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I used black and
                                            white images for
                                            added effect and to
                                            make them stand
   I painted Penny’s nails in               out more. I thought
   on Picnik and I really think             that as they were
   it links in with the colour              having free posters
   theme well. It adds that                 they should get a
   extra bit of detail.                     preview of them.

As said before I kept the
title the same as I think it          I made this box to go with
works better. The only                my colour scheme, I
thing I changed with it               couldn’t make a black line
was the shadowing as it               on Comic Life so I made it
looked better without.                on fireworks, I also wanted
                                      a white dotted border and
Odd quotes attract the                had to make that from
reader as they are slightly           individual circles on
misleading, as when you               fireworks as well.
read that you’d think it was
very serious, but when you                The colour blue on the
read the article you realise              title of Penny and size
its not such a big deal but it            of the font makes it
reals the audience in.                    more focused on.

On my practise’s I included a
runner on the bottom of every             I had to include stories
one as I liked the idea of it. On         on the front cover as
my final design I included it but I       they attract people to
didn’t have a background on it            the magazine, I did
as I thought it looked better             originally have another
without.                                  one on the page but it
                                          looked to cluttered.
I thought it was
                               important to have
                               the date, the issue
                               number, and a I
                               made up a website
                               as it is a wider
As it was a contents           range of media.
page, its an insight
to what the rest of
the magazine has to                I had titles ‘NEWS’
offer, therefore I                 ‘EXCLUSIVE’ and
introduced it.                     ‘FEATURES’ as from
                                   research I thought
                                   that they were key
I divided the                      titles to a music
contents page                      magazine.
stories by a line that
is black and white, I
think this works well
and I think that the
layout of text and
the page number          For specific stories I had
looks effective.         pictures instead of just
                         having the whole page full of
                         writing. For the bottom two
 I used different font   stories I wrote a little bit as
 on this story as I      a teaser to the audience so
 thought it would        they know what is expected
 make it stand out       in the magazine. Some times
 more and show a         in a shop I’ll flick through a
 different side to the   magazine and which ever
 magazine.               looks best then I buy, so
                         having a contents that gives
                         just enough away for you to
                         buy it is key.
I included this
                            picture of Penny as
Again I did an              I thought it was
introduction as I           appropriate for the
thought that                interview with her.
people should know          I edited it in Picnik
a bit about her             as there was a
before reading the          piece of hair over
article.                    her face which
                            looked very
                            unprofessional.
I used a font that
looked like hand
writing to make it
look like I had
written it,          I added a quote to make people
therefore more       read the article. I added pictures
personal and less    of a night out to so that the
fromal.              audience could see what it was
                     like. A lot of double page spreads
                     have a whole picture as on the
                     one page and then text on the
                     other. Instead of having just one
                     image I had 4 images and text as
                     well.
For my interview, I asked the
questions in black and Penny’s
response was in white. There’s not
much I can say about this page as the
layout of text is very simple. I did
have the text just on the page
without a frame on but adding the
frame made it more separate and I
think it looked better. I kept this
page very simple as there was more
focus on the text itself. I also had an
image of penny with the name of her
album and a little bit of information
on it. For the text I used exclamation
marks and very informal text like
‘lurvee’ instead of love as the word
love was very serious for this context
so I tried to make it as personal as I
could.

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Final magazine review

  • 2. I used black and white images for added effect and to make them stand I painted Penny’s nails in out more. I thought on Picnik and I really think that as they were it links in with the colour having free posters theme well. It adds that they should get a extra bit of detail. preview of them. As said before I kept the title the same as I think it I made this box to go with works better. The only my colour scheme, I thing I changed with it couldn’t make a black line was the shadowing as it on Comic Life so I made it looked better without. on fireworks, I also wanted a white dotted border and Odd quotes attract the had to make that from reader as they are slightly individual circles on misleading, as when you fireworks as well. read that you’d think it was very serious, but when you The colour blue on the read the article you realise title of Penny and size its not such a big deal but it of the font makes it reals the audience in. more focused on. On my practise’s I included a runner on the bottom of every I had to include stories one as I liked the idea of it. On on the front cover as my final design I included it but I they attract people to didn’t have a background on it the magazine, I did as I thought it looked better originally have another without. one on the page but it looked to cluttered.
  • 3. I thought it was important to have the date, the issue number, and a I made up a website as it is a wider As it was a contents range of media. page, its an insight to what the rest of the magazine has to I had titles ‘NEWS’ offer, therefore I ‘EXCLUSIVE’ and introduced it. ‘FEATURES’ as from research I thought that they were key I divided the titles to a music contents page magazine. stories by a line that is black and white, I think this works well and I think that the layout of text and the page number For specific stories I had looks effective. pictures instead of just having the whole page full of writing. For the bottom two I used different font stories I wrote a little bit as on this story as I a teaser to the audience so thought it would they know what is expected make it stand out in the magazine. Some times more and show a in a shop I’ll flick through a different side to the magazine and which ever magazine. looks best then I buy, so having a contents that gives just enough away for you to buy it is key.
  • 4. I included this picture of Penny as Again I did an I thought it was introduction as I appropriate for the thought that interview with her. people should know I edited it in Picnik a bit about her as there was a before reading the piece of hair over article. her face which looked very unprofessional. I used a font that looked like hand writing to make it look like I had written it, I added a quote to make people therefore more read the article. I added pictures personal and less of a night out to so that the fromal. audience could see what it was like. A lot of double page spreads have a whole picture as on the one page and then text on the other. Instead of having just one image I had 4 images and text as well.
  • 5. For my interview, I asked the questions in black and Penny’s response was in white. There’s not much I can say about this page as the layout of text is very simple. I did have the text just on the page without a frame on but adding the frame made it more separate and I think it looked better. I kept this page very simple as there was more focus on the text itself. I also had an image of penny with the name of her album and a little bit of information on it. For the text I used exclamation marks and very informal text like ‘lurvee’ instead of love as the word love was very serious for this context so I tried to make it as personal as I could.