The document provides feedback on a script written by a student named Bro.tlg ]ic.l,*. It summarizes the strengths and areas for improvement in the script's narrative, characters, and format. For narrative, the feedback notes a clear narrative was established. For characters, it suggests making the main character more compelling. And for format, it did not provide any strengths but said the script could be laid out more clearly. It also gives additional comments on developing the characters further and providing more context through the narrative.