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ASSIGNMENT 3 
ERROR ANALYSIS IN 
L2 WRITING 
STUDENT’S NAME: María de los Angeles Betancur 
Murillo. 
SECC.: ED1106C_01 
2 November, 2014
“THE EBOLA OUTBREAK” 
The video “The Ebola outbreak” made by BBC 6 Minute English, in August 28th, 
2014 from “LinkEngPark” states that Ebola virus, discovered in 1976, do not have any cure 
yet and it is responsible for the high increment of mortality in Africa, mainly on the West 
side. Thus, WHO (World Health Organisation) and the uses of experimental drugs have 
introduced a dilemma of big proportions to the humanity: Is it better to apply the 
medications to the sickest people with death risk or to those who are not so sick to die? 
When considering this dilemma it is important to have in mind that these drugs have not 
been approved, and their side effects are unknown. 
In my opinion, Ebola virus has not been treated with the relevance that it demands 
by the science. Because even when currently technology allows experts to develop 
medicine and health by leaps and bounds, scientists are not able to prevent this mortal 
virus. In fact, Ebola’s origin and causes have not been found yet; although specialists 
postulate that it is caused by some type of bats from Republic of Congo. But does Ebola 
virus win the fight against modern science? I really do not think so. 
Furthermore, I felt intrigued by the event that people are dying in places that are 
widely known because of their overpopulation and poorness (among others negative 
factors). This idea made me think about governments, society and racism due to the fact 
that Ebola virus has killed black people only. Being that, a little quantity of white people 
has been infected they are always cured, as some popular cases that happened in USA and 
Spain; while, on West Africa (Guinea, Liberia ad Sierra Leone) a half of the population has 
been infected with death results. 
It is important to take in account that the use of non-approved drugs to cure this 
class of diseases is applied under certain conditions only. On the one hand, it is necessary to 
sign a waiver which states that governments and doctors are not considered liable for 
unexpected consequences. Does it mean that responsibility is just charged to sick people? 
And, what happen if those people are too sick to sign the permission? They are doomed to 
die sadly abandoned by everyone. On the other hand, it is essential to decide if it is better to
apply medications to the sickest with death risk or to who are not so sick to die, which 
affirms an ethic-social trouble difficult to solve.

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  • 1. Pedagogía Media en Inglés ASSIGNMENT 3 ERROR ANALYSIS IN L2 WRITING STUDENT’S NAME: María de los Angeles Betancur Murillo. SECC.: ED1106C_01 2 November, 2014
  • 2. “THE EBOLA OUTBREAK” The video “The Ebola outbreak” made by BBC 6 Minute English, in August 28th, 2014 from “LinkEngPark” states that Ebola virus, discovered in 1976, do not have any cure yet and it is responsible for the high increment of mortality in Africa, mainly on the West side. Thus, WHO (World Health Organisation) and the uses of experimental drugs have introduced a dilemma of big proportions to the humanity: Is it better to apply the medications to the sickest people with death risk or to those who are not so sick to die? When considering this dilemma it is important to have in mind that these drugs have not been approved, and their side effects are unknown. In my opinion, Ebola virus has not been treated with the relevance that it demands by the science. Because even when currently technology allows experts to develop medicine and health by leaps and bounds, scientists are not able to prevent this mortal virus. In fact, Ebola’s origin and causes have not been found yet; although specialists postulate that it is caused by some type of bats from Republic of Congo. But does Ebola virus win the fight against modern science? I really do not think so. Furthermore, I felt intrigued by the event that people are dying in places that are widely known because of their overpopulation and poorness (among others negative factors). This idea made me think about governments, society and racism due to the fact that Ebola virus has killed black people only. Being that, a little quantity of white people has been infected they are always cured, as some popular cases that happened in USA and Spain; while, on West Africa (Guinea, Liberia ad Sierra Leone) a half of the population has been infected with death results. It is important to take in account that the use of non-approved drugs to cure this class of diseases is applied under certain conditions only. On the one hand, it is necessary to sign a waiver which states that governments and doctors are not considered liable for unexpected consequences. Does it mean that responsibility is just charged to sick people? And, what happen if those people are too sick to sign the permission? They are doomed to die sadly abandoned by everyone. On the other hand, it is essential to decide if it is better to
  • 3. apply medications to the sickest with death risk or to who are not so sick to die, which affirms an ethic-social trouble difficult to solve.