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Digipak
Strengths:
• The sunset image links well to the website, and also matches
the night-fall/ werewolf idea in the video.
• The photographs look “very professional”, and “something that
can actually be found in the market today”.
• The bright and vibrant colours catch the eye.
• The different colours of the paper wolves fits with the
corporate identity.
• Editing effect of the photos is all consistent, fresh and new
• The cover photo is striking and enhanced by the coloured
editing of pastel colours
• The images of the forest bring the audience back to the video
and remind them of it.
Weaknesses:
• No spinal cover for the side of the digipak
• The front cover “could have been brighter or bolder.”
Website
Strengths
• A good range of contact information and links to social
networking sites on every page.
• Good inclusion of merchandise and the option to buy it, links to
website.
• A good use of Sound-cloud which allows instant access to the
band’s latest as well as older tracks.
• Good interactivity, tour information and ability to buy tickets.
• A good range of pages with different information and images.
• Professional photographs and images that link back to the
video.
Weaknesses
• People did not like the fact that the images displayed on the
Gallery Page are of the actual band The Good Natured- causes
confusion.
• Some suggestions to improve the website include replacing
images of the band with the images of the actress who is
representing the band in the music

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  • 3. Strengths: • The sunset image links well to the website, and also matches the night-fall/ werewolf idea in the video. • The photographs look “very professional”, and “something that can actually be found in the market today”. • The bright and vibrant colours catch the eye. • The different colours of the paper wolves fits with the corporate identity. • Editing effect of the photos is all consistent, fresh and new • The cover photo is striking and enhanced by the coloured editing of pastel colours • The images of the forest bring the audience back to the video and remind them of it.
  • 4. Weaknesses: • No spinal cover for the side of the digipak • The front cover “could have been brighter or bolder.”
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8. Strengths • A good range of contact information and links to social networking sites on every page. • Good inclusion of merchandise and the option to buy it, links to website. • A good use of Sound-cloud which allows instant access to the band’s latest as well as older tracks. • Good interactivity, tour information and ability to buy tickets. • A good range of pages with different information and images. • Professional photographs and images that link back to the video.
  • 9. Weaknesses • People did not like the fact that the images displayed on the Gallery Page are of the actual band The Good Natured- causes confusion. • Some suggestions to improve the website include replacing images of the band with the images of the actress who is representing the band in the music