                                                                        QUOTE
                                       Rachel feels very seriously about her swimming career and
                 POINT
                                       feels that it ‘comes above everything else’. This means that
                                       she is very passionate and dedicated towards her
                                       swimming career and may have had to sacrifice other
                                       aspects of her life to be successful.
                 INFER


             What the examiner said about Question 1b in January:

             You must use quotations.

             You must focus closely on the key words of the question.

             Do not analyse any language techniques on this question as this is not the skill you
             are being asked to demonstrate!
Mind the GAP                                  SKILL: RETRIEVE AND
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been                              INFER (Q2)
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been                                                                 B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                          show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                           question (the task/skill)
                                                                                          U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                          G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
  You need to mind the GAP for every
            text you read!




                                                                                                 8 MARKS = 12 MINUTES
                                                                                                    WRITING TIME


                                                                                                                        4 mins
                                                                                                                      reading &
                                                                                                                      annotating




                      4 paragraphs each focusing on a different point made up of the following:

                      POINT = Focus closely on the key words from the question and use these when
                      making your point.

                      QUOTE = Relevant and concise quotation which supports your point. YOU MUST
                      USE QUOTATION MARKS!

                      INFER = What you can read between the lines about your chosen quotation (link
                      it back to the question).

                      Phrases for inference:
                      This means that….
                      This suggests that…
                      The use of the word ‘….’ implies that…
                      This indicates that…

                                   REMEMBER TO LEAVE A LINE BETWEEN EACH PARAGRAPH!


                      What the examiner said about Q2 in the January exam:

                      Problems occurred when candidates copied out the text, paraphrased
                      the text and ignored the key word in the question. Problems were
                      caused when candidates failed to mention the key word in their
                      answer at all.
Mind the GAP                                    SKILL: LANGUAGE
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been                            ANALYSIS (Q3)
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been                                                                   B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                            show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                             question (the task/skill)
                                                                                            U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                            G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
   You need to mind the GAP for every
             text you read!




                                                                                                              4 mins
                                                                                                            reading &
THESE BULLET                                                                                                annotating
POINTS ALWAYS
REMIND YOU
ABOUT THE
PURPOSE OF THE
TEXT

                                                                                                     12 MARKS = 18
                                                                                                    MINUTES WRITING

               You need to pick out 6 language features in total. This means 6 paragraphs!

               When thinking about the techniques used in the text, you should always focus on the
               following places in the text:

                                        The first sentence used in the text (1 feature)
                                        The final sentence used in the text (1 feature)
                                        Everything else in between (4 features)

                 Each of your paragraphs need to be made up of the following:

                 POINT: The writer uses a ………… (name the language feature) at the start/middle/end of the
                 ………. (source type: article, website etc) to help the text to .......... (name one of the purposes
                 from the question) when he says........
                 QUOTE: ‘example of the technique used’
                 ANALYSIS: They use …….…….(language feature) because they want the reader to
                 feel………………………........... They use this to suggest/imply/convey ………………………………………………
                 and this links to the purpose of the text which is to inform/explain/describe/persuade/
                 argue. (If possible, make links to the rest of the text here).


                           REMEMBER TO LEAVE A LINE BETWEEN EACH PARAGRAPH!

                 You need to use sequential connectives to link your paragraphs together: Firstly, secondly, in
                 addition, lastly, finally…etc.

                 What the examiner has said about Q3 in January:

                 Candidates MUST focus on language features. Those who don’t will receive very
                 little marks for their answer.
Mind the GAP                            SKILL: PRESENTATIONAL
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been
           written for?                      FEATURES COMPARISON
Purpose – why has it been                            (Q4)                               B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                        show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                         question (the task/skill)
                                                                                        U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                        G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
  You need to mind the GAP for every
            text you read!




                                                                                                 12 MARKS = 16
                                                                         4 mins
                                                                        planning                MINUTES WRITING
                                                                                                     TIME




              You need to pick out 3 - 4 presentational features to compare in total.
              Each comparative paragraph should be made up of the following:
              1) Point of comparison (this needs to be a presentational feature)
                                                             st
              2) Example of presentational feature from 1 text – why has it been used? What is the
                 effect (multiple interpretations + effect on the reader + effectiveness)
                                                        nd
              3) Example of presentational feature for 2 text – why has it been used? What is the
                 effect (multiple interpretations + effect on the reader + effectiveness


              What the examiner said about Q4 in January:

              Do not use the phrased ‘it drags you in’ or ‘it stands out’ as this will only
              get you a Band 1 mark.

              Candidates are advised to write a lot about a little.
Mind the GAP                                 Q5: INFORM/EXPLAIN OR
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been                               DESCRIBE
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been                                                                           B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                                    show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                                     question (the task/skill)
                                                                                                    U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                                    G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
  You need to mind the GAP for every
            text you read!




                  Rule 1: PLAN                         Rule 2: CRAFT                           Rule 3: CHECK
                                  Techniques:
                                                                       Craft your
                                  •                                      writing
                                  •
                                  •
                                                                       like I craft
                                  •                                     my food
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •
                                  •

   Punctuation:    . , : ; - ( ) “ ” ... ! ?




                  5 MINS PLANNING                      15 MINS CRAFTING                        5 MINS CHECKING




                                      YOU MUST KNOW THE DIFFERENT WRITING STYLES TECHNIQUES!




                        You need to aim for 3-4 paragraphs for Q5 plus an introduction
                                               and conclusion.
                      Don’t forget that markers are paid by the paper and they won’t spend hours on yours.
                      They will decide within the first few lines what kind of grade they could be looking at...
                      eg. you want them to be thinking... ‘this is good... they could be an A*.... and then if it’s
                      not sustained... it’s an A... not…’this is dull’...!

                           YOU MUST CRAFT YOUR WRITING AND MAKE EVERY WORD
                                               COUNT!
Mind the GAP                                      Q6: PERSUADE OR
Genre – what type of text is it?
Audience – who has it been                                 ARGUE
           written for?
Purpose – why has it been                                                                       B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to
                                                                                                show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN
       written?                                                                                 question (the task/skill)
                                                                                                U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about)
                                                                                                G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST
  You need to mind the GAP for every
            text you read!




                         Rule 1: PLAN                      Rule 2: CRAFT                       Rule 3: CHECK
                                         Techniques:
                                                                           Craft your
                                         •                                   writing
                                         •
                                         •
                                                                           like I craft
                                         •                                  my food
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •
                                         •

          Punctuation:    . , : ; - ( ) “ ” ... ! ?




                 5 MINS PLANNING                          25 MINS CRAFTING                     5 MINS CHECKING




                                YOU MUST KNOW THE DIFFERENT WRITING STYLES TECHNIQUES!




                     You need to aim for 4-5 paragraphs for Q6 plus an introduction
                                            and conclusion.
                    Don’t forget that markers are paid by the paper and they won’t spend hours on yours.
                    They will decide within the first few lines what kind of grade they could be looking at...
                    eg. you want them to be thinking... ‘this is good... they could be an A*.... and then if it’s
                    not sustained... it’s an A... not…’this is dull’...!

                          YOU MUST CRAFT YOUR WRITING AND MAKE EVERY WORD
                                              COUNT!

Foundation question breakdown guide

  • 1.
    Mind the GAP SKILL: RETRIEVE (1a) Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been written for? Purpose – why has it been B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! YOU ALSO HAVE 15 MINS READING TIME 4 mins reading & 4 MARKS = 6 MINUTES underlining WRITING TIME You will always be asked to list 4 things about what you learn from the article. 1) Use your own words. 2) Write in clear sentences. For example: Rachel Latham is a swimmer – clear Swimmer – not clear What the examiner said about Question 1a in January: Students need to write in clear sentences. Lengthy responses supported by quotations are not required for 1a – the space supplied on the examination paper for this question is an indication of the length of response required.
  • 2.
    Mind the GAP SKILL: INFER (1b) Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been written for? Purpose – why has it been written? B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) You need to mind the GAP for every G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST text you read! 4 MARKS = 6 MINUTES WRITING TIME 3 paragraphs each focusing on a different point made up of the following: POINT = Focus closely on the key words from the question and use these when making your point. QUOTE = Relevant and concise quotation which supports your point. YOU MUST USE QUOTATION MARKS! INFER = What you can read between the lines about your chosen quotation (link it back to the question). For example: QUOTE Rachel feels very seriously about her swimming career and POINT feels that it ‘comes above everything else’. This means that she is very passionate and dedicated towards her swimming career and may have had to sacrifice other aspects of her life to be successful. INFER What the examiner said about Question 1b in January: You must use quotations. You must focus closely on the key words of the question. Do not analyse any language techniques on this question as this is not the skill you are being asked to demonstrate!
  • 3.
    Mind the GAP SKILL: RETRIEVE AND Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been INFER (Q2) written for? Purpose – why has it been B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! 8 MARKS = 12 MINUTES WRITING TIME 4 mins reading & annotating 4 paragraphs each focusing on a different point made up of the following: POINT = Focus closely on the key words from the question and use these when making your point. QUOTE = Relevant and concise quotation which supports your point. YOU MUST USE QUOTATION MARKS! INFER = What you can read between the lines about your chosen quotation (link it back to the question). Phrases for inference: This means that…. This suggests that… The use of the word ‘….’ implies that… This indicates that… REMEMBER TO LEAVE A LINE BETWEEN EACH PARAGRAPH! What the examiner said about Q2 in the January exam: Problems occurred when candidates copied out the text, paraphrased the text and ignored the key word in the question. Problems were caused when candidates failed to mention the key word in their answer at all.
  • 4.
    Mind the GAP SKILL: LANGUAGE Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been ANALYSIS (Q3) written for? Purpose – why has it been B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! 4 mins reading & THESE BULLET annotating POINTS ALWAYS REMIND YOU ABOUT THE PURPOSE OF THE TEXT 12 MARKS = 18 MINUTES WRITING You need to pick out 6 language features in total. This means 6 paragraphs! When thinking about the techniques used in the text, you should always focus on the following places in the text: The first sentence used in the text (1 feature) The final sentence used in the text (1 feature) Everything else in between (4 features) Each of your paragraphs need to be made up of the following: POINT: The writer uses a ………… (name the language feature) at the start/middle/end of the ………. (source type: article, website etc) to help the text to .......... (name one of the purposes from the question) when he says........ QUOTE: ‘example of the technique used’ ANALYSIS: They use …….…….(language feature) because they want the reader to feel………………………........... They use this to suggest/imply/convey ……………………………………………… and this links to the purpose of the text which is to inform/explain/describe/persuade/ argue. (If possible, make links to the rest of the text here). REMEMBER TO LEAVE A LINE BETWEEN EACH PARAGRAPH! You need to use sequential connectives to link your paragraphs together: Firstly, secondly, in addition, lastly, finally…etc. What the examiner has said about Q3 in January: Candidates MUST focus on language features. Those who don’t will receive very little marks for their answer.
  • 5.
    Mind the GAP SKILL: PRESENTATIONAL Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been written for? FEATURES COMPARISON Purpose – why has it been (Q4) B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! 12 MARKS = 16 4 mins planning MINUTES WRITING TIME You need to pick out 3 - 4 presentational features to compare in total. Each comparative paragraph should be made up of the following: 1) Point of comparison (this needs to be a presentational feature) st 2) Example of presentational feature from 1 text – why has it been used? What is the effect (multiple interpretations + effect on the reader + effectiveness) nd 3) Example of presentational feature for 2 text – why has it been used? What is the effect (multiple interpretations + effect on the reader + effectiveness What the examiner said about Q4 in January: Do not use the phrased ‘it drags you in’ or ‘it stands out’ as this will only get you a Band 1 mark. Candidates are advised to write a lot about a little.
  • 6.
    Mind the GAP Q5: INFORM/EXPLAIN OR Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been DESCRIBE written for? Purpose – why has it been B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! Rule 1: PLAN Rule 2: CRAFT Rule 3: CHECK Techniques: Craft your • writing • • like I craft • my food • • • • • • • • Punctuation: . , : ; - ( ) “ ” ... ! ? 5 MINS PLANNING 15 MINS CRAFTING 5 MINS CHECKING YOU MUST KNOW THE DIFFERENT WRITING STYLES TECHNIQUES! You need to aim for 3-4 paragraphs for Q5 plus an introduction and conclusion. Don’t forget that markers are paid by the paper and they won’t spend hours on yours. They will decide within the first few lines what kind of grade they could be looking at... eg. you want them to be thinking... ‘this is good... they could be an A*.... and then if it’s not sustained... it’s an A... not…’this is dull’...! YOU MUST CRAFT YOUR WRITING AND MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!
  • 7.
    Mind the GAP Q6: PERSUADE OR Genre – what type of text is it? Audience – who has it been ARGUE written for? Purpose – why has it been B – Box the words that tell you what the examiners want you to show them eg. A WHAT question is different to an HOW or EXPLAIN written? question (the task/skill) U – Underline all the key words (what the task is about) G – Glance/read it 3 times AT LEAST You need to mind the GAP for every text you read! Rule 1: PLAN Rule 2: CRAFT Rule 3: CHECK Techniques: Craft your • writing • • like I craft • my food • • • • • • • • Punctuation: . , : ; - ( ) “ ” ... ! ? 5 MINS PLANNING 25 MINS CRAFTING 5 MINS CHECKING YOU MUST KNOW THE DIFFERENT WRITING STYLES TECHNIQUES! You need to aim for 4-5 paragraphs for Q6 plus an introduction and conclusion. Don’t forget that markers are paid by the paper and they won’t spend hours on yours. They will decide within the first few lines what kind of grade they could be looking at... eg. you want them to be thinking... ‘this is good... they could be an A*.... and then if it’s not sustained... it’s an A... not…’this is dull’...! YOU MUST CRAFT YOUR WRITING AND MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT!