Essay Structures TOU 304 Event Policy Essay: Pointers to note Only 3rd party writing Use paragraphing, sub headings to provide a good flow to your essay All arguments must be grounded on supporting academic or valid evidence. No generalised statements. Relevant referencing for all arguments. Every paragraph with a topic statement. Provide destination and event examples throughout the paper instead of one case study example. Min. 3 peer reviewed journals (2013-2016) and text book. A total of 10 academic sources required to pass adequately. Check spelling, sentence construction and language conventions. Check Urkund similarity index Ensure academic standards for structure of paper (e.g.font) Why is it important to consider the concept of legitimation when thinking about events? Introduction Topic sentence (government interest in events, need for policy and legitimation) Main objectives Main Arguments Definition of Public Policy Conclusion Reiteration of key points Scope and structure of essay Exploration of the concept of legitimation in terms of public policy approaches Why legitimation is important Discussion of where and when it might not be important Methods/strategies /tools for legitimation of events Discussion of issues/challenges with legitimation Some key concepts of legitimation deficit/crisis Consequences when legitimation is not given Statement of how the aims of the essay have been achieved What are the main weaknesses associated with economic impact assessments and how have they been addressed in recent years. Introduction Topic sentence (on event evaluation and importance) Main Arguments Discussion of EIA approaches Conclusion Reiteration of key points Main objectives Scope and structure of essay Strengths and focus on their weaknesses Ways in which weaknesses have been addressed over recent years Specific EIA tools Why are they used more often than other tools Alternative assessments used in events in the recent years Statement of how the aims of the essay have been achieved TOU304 Event Policy and Evaluation - Essay Essay Feedback Sheet Policy Q: Why is it important to consider the concept of legitimation when thinking about events? (Text p 61) Marginal Work (N) Adequate (P) Above Average (C) Thorough and Proficient (D) Excellent (HD) High level communication skills, through the application of grammatically correct and well edited writing. (30%) Third person style is used APA/Chicago style of referencing is applied In text In the Reference list There are 3 different scholarly/academic, peer reviewed references (2011/12/13/14/15/16) for a PASS There is an : Introduction: The key argument of the essay is presented Body: There is a logical progression in the development of the argument Key ideas are presented and discussed ...

1. Essay Structures
TOU 304
Event Policy
Essay: Pointers to note
Only 3rd party writing
Use paragraphing, sub headings to provide a good flow to your
essay
All arguments must be grounded on supporting academic or
valid evidence. No generalised statements. Relevant referencing
for all arguments.
Every paragraph with a topic statement.
Provide destination and event examples throughout the paper
instead of one case study example.
Min. 3 peer reviewed journals (2013-2016) and text book. A
total of 10 academic sources required to pass adequately.
Check spelling, sentence construction and language
conventions.
Check Urkund similarity index
Ensure academic standards for structure of paper (e.g.font)
Why is it important to consider the concept of legitimation
when thinking about events?
Introduction

2. Topic sentence (government interest in events, need for policy
and legitimation)
Main objectives
Main Arguments
Definition of Public Policy
Conclusion
Reiteration of key points
Scope and structure of essay
Exploration of the concept of legitimation in terms of public
policy approaches
Why legitimation is important
Discussion of where and when it might not be important
Methods/strategies /tools for legitimation of events

3. Discussion of issues/challenges with legitimation
Some key concepts of legitimation deficit/crisis
Consequences when legitimation is not given
Statement of how the aims of the essay have been achieved
What are the main weaknesses associated with economic impact
assessments and how have they been addressed in recent years.
Introduction
Topic sentence (on event evaluation and importance)
Main Arguments
Discussion of EIA approaches
Conclusion

4. Reiteration of key points
Main objectives
Scope and structure of essay
Strengths and focus on their weaknesses
Ways in which weaknesses have been addressed over recent
years
Specific EIA tools
Why are they used more often than other tools
Alternative assessments used in events in the recent years
Statement of how the aims of the essay have been achieved

5. TOU304 Event Policy and Evaluation - Essay
Essay Feedback Sheet
Policy
Q: Why is it important to consider the concept of legitimation
when thinking about
events? (Text p 61)
Marginal
Work
(N)
Adequate
(P)
Above
Average
(C)
Thorough
and
Proficient

6. (D)
Excellent
(HD)
High level communication skills, through the
application of grammatically correct and well
edited writing. (30%)
Third person style is used
APA/Chicago style of referencing is applied
In text
In the Reference list
There are 3 different scholarly/academic, peer
reviewed references (2011/12/13/14/15/16) for a
PASS
There is an :
Introduction:
The key argument of the essay is presented
Body:
There is a logical progression in the development
of the argument

7. Key ideas are presented and discussed
Conclusion:
The key argument is reiterated
Key points are linked and summarised
Grammar, spelling, paragraphs that are
appropriate:
Paragraphs contain one key idea
Paragraphs have an introductory topic sentence
Sentences contain one key point
English grammar is correct
TOU304 Event Policy and Evaluation - Essay
Marginal
Work
(N)
Adequate
(P)

8. Above
Average
(C)
Thorough
and
Proficient
(D)
Excellent
(HD)
QUESTION IS ADDRESSED
Your ability to discuss and demonstrate an
understanding of basic theoretical concepts
and themes in the study and application of
event policy and planning. (30%)
The essay is addressed in terms of Independent
study:
Introduction to aims of essay
Broad Discussion of the global interest in events
as a policy tool.

9. Provide a definition of public policy
Provide a definition of the concept of legitimation
Body of the essay
Specific discussion of why legitimation is
important
Discuss geographical regions where it may not be
important
Suggest methods/approaches for legitimation of
events
Discuss issues of legitimation.
Conclusion
Reiteration of key points
Statement of how aims of the essay have been
met
INDEPENDENT LEARNING IS REFLECTED.
The development of your research skills
through interpretation and
assessment/evaluation of academic material.
(40%)
Statements of ‘fact’ are supported

10. Sources of information are shown
There is evidence of a ‘knowledge’ base through
academic literature support
There is evidence of constructive critique of the
academic literature.
There is evidence of independent learning.
Urkand Academic Integrity support
CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENT
Indicative Grade:_______
Subject to Moderation.
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1 B Workshop Participation Self - Assessment Pass/Fail
You are required to complete the self-assessment form for
workshop
participation, the form is available on the LMS and needs to be
completed
and brought to class in hard copy for the tutor in week 4 and

11. also posted to
the LMS under your class section. This will not contribute to
your grade
whilst it will provide a discussion point between you and your
tutor in
Vns ^
terms y°ur participation grade.
-LAW, 2. Essay (1000-1500 words) 30%
^ -*uy J Due Session 5
The relevance of policy and evaluation for Festival and Event
planners
i You must include at least 3 different scholarly/academic, peer-
reviewed,
journal articles as references in your essay. These references
need to be
IO jcurr * I other than those in your text book and from
2013/14/15/16. This essay
must be written in the third person , with an introduction, a
main body and a
conclusion. You are required to provide a detailed Reference
List using the
APA style of referencing (refer httn:. •libguidevinurdoch -
edu.au/APAL
This essay aims to develop the learning outcomes of the unit
with particular~l | orhCU. emphasis on
^'Hbodc i s q a) Your ability to discuss and demonstrate an
understanding ofHtn s-/ ijg basic theoretical concepts and
themes in the study and
application of event policy and planning. (30%)

12. b) High level communication skills, through the application of
grammatically correct and well edited writing. (30%)
c) The development of your research skills through
interpretation
and assessment/evaluation of academic material. (40%)
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