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Detective Paragraph 
Assignment Requirements: 
Length = One paragraph (5-7 well written sentences) 
Purpose = Describe your detective (left to right or top to bottom, in detail) 
Traits scored = Ideas/Content, and Organization 
PREWRITE: “Describe your Detective” handout with picture 
FIRST DRAFT: The goal of a first draft is to get all of your ideas and details down on 
paper. Follow the guidelines below: 
- Start with a topic sentence that catches your reader’s interest 
- Arrange the descriptive sentences in the body according to location. 
Include details you gathered on your “Describe a Detective” 
- End with a sentence that keeps the reader thinking about the topic 
REVISING: When you revise, consider how well you’ve used ideas, organization, 
voice, word choice, and sentence fluency in your first draft. 
Revise your paragraph using these questions as a guide: 
1. Is my topic sentence clear? 
2. Have I organized the details in my paragraph using order of location? 
3. Do I sound interested in the topic? 
4. Do I use specific nouns, verbs, and adjectives? 
5. Do I use complete sentences that read smoothly? 
EDITING: When you edit, check for punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and 
grammar errors. Also ask someone else to check your writing for errors. 
Edit your paragraph using these questions as a guide: 
Punctuation 
1. Do I use end punctuation after all my sentences? 
2. Do I use commas correctly? 
3. Do I use apostrophes to show possession(boy’s bike)?
Capitalization 
1. Do I start all my sentences with capital letters? 
2. Do I capitalize all proper nouns? 
Spelling 
1. Have I spelled all my words correctly? 
2. Have I double-checked words my spell checker might miss? 
Grammar 
1. Do I use the right word (to, too, two)? 
2. Do my subjects and verbs agree in number?

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Detective paragraph

  • 1. Detective Paragraph Assignment Requirements: Length = One paragraph (5-7 well written sentences) Purpose = Describe your detective (left to right or top to bottom, in detail) Traits scored = Ideas/Content, and Organization PREWRITE: “Describe your Detective” handout with picture FIRST DRAFT: The goal of a first draft is to get all of your ideas and details down on paper. Follow the guidelines below: - Start with a topic sentence that catches your reader’s interest - Arrange the descriptive sentences in the body according to location. Include details you gathered on your “Describe a Detective” - End with a sentence that keeps the reader thinking about the topic REVISING: When you revise, consider how well you’ve used ideas, organization, voice, word choice, and sentence fluency in your first draft. Revise your paragraph using these questions as a guide: 1. Is my topic sentence clear? 2. Have I organized the details in my paragraph using order of location? 3. Do I sound interested in the topic? 4. Do I use specific nouns, verbs, and adjectives? 5. Do I use complete sentences that read smoothly? EDITING: When you edit, check for punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar errors. Also ask someone else to check your writing for errors. Edit your paragraph using these questions as a guide: Punctuation 1. Do I use end punctuation after all my sentences? 2. Do I use commas correctly? 3. Do I use apostrophes to show possession(boy’s bike)?
  • 2. Capitalization 1. Do I start all my sentences with capital letters? 2. Do I capitalize all proper nouns? Spelling 1. Have I spelled all my words correctly? 2. Have I double-checked words my spell checker might miss? Grammar 1. Do I use the right word (to, too, two)? 2. Do my subjects and verbs agree in number?