Monday, November 7, 2011

Grammar: Subject-Verb Agreement
   Writing: The Writing Process;
       Revision and Editing
Housekeeping
• Hand in your work from Chapter 2, Activity
  1, 4, or 5.
• Monday is not a holiday
Subject-Verb Agreement, p. 464-467
• Singular subjects must take a singular verb.
  – I walk fast
  – you walk fast
  – he/she walks fast
• Plural subjects must take a plural verb.
  – We walk fast
  – they walk fast
Mistakes in Subject-Verb Agreement. . .
. . . usually occur in the following situations:
1. When words come between the subject and
   verb
2. When a verb comes before a subject
3. With compound subjects
4. With indefinite pronouns
1. When words come between the
       subject and verb (p. 464) . . .
. . . subject-verb agreement does not change.

Ex: The noisy dogs get on my nerves.
Ex: The noisy dogs in my neighbourhood get on my nerves.
         (plural subject)              (plural verb)


The words “in my neighbourhood” form a
prepositional phrase that does not affect s-v
agreement.
Reminder: Prepositional phrases
• Prepositions are words that usually indicate time
  and space relationships.
Ex: before, under, with, behind, in, of, etc.
• Prepositional phrases are word groups that begin
  with prepositions
  (they usually include an object and adjectives or
  adverbs)
Ex: during class, behind the old bridge
When words come between the
       subject and verb (Cont’d.)
• When trying to find the subject of a sentence, it
  can help to cross out the prepositional phrases:

Nell, with her three dogs close behind, runs around
the park every day.

The seams in my new coat have split after only two
years.
Activity 1, p. 464
Do as many others as you can finish in 5 minutes.
1. The decisions of the judge seem/seems . . .
2. The flakes in this cereal taste/tastes . . .
3. The woman with the dark sunglasses is/are . . .
4. Many people in Europe speak/speaks . . .
5. A hamburger with a large order of fries is/are . . .
2. When a verb comes before a subject . . .
  . . . it must still agree with the subject!

  Ex: On Sasha’s desk were two books.
  Ex: There are many sushi restaurants in Vancouver.

  To try to find the subject, ask yourself who or what does the
  verb refer to.

  Ex:   Q: What was on Sasha’s desk?
        A: The books.
  (Two books were on Sasha’s desk)

  So, the verb must agree with “books” (plural) not Sasha
  (singular)!!
Activity, p. 465
Do as many others as you can finish in 5
minutes.
1. What is/are . . .
2. Among the guests was/were . . .
3. Where do/does . . .
4. There is/are . . .
5. In that grave rest/rests . . .
3. With compound subjects, p. 466

Situation 1: When two subjects are joined by
and they take a plural verb:

Ex: Maple syrup and sweet butter taste
delicious on pancakes.

Ex: Mike and Sharon have a lot of work to do.
With compound subjects, p. 466
Situation 2: In contrast, when subjects are joined
by either . . . or, neither . . . nor, not only . . . but
also, the verb agrees with the subject closest to the
verb:
                  (plural)         (singular) (singular)
Ex: Either the students or the teacher takes a day
off every month.

               (singular)     (plural) (plural)
Ex: Either the teacher or the students take a day off
every month.
Activity, p. 466.
Do as many others as you can finish in 5 minutes.
1. Our cats and dog stays/stay . . .
2. Is/Are the birthday cake . . .
3. Staples and Scotch tape holds/hold . . .
4. Rent and car insurance was/were . . .
5. Neither the students nor the instructor
   wants/want . . .
4. With indefinite pronouns
• These words always take singular verbs:
 “-one” words “-body”     “-thing”
              words       words
 None         Nobody      Nothing      Each
 One          Anybody     Anything     Either
 Anyone       Everybody   Everything   Neither
 Everyone     Somebody    Something
 Someone
• However: “both” always takes a plural verb!
Activity 4, p. 467
Do as many others as you can finish in 5 minutes.
1. Everybody at my new school is/are . . .
2. Neither of those mattresses feel/feels . . .
3. Nobody in my family knows/know . . .
4. Each of the children needs/need . . .
5. Something about Robbie’s story sounds/sound . . .
Break
Homework
    English Skills Chapter 2, p. 18-32
• Hand-in the prewriting assignment (Choice of
  1, 4, or 5) /5 marks
• We will review the answers for activities
  6, 7, and 8 now
Chapter 2, p. 18
The Writing Process
• Prewriting
• Drafting
• Revising
• Editing

See the purple box on p. 18
Example of Freewriting
• I am so tired but iam starting to get more
  energy I should have had a snack at the break
  starting to feel awake oh I see out of the
  corner of my eye Sandra is writing and I just
  heard ionnis laugh. well hmm. I was going to
  give the topic occupyb vancouver just leave
  the mistake stehre.
Writing a First Draft, p. 27
Activity 6
1. topic sentence/main idea
2. ten hours; two ten-minute breaks
3. physicaly (answers may vary)
4. end
5. Details
Revising, p. 28-30
Activity 7, p. 30
1. first of all, finally
2. unity, At the same time . . . loaded
3. support, over sixty hours a week, on the loading
   dock, near-zero-degree temperatures
4. that made the job a worst one
5. an unpaid half hour for lunch
6. because
7. I felt this isolation
8. an ugly, bitter
Editing, p. 32
Activity 8
1. spelling
2. commas
3. plus just a quarter extra
4. spelled (or written) out
5. spent two hours by myself cleaning
Chapter 2, p. 18
The Writing Process
• Prewriting
• Drafting
• Revising     [Check Unity, Support, Coherence]

• Editing      [Check Sentence Skills]
Revision and Editing Assignment
               (Homework)
1. Review my feedback on your paragraph.
2. Refer to the handout “Editing Marks” for help; then ask me if
   you need more explanation.
3. Revise: make changes to improve the content of the
   paragraph . [Unity, Support, Coherence]
4. Edit: make changes to improve the
   grammar, punctuation, usage, and spelling of the paragraph.
    [Sentence Skills]

5. You should do step 5 and 6 in two separate “passes.” *stages+
6. Hand in your all of your work, with your final version stapled
   on the top.
Homework
For this Wednesday
• Be prepared to do in-class writing about “The Tell-Tale
  Heart”
• Bring the other two short stories and your “Fiction Terms”
  handout to class

For Monday
• Revision and Editing Assignment (See previous slide)
• Read English Skills, Chapter 14 “Description” (p. 268-272);
  complete the questions on p. 271-272
• Complete the rest of the Subject-Verb Agreement activities
  in Chapter 464-469; Answers will be provided on the
  website

E10 nov7 2011

  • 1.
    Monday, November 7,2011 Grammar: Subject-Verb Agreement Writing: The Writing Process; Revision and Editing
  • 2.
    Housekeeping • Hand inyour work from Chapter 2, Activity 1, 4, or 5. • Monday is not a holiday
  • 3.
    Subject-Verb Agreement, p.464-467 • Singular subjects must take a singular verb. – I walk fast – you walk fast – he/she walks fast • Plural subjects must take a plural verb. – We walk fast – they walk fast
  • 4.
    Mistakes in Subject-VerbAgreement. . . . . . usually occur in the following situations: 1. When words come between the subject and verb 2. When a verb comes before a subject 3. With compound subjects 4. With indefinite pronouns
  • 5.
    1. When wordscome between the subject and verb (p. 464) . . . . . . subject-verb agreement does not change. Ex: The noisy dogs get on my nerves. Ex: The noisy dogs in my neighbourhood get on my nerves. (plural subject) (plural verb) The words “in my neighbourhood” form a prepositional phrase that does not affect s-v agreement.
  • 6.
    Reminder: Prepositional phrases •Prepositions are words that usually indicate time and space relationships. Ex: before, under, with, behind, in, of, etc. • Prepositional phrases are word groups that begin with prepositions (they usually include an object and adjectives or adverbs) Ex: during class, behind the old bridge
  • 7.
    When words comebetween the subject and verb (Cont’d.) • When trying to find the subject of a sentence, it can help to cross out the prepositional phrases: Nell, with her three dogs close behind, runs around the park every day. The seams in my new coat have split after only two years.
  • 8.
    Activity 1, p.464 Do as many others as you can finish in 5 minutes. 1. The decisions of the judge seem/seems . . . 2. The flakes in this cereal taste/tastes . . . 3. The woman with the dark sunglasses is/are . . . 4. Many people in Europe speak/speaks . . . 5. A hamburger with a large order of fries is/are . . .
  • 9.
    2. When averb comes before a subject . . . . . . it must still agree with the subject! Ex: On Sasha’s desk were two books. Ex: There are many sushi restaurants in Vancouver. To try to find the subject, ask yourself who or what does the verb refer to. Ex: Q: What was on Sasha’s desk? A: The books. (Two books were on Sasha’s desk) So, the verb must agree with “books” (plural) not Sasha (singular)!!
  • 10.
    Activity, p. 465 Doas many others as you can finish in 5 minutes. 1. What is/are . . . 2. Among the guests was/were . . . 3. Where do/does . . . 4. There is/are . . . 5. In that grave rest/rests . . .
  • 11.
    3. With compoundsubjects, p. 466 Situation 1: When two subjects are joined by and they take a plural verb: Ex: Maple syrup and sweet butter taste delicious on pancakes. Ex: Mike and Sharon have a lot of work to do.
  • 12.
    With compound subjects,p. 466 Situation 2: In contrast, when subjects are joined by either . . . or, neither . . . nor, not only . . . but also, the verb agrees with the subject closest to the verb: (plural) (singular) (singular) Ex: Either the students or the teacher takes a day off every month. (singular) (plural) (plural) Ex: Either the teacher or the students take a day off every month.
  • 13.
    Activity, p. 466. Doas many others as you can finish in 5 minutes. 1. Our cats and dog stays/stay . . . 2. Is/Are the birthday cake . . . 3. Staples and Scotch tape holds/hold . . . 4. Rent and car insurance was/were . . . 5. Neither the students nor the instructor wants/want . . .
  • 14.
    4. With indefinitepronouns • These words always take singular verbs: “-one” words “-body” “-thing” words words None Nobody Nothing Each One Anybody Anything Either Anyone Everybody Everything Neither Everyone Somebody Something Someone • However: “both” always takes a plural verb!
  • 15.
    Activity 4, p.467 Do as many others as you can finish in 5 minutes. 1. Everybody at my new school is/are . . . 2. Neither of those mattresses feel/feels . . . 3. Nobody in my family knows/know . . . 4. Each of the children needs/need . . . 5. Something about Robbie’s story sounds/sound . . .
  • 16.
  • 17.
    Homework English Skills Chapter 2, p. 18-32 • Hand-in the prewriting assignment (Choice of 1, 4, or 5) /5 marks • We will review the answers for activities 6, 7, and 8 now
  • 18.
    Chapter 2, p.18 The Writing Process • Prewriting • Drafting • Revising • Editing See the purple box on p. 18
  • 19.
    Example of Freewriting •I am so tired but iam starting to get more energy I should have had a snack at the break starting to feel awake oh I see out of the corner of my eye Sandra is writing and I just heard ionnis laugh. well hmm. I was going to give the topic occupyb vancouver just leave the mistake stehre.
  • 20.
    Writing a FirstDraft, p. 27 Activity 6 1. topic sentence/main idea 2. ten hours; two ten-minute breaks 3. physicaly (answers may vary) 4. end 5. Details
  • 21.
    Revising, p. 28-30 Activity7, p. 30 1. first of all, finally 2. unity, At the same time . . . loaded 3. support, over sixty hours a week, on the loading dock, near-zero-degree temperatures 4. that made the job a worst one 5. an unpaid half hour for lunch 6. because 7. I felt this isolation 8. an ugly, bitter
  • 22.
    Editing, p. 32 Activity8 1. spelling 2. commas 3. plus just a quarter extra 4. spelled (or written) out 5. spent two hours by myself cleaning
  • 23.
    Chapter 2, p.18 The Writing Process • Prewriting • Drafting • Revising [Check Unity, Support, Coherence] • Editing [Check Sentence Skills]
  • 24.
    Revision and EditingAssignment (Homework) 1. Review my feedback on your paragraph. 2. Refer to the handout “Editing Marks” for help; then ask me if you need more explanation. 3. Revise: make changes to improve the content of the paragraph . [Unity, Support, Coherence] 4. Edit: make changes to improve the grammar, punctuation, usage, and spelling of the paragraph. [Sentence Skills] 5. You should do step 5 and 6 in two separate “passes.” *stages+ 6. Hand in your all of your work, with your final version stapled on the top.
  • 25.
    Homework For this Wednesday •Be prepared to do in-class writing about “The Tell-Tale Heart” • Bring the other two short stories and your “Fiction Terms” handout to class For Monday • Revision and Editing Assignment (See previous slide) • Read English Skills, Chapter 14 “Description” (p. 268-272); complete the questions on p. 271-272 • Complete the rest of the Subject-Verb Agreement activities in Chapter 464-469; Answers will be provided on the website