The document provides feedback on rejected shots for a magazine cover and billboard advertising. It notes issues such as negative space between subjects, subjects facing away or cut off, subjects not in character, wrong facial expressions, costumes and poses, poor lighting that does not illuminate faces, backgrounds that are too white, and shots that are the wrong aspect ratio or have lines that are not straight due to the camera angle. Overall, the feedback indicates the rejected shots do not meet conventional standards for magazine covers and billboards in terms of composition, subjects, and conveying the intended emotions or characterizations.

1. Final Ancillary Rejected
Shots
Danny Norton

2. Negative Space
•There is too much space
between mine and Lorna's
heads this is not conventional
of a magazine front cover
•Lorna is facing away at too
strong an angle, also her
height means that I would
struggle to place features
around the image.

3. Actors not in
character
•Actors aren’t in character
•Shot is landscape and should
be portrait for a magazine
front cover
•Tim is not central in the shot

4. Negative Space
Tim’s head is cut off meaning
that even if I did erase the
background part of his hair
and head would be missing.
There is too much negative
space between the two actors,
this is not conventional for a
billboard image as I would
struggle to position text
around it.

5. Wrong Facial
Expression
Lorna’s facial expression
conveys the wrong kind of
emotion.
She also has one strand of
hair in her face which stops
the audience from seeing all
of her emotion.
Lorna is leaning slightly
forwards this would look odd if
I edited this photo with
others.
Also the way she is holding
her hands is not conventional
of a billboard or TV magazine

6. Wrong Costume
The colour white makes
Amelia look sweet and
innocent this is not the look
that we want to create as in
the trailer her character is a
femme fatale style character

7. Silouette
The lighting does not
illuminate the actors face, and
the background is too white.
The actors pose is not
meeting the stereotypes of his
character.

8. Not following
straight lines
The horizontal lines of the end
of the car park are not
straight as the camera was
held at an angle this makes
the shot look unprofessional
However, the framing and use
of rule of thirds works well.