The individual gathered feedback on their DVD cover from posts on Facebook to get opinions from a variety of people locally and globally. Most comments praised the cover's design and incorporation of skating elements, though some suggested changing the random capitalization in the text and adjusting the font. Taking this feedback, the individual made revisions like removing capitalization and adjusting a skater's proportions. Overall, the Facebook feedback helped improve the DVD cover's professionalism and appeal to different audiences.

1. Audience Feedback:
The following slides show comments
and view points from individuals from a
variety of places around the Uk...

2. Facebook comment feedback:
Getting a range of comments on a socialising website helped me to improve
my model in many ways.
When uploading my own DVD cover onto Facebook I gathered both good
and negative comments in which I could improve upon. This made me
For apart of my audience feedback I used an
understand what my audience wants to see included within the DVD cover
effective way of including and taking advantage of
itself.
the new digital media platform and advertised my
The feedback given were both from a skating targeted audience but also
DVD cover on a socialising website known as
from individuals of different types of genre’s. This helped me see the
Facebook.
similarities and differences ( if any at all) between different people. When
By doing this it gave me an opportunity to get a
reading through the comments there were no disagreements and they all
variety of opinions from individuals both locally
seemed to agree on the same things.
and globally. This expanded my audience feedback
so I had a range of comments that could either
make my model more professional in some cases
and to improve it overall.
The above is what my final DVD cover looked like.

3. The feedback in which I got back from the advertising on Facebook
was both positive and negative. The other things in which I got was
improvements for my DVD cover. This came in useful when looking
back at my DVD back and front and looking for ways to improve my
model in any way possible.
For this I asked specific individuals for a detailed feedback on my
DVD cover in which only one of them got back to me. I was deeply
grateful for this.
The common feedback was the text that was included within the
DVD cover and the random capital letters in the middle of words.
Whereas I thought this added to the DVD cover others thought this
did not match at all and suggested me to get rid of this and to just
keep it to lower case letters. After thinking about this I too thought
this was right as the randomness did make it look different but also
made it look unprofessional in some aspects and so I decided to get
rid of this.
Another comment that I took on board was that Ffion the skater on
the front cover looked Fatter then she usually did. This was not a
problem as I thought it looked fine but a person I got feedback off
mentioned this and so I changed it to please my target audience. This
was simply done by Photoshop and the stretch tool.
Another comment I got back from the feedback was the
text and the font. Individuals wanted me to change the font
altogether which wasn’t generally a problem at all it was All of the audience feedback from Facebook was helpful in many
just that I had to do other tasks such as finish my music ways and in some aspects they helped me to improve my
video for the deadline so that was my main focus. secondary task of producing my DVD cover in many ways.
Yet again another problem or improvement was the
colours. When adding the layers on top of each other some
of the colour was lost in the process. In order for me to get
it right I had to do the effect again but this time make a
certain layer brighter but going to the effect toolbar.

4. Actual Audience Comments and Views:
“ I think it’s Brilliant, I like how
you incorporated the skating “ It’s different...” – Heather James, Small Heath,
concept of the video into the Birmingham
CD/DVD as it shows consistency ”
– Khalid Daley Birmingham “ Awesome” – Jeremy Francis, America, Florida
“I like the use of effects and colours used within the DVD
cover” – Annette James, Small Heath, Birmingham
“ Right... It generally looks really nice, the “ Love the pic of Ffion, that's awesome.
composition is really well thought through. You Only part I don’t like personally is the
should seriously consider changing the font... Or font and random capitals “ – Kirsty
at least stop using capitals in random places, that Pullen, North Birmingham
looks really unprofessional.
Also I know I just put loads of things down but
those are minor things I really like your work! It
looks amazing, it’s just those little things that
could ( in my personal opinion) improve it a little
bit.” – Bartosz Platak, Suffolk, Ipswich