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- Misty:
- Change writing to make it
more visible.
- Change some images so
model isn’t on all the sides.
- Like the photography as it
seems professional.
- Like content as it isn’t too
much.
- Jessica:
- Make it more simple with less
model
- Change title colour of font.
- Like the front cover.
- Pictures are quite clear.
- Ilhan:
- The wall and models clothes
are too similar, the model
doesn’t pop out.
- Positioning of shots is very
well.
- Model is very into it and fits
the part.
- Samira:
- Writing hard to see.
- Costume is nice.
- Close-ups are the best part
as quality is good.
- Zowda:
- Costume and background
clash and are too similar.
- Grey background might look
better.
- Photos are nice because of
quality.
- Range of photos.
- Pragna:
- Make the background pop
out a bit
- Writing is hard to see
- Like the font
- Like the photography on the
whole digipak
- Kanaiya:
- The model is shown too
much.
- Make the cover more
exclusive and more
symbolism perhaps.
- Like the spacing on the
tracklist and font.
- Like the range of shots and
angles.
- Hariyali:
- Can’t see writing sometimes.
- Tracklist is over her face.
- Very simplistic and that’s
good as it keeps focus.
- Not too much writing which is
good.
- Saad:
- Hard to see writing.
- Hair covers tracklist.
- Likes photography as it is a
range.
- Like the placement of
everything.
- Monica:
- Remove the tracklist off her
face.
- Maybe change colour of
writing.
- Very professional.
- Font is quite unique and
appealing.

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Digipak draft 1 feedback

  • 1. - Misty: - Change writing to make it more visible. - Change some images so model isn’t on all the sides. - Like the photography as it seems professional. - Like content as it isn’t too much. - Jessica: - Make it more simple with less model - Change title colour of font. - Like the front cover. - Pictures are quite clear. - Ilhan: - The wall and models clothes are too similar, the model doesn’t pop out. - Positioning of shots is very well. - Model is very into it and fits the part. - Samira: - Writing hard to see. - Costume is nice. - Close-ups are the best part as quality is good. - Zowda: - Costume and background clash and are too similar. - Grey background might look better. - Photos are nice because of quality. - Range of photos. - Pragna: - Make the background pop out a bit - Writing is hard to see - Like the font - Like the photography on the whole digipak - Kanaiya: - The model is shown too much. - Make the cover more exclusive and more symbolism perhaps. - Like the spacing on the tracklist and font. - Like the range of shots and angles. - Hariyali: - Can’t see writing sometimes. - Tracklist is over her face. - Very simplistic and that’s good as it keeps focus. - Not too much writing which is good. - Saad: - Hard to see writing. - Hair covers tracklist. - Likes photography as it is a range. - Like the placement of everything. - Monica: - Remove the tracklist off her face. - Maybe change colour of writing. - Very professional. - Font is quite unique and appealing.