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Classmates
James - “I particularly liked the background of the photo
and how the artist was captured at the same location
used in the actual music video”
Joe – “I like the font you used, however I think you could
have ordered the writing better”
Amy – “I like that you have used social networks for
people to follow the artist in more depth”
Kariena – “I particularly like how Josh is captured and the
way he is slightly to the left in order for their to be room
for further information.
Friends
Mark – “Overall I really like it, however, some of the
writing is hard to see due to the background.”
Adam – “I liked the background as a long shot because it
seems reminiscent, much like the song itself.”
Tommy – “I enjoyed the fact that the have used an
accomplished music magazine to review the song.”
Jess – “I like the fact that the same outfit is used in the
advertising poster as the actual music video which shows
correlation.”
Evaluation
Overall I found the feedback really constructive
and there was a mixture of good and bad which
allows us to improve. For example, next time we
will make sure the writing and background does
not clash so much or use a better effect to
counteract to it and we will think more in depth
about the order of what we write.
However, most the feedback was very positive
and we are really pleased with the end product.

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  • 2. Feedback We showed our work to friends and asked them to give us feedback on our digipack advertisement. It is important to find out where you have gone wrong and what you could improve from people around you in order to better your work the next time. Feedback can be critical when aiming to improve in all tasks.
  • 3. Classmates James - “I particularly liked the background of the photo and how the artist was captured at the same location used in the actual music video” Joe – “I like the font you used, however I think you could have ordered the writing better” Amy – “I like that you have used social networks for people to follow the artist in more depth” Kariena – “I particularly like how Josh is captured and the way he is slightly to the left in order for their to be room for further information.
  • 4. Friends Mark – “Overall I really like it, however, some of the writing is hard to see due to the background.” Adam – “I liked the background as a long shot because it seems reminiscent, much like the song itself.” Tommy – “I enjoyed the fact that the have used an accomplished music magazine to review the song.” Jess – “I like the fact that the same outfit is used in the advertising poster as the actual music video which shows correlation.”
  • 5. Evaluation Overall I found the feedback really constructive and there was a mixture of good and bad which allows us to improve. For example, next time we will make sure the writing and background does not clash so much or use a better effect to counteract to it and we will think more in depth about the order of what we write. However, most the feedback was very positive and we are really pleased with the end product.