The document provides feedback on the strengths and areas for improvement of a pitch for a UK film. Key strengths identified include a well-structured narrative, engaging characters, and justification of why the film should be made. Areas for improvement include strengthening the style devices, acknowledging competition, and considering additional funding options. Further comments suggest focusing on engaging the target audience and preparing a polished final proposal.

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